The planet Myon -- [SCJU Member], [SCJU Sub-Ambassador]

[collgab 10]

nice, buty how do u make teh water rise in teh mountains behaind teh dam plez tell me and give me a link plez...

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

January, 0031AL

There will be more zukish in this and some future updates, and for longer segments of it, the English translation will be directly below it in italics and slightly offset from the rest of the words.

After they had eaten their supper (spaghetti) at the small town hotel, Tiffany and Marc said goodnight to Larissa and Tyler, and they went to their room to get ready for bed.

"I wonder what we will get to see tomorrow?" Marc asked.

"I hope it is interesting, and something that is fun," Tiffany replied.

"I'm tired, I don't really feel like talking that much now..."

Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...

"Wow, Marc really falls asleep fast," Tiffany said to herself.

She walked over to the window and pulled out a chair to sit down, and then she stared out at the vast expanse of pluftog farm behind the hotel.

(Pluftog is a plant that grows to about 2 feet high and every 8 months it produces many small purple-pink pepper like growths, which are hand picked and sold as a salad ingredient. They taste somewhat like turkey, and are very juicy, so please chew with your mouth closed.)

As she sat there, she thought about all that was going on in the area, including anger at New Rhodesia for there misuse of the term warp drive (they should know that the type of travel they have made is called azberjaz drive), wondering if Granar will ever become stable, and also wondering what will be found on the trip to the nearby star. (she forgot the name, it is KLX-2)

She then walked back over to the bed and carefully, so she wouldn't wake Marc up, got in and fell asleep.

The next day they were on their way once again, this time to Makkah, where they will leave the country for the first time, and go to 2 new countries, the zuke country, and al'Sahra'.

They soon were back on the highway, and began to head through the last areas of farms before they hit the jungle.

"Look, creatures!" Marc said, "Tiffany, do you know what sound they make?"

"No," she replied, and then said to herself, "And even if I did, I probably wouldn't tell you so you won't annoy me like with the cows"

"Mooooooo!" Marc said, after trying to think of whatever sound they made, before deciding to just mimic a cow.

"Marc, how many times do I have to tell you, stop mooing" Larissa told him.

"Hada"

Hada=sorry

"Looks boring out here... Ahh! Ghost truck!" Tiffany exclaimed.

"Don't worry about it, they do that all the time, it is just a natural part of the truck's activity" Larissa said.

The highway soon split into 2 separate sections, and the farms began to disappear as they got closer and closer to the border.

"Wow, sure are a lot of trucks out here, I wonder what is going on?" Marc said.

"Don't they know it is bad to tailgate?" Tiffany asked.

"I guess not," Larissa replied, "I sure hope they learn though, it is making me nervous."

*Klunk! rattle, rattle, rattle*

"As is that noise."

*Pssssssssssss...*

They pulled to the side of the road, where they came to a stop right by the Republic of Myon-Zuke country border.

After Tyler had gotten out of the car to see what had happened, a midsized zuke walked out of the border station and soon spotted them

"Vegawn azanen?" the zuke said.

-"Need some help?" the zuke said.

"E, äen vegawn azanen, äen egu ablëx alowe," Tyler told him.

-"Yes, we need help, our car died," Tyler told him.

"Ä zamno ebba abnino hyap kutnisn kïn," the zuke replied.

-"I will get the truck over here to fix it," the zuke replied.

The zukes took the car over to a small repair shop on the border, after making sure they had the necessary ID to be able to enter the country. The Brackmans were taken to a small hotel-like building near the repair shop while they waited for the car to be fixed. They were relieved when the zuke told them it was only a loose hose that had caused the problems, and the car would be fixed in about an hour.

Tiffany walked over to the window to see what she could find in the jungle, when she felt something bump into her leg, and then a tap on the back. She turned around, where she saw a small zuke about the size of her younger brother.

"Ama!" the zuke said to her.

-"Hi!" the zuke said to her.

"Ama!" Tiffany replied, "A harit aglöxamn?"

-"Hi!" Tiffany replied, "Who are you?"

