Taiwan - China Steel Headquarter 2.0

Welcome to the BAT! We are glad to have you. This is a great start but there are a few things that need to change.

There's good modeling but it lacks details, the texturing isn't too great and the lotting is "meh" but so are most people's first uploads. Mine was no different so I can't blame you.

I recommend opening up a BAT thread in the BAT forums and you can really improve there. Having other people critique your work is one of the best ways to improve. You could become a really good BATer if you do that. You've built a solid foundation in modeling already, now let's see what you can do next I'm hoping to see something pretty dern nice

wireframe cool

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u are right!! I will re-texture next time.
thx for your advise ^__^

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darn42, on , said:

Welcome to the BAT!..........

u are right!! I will re-texture next time.
thx for your advise ^__^
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Or you could go back and improve it and then update this release.

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Or you could go back and improve it and then update this release.
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I'm doing it. thx

so should i wait to download this? How long till a updated version? I def want it!

kagami, I would suggest posting your update so that people can judge it before you release it again. Don't be in a rush to rerelease. The way you judge something to be that you made is not going to be as accurate as another person's view because they won't be biased. That's why I always like to get other's opinions on stuff I make.

Wow! That looks great! I will most likely download this!

How did you get the thumbnail picture on the STEX so large?

Anyway... Pretty good!

Holy Moly Batman-

Nice work & darn42 explained the issues pretty well.Try & work on it a bit more kagami.

Yea, one of the best ways to know if you're done is to compare your work to something that you know is good. Something by jasoncw or simfox or girafe probably. When you compare them, think about what they did that you didn't, like taking time on textures, reflections on windows, some small details, roof junk, etc. Once you think that your BAT has all those things that those really really good people have, I would say that it's ready to release. If you don't want to open a thread, just make sure to hold yourself to a very high standard to make up for the lack of feedback from others.

wahh! not bad for the first bat.. I say your on your path to becoming a positive Batter with that attitude.. Don't worry, this is only your first, and I know how hard it can be to get starrted on BAtting... but guess what, you've [pretty much passed the hard part! Now all you have to do now is improve and work on it and you will one day be a great Batter. As well as that... its nice to see another building from Taiwan... :)

It's definitely better. Could be improved more but oh well... still a good first BAT. You should take down the old thumbnails though

I like the dark version very much, the onyl thing you need to work on is the roof, like using some roof junk and better roof texture, perhaps a smoother one, will make your BAT a 5 stars file.

I think you should use a white-clear texture for the facade (walls)

great start!

AWESOME! I think what will make it even better, though, is adding the difference in the height of the facade in the 4 "block" corners compared to the center gaps.

Stunning!

Can you replace the file, because theres nothing in the link... thank you

File has been re-added. Should download correctly.