The PlayCastle 1.0

Well your getting better.

Compared to the houses beside it it looks as big as the biggest castle I have ever seen, just the windows are bigger than most of the houses, imagine that in reality ????....... Largely oversized, it should be reduced to something like 5 or more times, no more than on a 2x2 lot. The idea is good though.

Thanks mrbisonm and bluebeard and yes I admitt it's a bit overscaled I'll do something about it.

Well, well, well ....... You can working with something ...... Third your object looks like fine - your first Black break is garbage ..... May be You - Great Artist of SC4..... Great success ....

basically I'll leave it the way it is since it is a copy of a Playmobil Fun Park located in a country I don't remember that is indeed that big. Keep in mind that it boosts desirability more than other parks.

play castles are usually a bit more round than that for kids, they have soft edges.

Well I had that in mind when I first began modelling it but I realised it is too hard for me. I might update it when I'm more experienced.

its WAY too big, but an improvement over your other uploads. if somthing doesnt look right in SC, why cant you just go back into GMAX and fix it, instead of uploading immediately. The lot also needs work, it needs textures and night lights. start a BAT thread and remember, just because you made it doesnt mean you have to upload it. only upload if you really feel other people are going to want it in there city. 3/10

Patriots is correct. Please start a Bat thread so that we can help you create the buildings you want as well as show you what we expect from new uploads. At the very least check out the other threads to pick up some useful hints.

I think it's fairly good in most aspects...except for the scale. Just make it smaller and try adding some detail to it and it would make quite the difference.

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Hi, I 'm with Gshmails ..... This is great post for new artists ....

Not okay yet, but i see that your lots are improving, the scale is a bit too large as it has been already said, you should also add textures to the building. And also the lot itself is way too blank. But i will give you already a 4 this time, you are really almost there.

its a lot better than you're past lots, at least you'rre improving and quite a bit too. quite an improvement on presentation of your uploads too :)

Great Work,Now this is better keep working at it.

this needs more effort in terms of scaling it to other sc4 objects.

I don't think it looks that bad but the reason I wanted to comment is because of what jthono said. "Please please don't upload anything else. We like realism." Why would you say something like that? He is a new batter, who needs a little encouragement, and you telling him never to upload anything again is very rude. I got an idea, lets see some of your BATs...Oh thats right you don't have any, at least dada222 is trying. Keep trying dada222, as long as you do I will support you.

Better than the last one but for goodness sake read some tutorials. Get it scaled and textured and detailed properly.

jthono , where in the world did you come from? That was a *plein stupid* remark.

Since I don't BAT (I am now just starting to learn it), what this piece of work is outragiously awesome compared to what I can do. Good work, but try to resize it a bit. Oh, and this is a creative idea, too.

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You're getting some development. 4 - almost there

It is indeed way better and detailed than most of the recent uploads we've seen here.... ;)

your best one yet but still needs some work

It is seven stories tall, way too big for a playground