"Ä egu jamå aglöxamn Lauren," The zuke told her. (pronounce the a and the u separately)

-"My name is Lauren," The zuke told her.

"Lauren, ä egu jamå aglöxamn Tiffany."

-"Lauren, my name is Tiffany."

To be continued...

Goldfish4209: It is a program that has dissapeared. What other shapes would a picture take?

defcon pilot: The tense in the speech is present (usually), and the rest is past. I used SSM, (space station manager) for the station, GMAX for the CS-1, and 2ch.net simplayer made the other 2 ships. Celestia was only used for the picture of the planet.

Westerner: Glad you like it!

Tracker: I have no idea on that, as mine doesn't cause trouble.

2ch.net simplayer: No, just the CS-1. See reply to defcon pilot for what program was used.

sloppet: Thanks for the comment!

Marvin: Glad you like it!

p1: Actually it is wapbervklex drive, but the Terran-Myonians use the term warp drive. You will have to wait and see to find out what happens, though.

collgab: It is Teirusu's rain mod, found here: http://www.teirusu.com/.

[Fabiocb 1]

nice update, and I hope Rural Highway gets ready soon so that cool roads with oneway roads will look even better.

[6underground 11]

Good job leech, nice update!

[Marvin 0]

Very interesting, I wonder what will happen next?

[Goldfish4209 9]

Nice update!

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

August, 0031AL

Once again, the English translations will appear below the zukish in italics. It will also be found under Lauren's not the greatest English.

While the car was being fixed, Larissa and Tyler were talking to the zukes that they had met there, while Marc looked out the windows, and Tiffany talked to the little zuke named Lauren that we met late last update. They had begun to talk about the stuff they liked to do, and then Marc saw the zuke for the first time and interrupted them.

"Who is that you're talking to, Tiffany?" He said.

"Aen thüglabe/sn engas? Ä U ivamerome quaja." Lauren said.

-"You can speak English? I didn't know that." Lauren said.

"E, äen thüglabe/sn kïn. A thüglabe/sn kïn?" Tiffany asked.

-"Yes, we can. Can you?" Tiffany asked.

"Yesh, Iy can, but Iy'm not very gud at it." she replied.

-"Yes I can, but I'm not very good at it." she replied.

"I think it is good, I can understand it better than the Zukish" Marc said.

"Thamk you, but Iy dom't think Iy know hu you are." she replied.

-"Thank you, but I don't think I know who you are." she replied.

"My name is Marc" he said.

"Hi Marc, my name is Lauren" she told him.

Meanwhile, soon after Lauren discovered that Tiffany and Marc speak English, the other zukes also found this out, which made their conversation go better as while Larissa and Tyler can speak Zukish, they are only somewhat better at it than Lauren is at English.

They decided to go by the teleporter system because there is no way they would get to Makkah without driving during the night now that they had to stop here, and also because in Imnatazhüthken (the Zuke country) the system is free because it is run by the government. (and therefore, payed by taxes)

After saying goodbye to Lauren and some of the other zukes there (Zama!) they got back in their car, and they followed the zukes in their truck down the border patrol road.

They soon take a back road near the highway down south to get to the nearest station, which is at the city of Qalquet.

"Hmm, looks like there are a lot of traffic problems here with the trees and light posts right in all the wrong places." Tiffany said.

"And there's a phone booth right in the middle of that entrance ramp!" she exclaimed shortly after.

"Wow, big building" Marc said.

They went inside where the zukes told them what to do, and then left to get back to the border post.

They went in, found the heavy transport terminal, and entered their destination in on the computer- Anacata System, Planet Myon, al'Sahra', Makkah; and then drove inside the transporter when the gates opened. There was a sound of something spinning up to speed, followed by a short flash of light, and then...

"What happened? The walls changed." Marc said.

*Ama i al'Sahra', sigin zama i ebba jhete /et zatawi ebba jalaq*

-*Welcome to al'Sahra, please go to the right after leaving the room*

This was followed by an announcement in a language they could not understand, which they believed was Arabic and was the same as the zukish message. They followed the instructions and drove down a small road to a room where they were handed a 2 sided form given to all those who where coming from another country and hadn't already been to al'Sahra'. They soon found out they only had to do one side, as the other side was Arabic, which they could not read. There were questions about who they are, and other basic information that helps the government know if terrorists or smugglers or outlaws were trying to sneak into the country.

