Klyte45

Originally posted by: nathanthemayor Oooo I can't wait to see if your characters visit Fresno,CA(My hometown)quote> I don't know if the Schriefer will pass throught this city, but, who knows? (I'm writing by Schriefer 'cause he is camping this week xD) So, Thursday I'll begin my participation on this CJ. And the rotation continues on the next week, with the Palmtown (Caio will be out on the next week and will not participate of this 1st round) and on another week, will be the Schriefer again, ending this current story. The CJ's week ends on ever Thursday, when begin another writer to work in CJ, in other country. So, see you all soon xD

So, I'm the Leandro (aka Klyte45) and I made a (fail) CJ here on ST, Its name is "Zaoça". Unfortunally, I don't had free time to keep that active by myself only, but here we'll relay weekly to build a history. This experience can make great histories involving all the 4 countries. We hope you all like it. The 1st att is coming at Jan, 6 GMT.^^

Zaoça Index: Chapters: 01 - Introduction (Below) 02 to 05 - Picossi/Haiakos/Leaknosh Lol 06 & 07 - Harvya & Galware and its histories 08 - Majarhy Epilogues: I - The CIZC (This index will be refreshed even when I put a new text on CJ) This CJ is best viewed with the Leelawadee font (already installed on Win Vista/7). Chapter 1 – Introduction Zaoch greetings for all! This is the Diary of Zaoça, a giant country located on the center of a world called Terran. This will be an adaptation of the original diary, today on SimCityBrasil.com.br. Before initiate, I'll introduce myself: I'm Klyte45, currently Admin Assitant of SimCity Brasil and modder of SC4. Some work made by me on past are on the STex, like my São Paulo busses (my most known work), including the first worldwide released articulated bus model. I never had posted on ST forum before, 18 months after my registration on site, this is the first. My English is not the best and some gramatical errors maybe will be frequent. So, continuing to tell about the diary, today it have 35 chapters, and for don't keep misalignment for much time with the original one, I will try to accelerate the initials chapters, who have the my first (uglies and strange) cities. These cities were built between 2008 and 2009, and almost not have plugins. This diary will have many phases. Today in SCB, I'm on 2nd phase (here will be called 3rd, after I'll explain why). My projection is that i will do 15~20 phases before ends the diary. Here, beyond of the Chapters atualization, will appears some Epilogues, special chapters that are out of the history presentation, but will be important to all to know more about the zaoch culture. Will have others atualization types, but they are secret by now. Now, some pictures. This is the region of 2 first phases of diary. Welcome to Grand New Vikwýcia Region! This pic is old. There have a more recent pic: (The Consolação city is marked because this was extracted from chapter of this city) This is the current work region. Liandra is a bigger region made on simcity, with approx. 4000km² of area in SC representing 270000km² on zaoch map. This image represents about less to 8% of total Region And, for last, this is complete map of Zaoça, with its regions: The next chapter will be posted in the Wednesday.

Ben: This region is very dense, the subway is the oly way to drible the traffic problem ;D Thx by comment! Now, a short chapter: Chapter 8 – Majarhy Majarhy is on extreme NE of GNVR, 5 km away from Leaknosh Lol. With 76 years of emancipation, already was the biggest industrial park of this region, but today is strongly commercial. Its density of commercial jobs per km² is 60000, the biggest of the state of New Vikwýcia. Talking about its inhabitants was 200000 some time behind, but today is around 120000. Before show the city, I’ll tell about the city history. The ends of Vikwýcia began when Harvya and Leknosh Lol being emancipated. Were together yet Jakiar, Majarhy and Klyticia, forming the old Jakiar City. At the time when Majarhy’s population wanted to separate from Jakiar, this city was a (dirty and dense) industrial park, but with 200k people living in there. So, Alfredo Rosenburner, a local industry worker what lived in the city (and dreamed with a more beautiful city) mobilized the local citizens to initiate a riot against Jakiar. In a short time, Harvya intervened on the riot, with his power of be the state capital at that time, and promised emancipate Majarhy, but only if the riot ended. Well, the fight is over, and Rosenburner turned the city mayor, extruding all the dirty industries of their city, incentivizing business and re-delimiting zones. After this, the city developed strongly and could get more money to its funds. Alfredo has been idolized and a referendum organized by the local population of the time, meant that he was the mayor why he risked so much to make it independent for the rest of his life. The first city election took place only three weeks after his death, and in that period after death was declared official mourning in the city. So, after this long history, let’s go to the city! The city Airport is one of busiest of GNVR, and needs an urgent expansion: The city central area is where is the residential area, on north of the Rosenburner Park : The West area is the industrial area, and on their north have some commerce. The CIZC circuit cut the industrial area, and a little part of the circuit can be viewed on top-right of this pic (the black asphalt trace). And on south, is the dense commercial area. The business of the city are suffering with an economic crisis on the region, and some buildings are abandoned… End of 8th Chapter

