Apison Bakeries - Plop 1.0

@tariely, I think its mostly is due to the fact most of the buildings, while they have the look that most food factories in the US have (Very random and full of tanks and pipes that only God knows where they belong.), The color pallet of the buildings not matching throws people off. Its actally based off of the McKee bakery in Tennessee, but there aren't any props that really could work, with out missmatching, IMO.

This one ? (Below) Too bad. I do believe it would work better is there was some space between the buildings, then. And if you just chose a few that do match, and went easy on the pipy things ?

 

2 minutes ago, tariely said:

This one ? (Below) Too bad. I do believe it would work better is there was some space between the buildings, then. And if you just chose a few that do match, and went easy on the pipy things ?

 

I'm thinking more this, the building above I think is corporate.

Oh, I see. But there is way less pipy things in there, isn't it ? :-)Perhaps do away with the biggest one and leave the space for the lot to breathe and leave only one or may be two of the smaller ones, the ones more on the right of the first pict. ?

 

PS : By the way, I like the headquarters ! Interested ?:-)))