Small Old Town Shop 1.0

This is not a bad bat. You could have put a bit more effort into the ground textures. But as you said it is your first upload and you are probably a novice so I'll give it a 6

Rainy day is right. too bad part of the building is on the sidewalk

Vaguely reminiscent of phillipbo's BAT tutorial building. Well, maybe not vaguely at all...

Good Work-6-Needs work(windows)& more detail.The lot is ok.The building is too long for that lot size as it ends up on the sidewalk,try shorting the length of it if you want to use that lot size.

Your rendering is offset. That is why the building seems to be almost on the street. Adjust your LOD's and re-render it. I guess you followed the basic gmax tutorial, looks a lot like that BAT. Window textures could be better. Better than a lot of first I have seen here.

thanks for the comments I will keep those things in mind as I make more.