Telau Prime

[sEAhAwk fAn121 0]

Great first update goose!

[ky72x 13]

That was a very well-written story! The pictures went along pretty good with it. I can't wait to read to rest of the extremely long journey.

- Kyle

[BlondeTwiggy 43]

hola, collgab!  Nice presentation there, I love all three flags. 

mightygoose, awesome storyline, can't wait to see in-game pics of yours.  btw congrats on the cml (is it new, or am i just really unobservant?)

[WeekendCityPlanner 19]

Cool, I like scifi CJs. I hope it works out like the Nexis of Genisis. Great work.

[Yoman3 5]

Ah, confusing space charts Great presentation there, is that picture of the ISS real or not?

[mightygoose 92]

yoman thats a rendering of the ISS

[mrbisonm 1,620]

Cool, nice going guys, love the start of it. I wish I had that knowledge when I started NoG four years back....lol.

Wish you luck and I will drop in again for sure..

mrb

[nihonkaranws 88]

What the *bleep*?! How the heck did you make a picture like that (with the satellite)??? Nice work, I hope to see more pictures soon. This CJ will be great and prosper incredibly, I can feel it in the virtual air, lols!

[s_olah 87]

I was really hoping for an update by now, your Cj sounds very interesting, I would love love love to see some screenshots...

[Haljackey 17,302]

Originally posted by: s_olah I was really hoping for an update by now, your Cj sounds very interesting, I would love love love to see some screenshots...quote>

LOL!  Give them some time  s_olah!  Good things come to those who wait....

With three authors you can bet that this will be good.  They have set the bar high with the amazing storyline so far, and in order to keep the bar that high, they need to have amazing updates (which I am sure the next update will be!).

I can't wait myself.  This is a rich story...

[Zelgadis 638]

Patience folks, the history is getting into place. You can't rush art. And I'm liking where this is going!

ISF

[mightygoose 92]

PART TWO

- (0.0YT) - (12th March 2341) -

The Titania arrives in Telau Prime orbit after completing its final burn. Landing ships deployed to primary landing zone. Colony one established. Ships captain decides that he shall rule autocratically until basic civilization is achieved at which point he will host general free elections.

- (0.4YT) -

Basic civilization achieved. Colony one is now totally independent of all supplies and materials brought from Titania. Mines have been established as well as agriculture and manufacture. Commerce is starting to take off on a small scale. Leader maintains power.

- (0.9YT) -

By this interval Colony one has a population of nearly 10 000 people, a 5% increase on landing population. Education and healthcare systems have been setup as well as judiciary systems and emergency services. Leader maintains power. 

- (0.11YT) -

Protests as to the leader's ongoing autocracy, fearing he has become power hungry. Demands of elections fall upon deaf ears. As popular unrest among supporters of the opposition grows Leader enforces stricter laws and enables emergency powers when political rioting begins. Angst amongst the loyalists combines with anger from the opposition culminating in mass demonstration outside the main government offices. 45% of the population protested with a significant proportion present to spectate. Armed enforcers block the steps and Leader offers an ultimatum: "Either you will agree to terms on which I have built the new colony, you will leave or you will enter servitude" It was rapidly decided that the opposition would exodus to find a new home where they could have democracy. Leader offered them use of the original landing ships, which they begrudgingly accepted and relocated to Scandanovia.

- (0.14YT) -

In Scandanovia it was decided a new Democratic republic would be set up. Within weeks the first elections were held. The two main parties to emerge were the Republican Party, which wanted to set up a democratic socialist country based on countries in the old Europe, and The Workers Assembly which wanted to form utopian communist state on the new planet. The Republican Party marginally won, however it was noted that many of those who worked in setting up these first elections were supporters of the Republicans. The Workers assembly demanded official enquiry as to the legitimacy of the results as preliminary polls showed their supporters to make up approximately 62% of the contemporary Scandanovian populace. The inquiry, known as the Fox-Hubbard report, revealed that the results were valid and so stood. This was not the answer the Workers Assembly were looking for and although suspecting r

[Schulmanator 5,787]

I am intrigued. Very intrigued. I will certainly be back to see this collaboration in action.

[Shingure 56]

Wow this seems very interesting. I will be keeping an Eye out on this.

[edmonton_stinks 5]

Ooh, drama. Could there be...conflict ensuing?

[Callbat 8]

Very interesting. I like the storyline.

[lucky7 73]

Oh, WOW, very intriguing, great story-line! defenitely looking very much forward to more,

take care,

lucky7

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Interesting... Can't wait for more!

[Haljackey 17,302]

So its only been 1YT and people are already split?

At least they made it, but how long will this "peace" last?

[Jaime_ua 34]

It seems it's our nature..... Even in fiction we are divided 'cause our political ideals........ Nice work! I'll be waiting for more!

[etherian 4]

Interesting, the complexity of the story - and therefore the cities will probably explode exponentially very, very soon!

[Sim_Air 2]

Looks indeed interesting and intricate...great pics by the way. Keep it up and waiting for more!

[Jillybean86 38]

Nice story so far, but where are all the game pictures?

[Blazerhawk 162]

Awesome story. I can't wait to see how this develops.

[Simfan34 11]

Ooh... looks like communism survives! Very intresting.

[Simfan34 11]

Ooh... looks like communism survives! Very intresting.

[crazyarchitect 7]

Very interesting storyline so far, I love it, so I guess it's only been one year

[TheQuiltedLlama 34]

This shows the first farming community established on Scandanovia.

Such farming villages were soon set up all around the country, each would contain a small collection of housing and large farming areas where the inhabitants would work. This was the first major scheme that was started by the republican government and agriculture is expected to employ over 60% of the total population by 20.0YT. The Government is encouraging private enterprise by offer subsidies to establish privately-owned farms, but currently most are still state-owned. In the future there are plans to build large greenhouses to introduce more intensive farming into economy.

[JanYpe 17]

Great picture. The area still looks pretty barren, except for the irrigation circle.

[sEAhAwk fAn121 0]

Greap Pic Llama! Looks like Northern Europe!