After some issues, I'm back! Compact: Chapters 6 and 7 - Harvya & Galware and its histories Now, I’ll tell about the Old Vikwýcia Region. It’s formed by 6 cities at all: Harvya, Galware, Jakiar, Majarhy, Klytícia and a part of Leaknosh Lol. This old map represents what was this city on past: The 7th city, Skapaye, was between Klytícia and Galware. But, a mysterious event made the city simply vanish of map. This was its last pic: >>Harvya Harvya is the old downtown of Vikwýcia. It has the oldest industrial park of the GNVR, that was founded nearly along with the Vikwýcia City, about 190 years ago. It’s localized on SW of the city, near to Leaknosh Lol and Galware. At SE, is settled one of the residential parts of the city. Here, most of houses are low or mid density. At the city’s central area is located the old Town Hall of Vikwýcia, wich today is the Town Hall of Harvya and a history museum. Around there, is concentered the Commerce Downtown of Harvya, with big corporations’ HQs. In North it’s located the larger residential buildings of city, and here live 80% of the 120k inhabitants. And at West, it’s the old location of city’s Airport, the mayor plans to build a circuit to put Harvya on CIZC Championship in 2012 or 2013 (between 198 and 202 a.V. in Zaochian Calendar). >>Galware Galware is another medium city of NW of GNVR. It’s densely populated; it has a population floating from 170 to 220k inhabitants. It has the biggest (but not the most expressive) industrial park of old Vikwýcia. I will tell its history with some old pics (of 22 zaochian years ago…) The city is on its 14th decade of existence. It was the first city to separate from Vikwýcia, and today suffers with the commerce abandon. Most of them are going to Leaknosh Lol, where they have better clients. Results: Many old commercial buildings are empty… like the case of the Galware district in NW. At the South, there is a neighbor mixed with a commercial district called Jardim Lima². This name comes from an old Vikwýcia mayor called Magnus Lima. The “squared” comes after he married in his second year of mandate, with Rosana Lima. So, Lima x Lima = Lima². Magnus was the person which separated Galware of Vikwýcia, and this neighbor was the first thing that did. At that time, it was created with the name Lima (without “²”). Before the mandate of Magnus, so much people migrated to Galware. The reason was the mandate of Pablo Maluf on Vikwýcia, making the taxes to raise too much , making Galware a good alternative to live, especially for those who works around the Harvya’s downtown (old Vikwycia Downtown at that time). By the way, the area of others Harvya’s near cities (Leaknosh Lol and Majhary) was completely full of industries, with no more space for houses near the Vikwycian downtown. With this opportunity and the need for more money in cash, Magnus, now 89 y-o and as mayor of Galware, was reduced a treaty what reserves a great part of NE of city for native trees, keeping a smaller area for this. This was a unique chance, and he couldn’t simply ignore it. The city had a great population number jump, from 47k to 240k in 12 years, but even this make the city budget goes green. Magnus died in Feb 29th of 84 a.V., one day before his 100th anniversary, when he saw the biggest break on city budget. Rosana, with 95 years-old, was assumed the position of the husband. She seemed what she’s not will stay alive for many time… but she died only in Aug 4th of 116 a.V. with an impressive age of 127 years-old! Here is the area what the house advanced inside the old reserved area. After Majarhy expulsed a good part of his industries, Galware won the title of biggest industrial park of GNVR, but it’s not expressive... The city Airport was made on top of a hill, and is really hard that a building can disturb the airplanes’ pilots. And here an old pic from the tunnel that comes from Leaknosh Lol, a pride of city engineering. Coming back to today, a recent pic of the tunnel area: The Airport: The area near the old reserve: And the south of industrial area: End of chapter. Up next: Majarhy and its history, starring Rosenburner.

