EXITO Supermarkets - COLOMBIA 1.0

buena parcero

todo bien mijo!!.... ahí perdonarán que es un Landmark, pero por un error en el B.A.T se creo un espacio invisible que no pude quitar y por eso es que tiene una zona verde muy grande...

si alguien es tan amable y me dice como hacer para que eso no pase.. SE LO AGRADECERÍA MUCHO

Building is overscaled; textures are very poor, oversaturated and lifeless, and your roof needs more equipment. The lot is a bit of a disaster. It looks like you have some technical skill as you can transit enable, but the lot is a vast featureless expanse that seems to have no bearing on reality. I mean would a massive supermarket like this only have one tiny row of parking, yet massive plazas paved in two different types of material (with no logical reasoning to the design). Further, are you telling me that loading trucks and garbage trucks drive across grass to get to their respective loading areas as well? You should seek advice in the BAT Open Discussion forums to improve upon you work.

is my first file men... i dared today... i am a law sttudent, i don have idea to GMAX, OR AUTOCAD and others designer plataforms...

i recognize that file... so to clear... YOUR CONSTRUCTIVE OPINION IS VERY IMPORTANT FOR ME.. is only matter of time to improve myself

I'm with His Divine Hand ...
Dear Andres052490 - You can create Your own BAT thread on Simtropolis and show Your works for Simtropolians before uploading here ...
And I think - Your first EXITO looks fine for first step, You can do real something fine works tomorrow ...
Good Luck ...

I like it- 4/5- I see however some texture work is needed- I notice a lack of parking- extend the parking for more spaces instead of that big plaza. Overall it looks good- Are there any jobs- I like having jobs in a download. Add more windows. Overall however the quality is really good. Keep up the good work.

Que bien !!! halgo mas de mi hermosa tierra

Lack of parking is not a problem. Better to use modular parking lots to create the size parking you need, rather than adding extra to the lot.

Also the bright yellow is not over saturated... this is one of the major supermarket chains in NZ... they are definitely very bright yellow.
[img]http://www.idealog.co.nz/VERSIONS/images/mason.paknsave_medium.jpg[/img]

Yes Craig but even that is not as bright or saturated...

Hola Andres, I am glad to see more fellow Latinamericans around here. I speak spanish and have some experience creating custom content for SC4 so if can help you in any way don't hesitate to ask. Your model here presented is a good start but it can definitely be improved with a bit of work, so If you are interested in creating more models I highly recommend you to start your own BAT thread in the Open discussion section of the SC4 builders forum.

Regarding the invisible space in your BAT I can think of two things (both may be related) yout LODs are extending more than wat your model is covering, this could be because you deleted some objects and forgot to re-adjust the LOD's or you have objects that are invisible in that area...If you need a translatio you can PM. Si quieres que te explique como arreglarlo mandame un mensaje.

Saludos!

Sorry Craig, the yellow texture (I think it’s just a colour actually) [i]is[/i] oversaturated. There needs to be more definition between the building and the roof while the exterior detailing needs to be worked over a little more. Better/ more roof junk and precise UVW mapping would be easy ways to improve the overall appearance without too much effort. The lot needs more detailing and the building needs to be completely within the lot boundaries. Night lighting is also an important thing to get right.

Yes, the scale is a little out of whack in the height department, but I've seen worse. Scale is one of the hardest things to get right for new BATers. If you open a BAT thread, we'll be able to help you out with this sort of stuff.

Also guys, feel free to speak Spanish all you want, but remember that we require an English translation to go with it. ST is an English speaking site and English speakers need to be able to understand everything that is said here.

Hola amigo! I understand that this is not your profession, but this needs lots and lots of work. This needs better textures better... well really better everything, but once again this is not your area of expertise. But really, look up some tutorials on YouTube or something...

I will give this one a 3/5 just because i dot want to give it a bad rating because i know these are some of your firsts uploads to the stex.

I hope you do better next time!

Seems very nice. I'll try it. No further feedback means it works well.

So, I downloaded it, then discovered it is a landmark. This should be stated in the panel. I am sorry, I don't use landmarks.

congrads on your first!

yes more detail would in the discription would help bring more downloads.
your textures, seem a little bland,
also you need to spice up the lot,
add props and dont be shy to put up a few dependencies (but too much will drive players nuts!)

over all i like it, i think with practice you may become another BAT master!

Well it's a good start for your first but it does need more work
on the textures as well as building details.

Its cool
reminds me of Canadian Nofrills its a bright yellow store