(just an English sample of part of the form)

Number of Family Members: 4

Last Name: Brackman

First Name(s): Tyler, Larissa, Tiffany, Marc

Religion(s): Zhüeka

Home County: Republic of Myon

Home City: Meruton, North Meluma

~More~ (nothing personal)

After they were finished they handed the form to the workers there, who after running it though a computer and finding nothing wrong, they had the Brackmans get out of their car, where they had their pictures taken, as well as their car, and they were given ID cards and allowed to leave.

"Hey, where did all the cars go?" Marc asked.

"Ä U ivameromn" Tiffany replied.

-"I don't know" Tiffany replied.

They continued into the city, where they found nice, old stone buildings all along the streets, and wondered how long they had been like that and wondered what it was like inside them.

"Okay Marc y Tiffany, we are almost at the hotel, so you better start getting ready." Larissa told them.

Y=and in Zukish y Spanish.

They went up to their room on the 20th floor, and after getting relaxed on the beds, turned on the TV.

*Fyonanien êd ebba jhenez fyomi züthkeen U avesn uaja aglöxamn ebba fuvadi zown kïn egu túm yabin.*

-*City officials are advising people not to light fires outside as the drought enters its fourth month.*

To be continued...

Comments:

Fabiocb: Thanks for the comment! I already have the first version of the rural highway, but I like the one way roads better for this area. (Zukish regions)

6underground: Glad you like it!

Marvin: Thanks, and now you know! (somewhat)

Goldfish4209: I'm glad you like it!

[bat 6]

Very good new update!

bat

[Ramona Brie 121]

Nice idea. Now, we need to see what else needs to be done.

[patfirefghtr 160]

wow im loving it great keep it coming

[Goldfish4209 9]

nice! Someone's been reading the map...

[sloppet 3]

Darn! I have to admit I almost forgot about this CJ.. Sorry for not commenting the last updates, but I'm sure that you're not angry at me...

Let's see... Well.. the first update on this page is really good, but the first pics of the second one are just ........

But I do not like the way you have built your "european style" city with those paris buildings... It just isn't it for me....

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

January, 0032AL

"Yawn... I'm too tired to talk right now after the day that we had, lets just go to sleep," Tiffany said

"Yes, for once I agree with you," Marc replied.

*BOOM!, rumble rumble rumble...*

"Tiffany y Marc, I forgot to tell you that there will probably be some thunder and lightning during the night because of the current weather." Tyler told them from the other bedroom.

"Now he tells us, after it nearly made me wet the bed," Marc said quietly.

"Hmm, what a pretty tan cloud" Tiffany said after looking out the window before going to sleep.

-Later, at around 3:30AM-

*Rustle, rustle, whoosh!...scrape, whoosh, scratch!*

"Whats going on out there?" Tiffany asked.

"Ä U ivameromn" Marc replied.

-"I don't know" Marc replied.

"Hey, all I can see is a dark brown cloud out of the window!" Marc shouted.

"Looks like a big cloud of sand" Tiffany replied

*KABOOM!!! Rumble rumble rumble...*

"A big cloud of sand full of thunder" Marc replied.

"What should we do? Should we wake mom and dad, or should we just wait for the storm to stop?" Tiffany asked.

*Suddenly, just as quick as it started, the sandstorm stopped, leaving scratches on the window and sand just about everywhere outside, but nothing else.*

"Hmm, I guess we don't have to worry about that anymore," Marc said, and immediately fell back asleep while laying sideways on the bed.

"This just doesn't seem right," Tiffany says to herself, "First the car breaks down, and now there is a sandstorm... I just have this odd feeling that something is after us, but I don't know what..."

*Zzzzzzzzzzzz*

"Oh, great, now Marc is snoring, now how am I supposed to fall..... asleep?........Zzzzzzzzzzzzz"

Y=and, but I think you should know that by now.

