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The strange thing is that made a lot of sense. I think Ron Howard is using that as the premise for his next film

Well........ Possibly the strangest description I have seen, anyway the model needs some work, it looks a bit cartoonist to me

"I think Ron Howard is using that as the premise for his next film"- ha ha ha "By the way, it is written a debt fort of a magazine iris famous because it is often sued and a strange restaurant." Gold, you can't make stuff like that up. Oh yeah the model, it's ok, yeah cartoony, try some less bold, less contrasting colours. And the roof on the left needs fixing. Who knows how what I'm saying will come out the other end...

If you want to improve your skills you should really open up a bat thread. The roof don't have alot of detail and most buildings I see have a different color roof since you did use the same textures from the walls.

You can also put some pipes on the roof to make it more realistic. The windows is just to flat and not realistic. You should at least push the windows in a little bit to make it more better which is no very hard to do at all. The black beam that's holding up that green platform could also be size down a bit and could use some more detailed texture that you can actually notice.

Another idea is that you should add some more windows and you could model a realistic window and just keep on coping and pasting it on the wall. The building is very plain and you should try to keep practicing on working more realistic textures and add more details to the building.

Maybe you should use a software like gimp, adobe, or paint.net or any other one. If you want to use bump mapping and more you could try gimp which is a free paint software. But I still recommended to opening a bat thread. At least you put in some effort because some people who upload stuff on the stex put no effort in it at all like just a plain cube.

If you don't like gmax you can always use a different 3d modeling program like google sketch. I hope to see you improve at batting! And this model is not that bad it only needs some more work. Im very sorry for adding 5 comments since it was a large paragraph and it couldn't get through. But I hope that helps.

uuhh...too much information? It's too big and rather blocky. good attempt though!... tornado123: FIVE posts of nothing but...sugestions?!? I know your trying to help but really?!?

Is the description the work of Google Translator?

I agree. Google Translator.

I actually like the concept looks like a nice small restaurant and I think this model has great potential just needs some more work I'll like to see some commercial lots with this style. I hope you follow tornado123 comments and update this

?Is the description the work of Google Translator? yes,