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Marmor GmbH Headquater  1.0

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This is my first upload here:

Itis the Headquarter of the Marmor GmbH.

Lot Size: 4x2

Growable and Ploppable Version.

 

Ploppable Version : no jobs (landmark)

cost : 150$ per month

 

Growable version : 3000 CO-$$$ jobs

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roof, lot need work. so does the facade, why does it have like a spider web going over it? all in all solid first upload. 9/10

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wow,thats great!!, alittle more roof junk though, but its hugely awsome!!

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way to give a tumbsdown... like if you know how to make buildings... nice work dan, but you could worked a bit more though, esp since you got max.

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oh yeah, this site tends to be pickey, so you have to explain things so people know whats its use is, other wise, the vets wont even look at it.

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@daniel111: Marmor = marble. ;) Anyway, interesting design. But....where's the entrance ?

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Definitivly needs more roof junk, a bldg like this has lots more irl. The marbelation on the facade is way too large and at this distance should not be seen, also the lot could use a better arrangement. It IS a good FIRST, no doubt, hope you'll learn and listen to constructive comments, we need more good BATters! Keep it up Daniel.

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Hey, nice to see someone new here! I think it needs a bit more roof junk, but anyway good first upload. 8/10

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I am actualy working on my second building, it will have got nightlights and a better roof and also some jobs in the plopable version.Maybe I upload it today or tomorrow.I ve you have some other things I should make better please tell me. PS. Thank you for the nice posts

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Ist gar nicht mal schlecht meiner Meinung nach, okay das weisse auf der Glasfront sieht auf der Preview nicht so nach Marmor aus aber sonsonsten gef

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a few suggestions. add a base or lobby, more roof junk, and a better lot. other wise, as i said before, very good (zehr gut :p)

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Don't listen to all these roof junk people. Throwing helipads onto everything with space for one doesn't make it good. What you did is very nice.

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Its a good start, but here is my constructive criticism. The primary exteriour texture looks too overstretched to be honest. your best with something a little flatter than that. Secondly, some form of base for the tower could work out, at the moment there is little in the manner of a defined entranceway. Good attempt though.

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Excellent,the roof looks good to me,maybe fix up the front & back texture & the lot needs a little more but it's well done anyway.

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