"Hey, the street cleaners sure do a good job," Tiffany said

"Why do you say that?" Larissa asked

"All the sand that was here last night is gone now," Tiffany replied.

"Sand? What sand?" Larissa said

"There was a sandstorm last night" Tiffany told her.

"I didn't know that, I must of slept right through it." Larissa replied.

"Yay, park!" Marc said

"We can't stop there if that is what you are thinking" Larissa told him.

"Hey, there's some sand, over in the flowers!" Tiffany said.

"Hmm, I guess you're right," Larissa replied.

"Hey, I can't read that sign, what does it say?" Marc said

"All I see are some nice squiggly lines and some dots on a banner," Tiffany said.

"Why do you have to argue about a sign written in Arabic?" Larissa asked them.

"Ä U ivameromn, I think it is just something we like to do" Tiffany said.

-"I don't know, I think..." Tiffany said.

"Hey, I can see the highway!" Marc said.

"Wow, it sure is different here, all the houses are up on their own cliffs!" Marc said.

"I wonder how they get to their sidewalk?" Tiffany asked.

"It is starting to get greener down here, and there sure are a lot of trees," Tiffany commented.

"Okay, both of you will just have to wait here until the ferry shows up so we can go to one of the islands, but it shouldn't be too long." Tyler said.

"Awwhhh" Tiffany said.

"Hey, is that it over there? *points*" Marc said.

To be continued...

Just in case you feel like reading the news, here it is.

Comments:

bat: Thanks for the comment!

Tracker: You will just have to wait and find out on that.

patfirefghtr: Glad you like it!

Goldfish4209: What map? Thank you for the comment!

sloppet: I'm not mad, (except at SCC for not commenting at all on the last update) but thanks for the comment! The city is actually Zukish-Islamic, but I liked those buildings so I used them.

[sloppet 3]

good update there ! The pics are much better now! Those pari' buildings are lookin' good! Keep it up man!

*Zuke*

[bat 6]

Great new update!

bat

[Fabiocb 1]

nice update, I don't know way but I like the palm in constrast with the french style buildings

[kingmadmushroom 0]

If your still doing the people thing......

Name: Chris Evans

Job: Brain Surgeon/Plastic Surgeon

City: Anywhere with a good hospital

Age: 21 (Born on Myon)

Detail: Youngest ever successful brain transplant, lives with girlfriend

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Due to recent events as well as new interests, the CJ of The Planet Myon is coming to an end. I have learned a lot over the course of it's life, and I believe I have improved from what my city building skills were at during the beginning of the CJ, and definitely over New Chicago, if any of you remember it. I will be starting a whole new CJ called Galesfe City soon, and it will be located on the western part of the province of Nerone, in the Republic of Myon. It is likely that parts of the rest of Myon will be seen there as well during stories, but the main CJ will be just that city and the surrounding areas, and because of this, it will be easier for me to keep track of things that happen in it. Below is a final update for the Planet Myon, showing where the Brackmans were going to next. (non-story)

 

The island port area.

Old fashioned boat ride docks.

 

Random shops

 

The island ferry terminal

 

Some of the housing developments on the island.

 

Some of the small hillside farms of the island.

 

The Makkah Solar Power Station.

Comments:

Sloppet: Thanks for the comment!

bat: glad you like it!

Fabiocb: Thank you for the comment

kingmadmushroom: As of now, no, because this CJ is just now ending. You can when the next CJ adds characters, and with it there should be more activity with them, unlike this one.

[sloppet 3]

Sloppet: Thanks for the comment!quote>

And as the update is concerned - well... it's still great! Good work!

[bat 6]

Good update!

bat

[Ramona Brie 121]

Why did you end it? It was good, and then it ends? Why not keep on? Too big?

[Goldfish4209 9]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! This was one of the best cjs around! Why end it? Nice update though.

[Fabiocb 1]

very nice wharf and what a pity the this is comming to an end, but if you start another one as you said it will be allright, I made the same thing a feel time ago.

[Yoman3 5]

great work!!!!

I just looked through alot of this and it looks fantastic!!!!!!1

I rly like the highways!!!

+ thank you for voting Aye on my application