ImVhOzzi, thx! Benedict, this map was made after the city construction and search any thing so small like subway and trains stations on the city would be madness (I think what this city have about 100 or 200 stations, altogether). But have others cities who have his map completly labeled 'cause i made they since the begin of line constructions at SC4, like New Vikwýcia (I'll show this city later). Dave, Maybe in 2012 I'll make a way to support racers of both SCBrasil and ST, but for 2011, only SCB drivers will race, because I don't know if there has demand for create a category here on ST and the 1st division of CIZC is over capacity, impeding to put more people in. I don't know if I'll support make races with the 31 drivers already entered regularly. When the championship begin, in Jan 2nd, 2011 I'll show here too to see if come more people interested on participate. Confirming, the next chapters compact with the old Vikwýcia cities come in Oct 30th or 31st

nathanthemayor: Thx! xD Now, the chapter: Compact: Chapters 2 to 5 - From Picossi to Leaknosh Lol KL45 reports: this cities are older so much, about 4 years, and the excess repeating buildings and another plannering problems can be frequent. After the 26th chapter, this problem will be minimized Before begin, this is the today division on Region. The gray cities are of New Vikwýcia State (NV) and the Yepaska Island in Violet is administered by the Guaçu State (GÇ*). And today, I'll tell about Picossi, Haiakos and Leaknosh Lol: Picossi is a city on South East of GNVR. The great differential of this city is the very high hills next of the sea. They have approximately 600m of height and, in Mt. Panza, have more than 7km of roads to come at top of that. Here the Mt. Panza: The GLR Bridge at top is magnetic-based caused by the great height of that. The KCV (Kwyt Corporation Ventures), one division of KCo, was the sponsor of all bridges in Picossi. All the 3 bridges cost ~§1,500,000 for the public vaults, and generate something around §70,000 per month with tourism. Here a close pic on the bridge basis. And above a pic about all three bridges, with the city on top of the Mt Picossi: And now, Haiakos. This is the zaochian city what don’t have low class population. All 100,000 inhabitants of the city are §§ or §§§, and this city have 2 jobs per inhabitant on commerce. An overview of the city: One of the city’s postal cards, the Haiakos Lake today is lost in the concrete jungle what the city has morphed. This park is an alternative to who want to relax at lunch hour at city downtown. Next to Làvin’s Sea, is the city’s residential part. All the 100k inhabitants of the city are around here. Now, we’ll go to Leaknosh Lol. The biggest city of GNVR, with approx. 450,000 inhabitants. Let’s begin by the city Airport, near to Haiakos and New Vikwýcia limits, this airport serves all the 3 cities and have easy access by the railroad and elevated railroad. Around here, is too the Soccer Stadium Lavoir Sanésio de Oliveira Silva², house of Kwytz Leaknosh Lol, team of 2nd division of zaochian soccer champ, the Çaelk Bowl. Moreover, this championship is currently on 2nd edition, and now is playing the 2nd division at the moment. At other side of highway, are the planned neighborhoods Plan 1 & 2, built around of an raised express avenue. Here are the highest classes of the city habitants. More at north, is the New Camelot and Izo, respectively a commercial district and a neighborhood near to old Airport area (the clean area above on the pic). The old Camelot was closer of the old airport area than is today, but the city dump makes all the district moves to south to escape off the strong smell of trash. In the heart of city, is the Çaelk Lake. It already bigger at so many years ago, but the city “swallowed” the lake and have only 15% of original size. But the lake still remains a proud for the city and an postal card of the city. At extremely North-East is the Old Downtown, a neighborhood founded by Albert Çaelk (an old Vikwýcia mayor what was governed about 100 years ago) and was the 1st neighborhood of the city. Today, traditional families live around this side of the city. Another blend done by Albert Çaelk was one blend of industries, at East of Leaknosh Lol. His objective was making a connection of the Vikwýcia and the Làvin Sea with a city seaport. But, after this project be concluded, began the Vikwýcia’s separation, and the seaport was finished only when Leaknosh Lol get independent of Vikwýcia, about 79 years ago. Near of industrial park, is the St Judas commercial district, what have the newest city’s shops. Here, an old railroad/metro/elTrain web map of the city. This is from the time what Leaknosh Lol belonged to Çaelk State on 4th region (in portuguese). link for complete image End of 2nd-5th chapters Next chapter will come about october 20th. *[Ç is a letter on zaochian alphabet, so, this can be part of an acronym, different of C letter. More information on Zaoch Simlish Appendix, another special chapter type, soon].

Replying: Efkin: Thx, and don't mistake the name xD. Schulmanator: Thx. ^^ Hope you like my CJ. Schriefer: Thx JP! and thx twice for help me with the texts. ^^ fabricio83tst: Thx! And now, everyone will can see Zaoça \o/ nathanthemayor: Thx! Above will have an epilogue for all. xD dehyan309: Thx! I'll show the bridges on Wed with more details. And about the characters, I'll show more about the Zaochian Simlish soon (this ç is nothing xD.). Now, the first Epilogue: Epilogue I - The CIZC CIZC, zaochian acronym for International-Zaochian Race Championship (in Portuguese: Campeonato Interncional Zaocês de Corridas). This championship is currently in preparations for the 20th edition, and since the 19th, was shown in Zaoça's diary on SCB. This are compound by some races disputed on zaochian cities, in closed racetracks or in street circuits. Last season had 7 races and 21 drivers, without team formations; but in 2011, 24 drives have subscribed for participate, and 8 races are programed. This one is of the start on Corifeu City. All cities in 19th zaochian Season are from GNVR. Corifeu is on West of region. At these time, only 5 cars raced. Before, the race in Pinheiros, also in West, had 10 drivers. And this number was higher in Consolação: 17 At Klyticia, 18 drivers, and the championship began to be closed for the best-performance drivers At Majarhy, the title get closer from Marco Ralina, Klyte45, Rodo200 and Jota Cê (also known as Tomas Neto), with Palmtown as 5th. In Zhaen, another country diary of SCB, on Bayview city, the night race had 21 drives on the track. This race setted who will have chance to win the title on the last race of Season '10. And in Sacrilegio, in Yepaska Island, South of GNVR, the race result gave the title to Palmtown, and the recent-formed Zhaça Team. On this race, all drivers formed teams for a game for PC based on CIZC development purposes. The final Season results for drivers was: link for original image Teams Championship results: link for original image And these are all the drivers of 19th season: One impressive image of this season happened on Zhaen's Circuit. Vikwyt Çaelk, Albert Çaelk's grandson (more about him on nexts chapters), with his Renault Laguna has dropped on the sea: His brother raced on his place, with a Renault Clio, and dedicated this race for him. No, Vikwyt is not dead, but he get in coma for 3 months. Both drives will be on Renault Team in next season. Beyond them, this drivers will be on next season: Country Nº Driver Team Brazil 6 TMTS Höolstein Germany 7 Wolf Höolstein Zaoça 8 Vikwyt Çaelk* Renault Zaoça Zaoça 9 Kivi Kwyt Çaelk* Renault Zaoça Zaoça 74 Mark Geurier* Vikwýcia Mirzorsh Zaoça 75 Asdf-Qwerty Uiop* Vikwýcia Mirzorsh Urano¹ 76 Mad_brain Sverige Velocity Brazil 77 Vinícius Ferreira Sverige Velocity Brazil 86 Rodo200 RGR Portugal 87 RPMT22 RGR Belka¹ 88 Giuliano Lellis RGR Azaroth¹ 90 Felk RBR Najur¹ 91 Deo Thote RBR New Kingdom of Campo Imperial¹ 96 Jefte Rocha D'énergie Auto Brazil 97 Cajueiro D'énergie Auto Brazil 98 Vitorhnn D'énergie Auto Independent States of South (EIS)¹ 99 Cley Clovisk Strong Fire Brazil 100 Jota Cê Strong Fire Brazil 101 Makous Strong Fire Zhaen¹ 433 Palmtown ZMZ Molching¹ 434 Schriefer ZMZ Zaoça 435 Klyte 45 ZMZ Zaoça 799 Nied Forspido* Force Germany Zaoça 800 Dogman Haus* Force Germany Zaoça 801 Granto Rismo* Force Germany Italy 998 Ragzo Filho* R's Motorsports United States 999 Masterson Midway* R's Motorsports * = Created for me; the others drivers are users of SCB. ¹ = Country of the Brazilian Regions Union (União Brasileira de Regiões). The prevision is of 30 drivers on next season. The 20th Season will start in January 2nd, 2011 in Corifeu. In this season, the new circuits are Campo Imperial and Liandra Circuit nº 3. Soon, more information about the tracks and his drivers. Here, a last pic showing the tests on the Liandra's track with the ZMZ team: End of 1st epilogue. And the 2nd chapter will coming on Wednesday (if I don't have html difficults like today =p)

Great adaptation, Efkin! Big fidelity if compared with the original (In the SC4's bounds) Congratz! xD

Very cool Wolf Efkin! Your cities even are beautful. Is only a pity that you can't mantaince only one CJ for a long time. xD But this not take away the fact of your city styles are good so much!