One Step Closer - CJ By Travis

[Travis 5 11]

"This is WCBS News-radio, the time is 5:00AM on the 1st day of November, 2008. Our top overnight developing story is the discovery of a mother and 2 children found dead at their Woodward Ave, Owensboro, home by police after a report of gunshots was called in by a neighbor. The mother has been identified as 28-year old Lisa Thompson. . . Owensboro Police and the Phillipsburg County Sheriff's Office have not disclosed the indentities of the 2 children, nor any information on any potential leads on a suspect. . ."

- 4 HOURS LATER -

CHAPTER 1

Matt Thompson slowly regains consciousness, sitting in the wrecked front end of his Ford truck, somewhere in a wooded area with the sounds of rain and of a highway in the backround. He has a pounding headache, and he finds his forehead coated with blood. He has no idea where he is, how he got there, or even remember the events leading up to the past several days. He forces his way out of the truck, and limps over to the highway to flag down some help. Only several hours later does he learn that his wife and two children were found murdered the night before. . .

Before he has even set foot out of the hospital, Matt Thompson has made it his life's sole purpose to find and exact revenge upon whomever had done this to his family. . . little does he know what lies ahead. . .and what is ahead knows him little. . .

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Welcome everyone to my first CJ!  This is not my first foray into the whole MD/CJ thing (I have had an MD at SC4Devotion for over a year and a half, in which you'll see pics from some of the same cities you'll see in this story: https://www.sc4devotion.com/forums/index.php?topic=629.340  but this will be my first story-based CJ/MD. I hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I did making it thus far.  More to come soon.

Comments are welcome!

-Travis

[GreekMan 246]

WOW!Great photoshopping!I am comming back for mor!

[un1 40]

Not bad at all. I am rather surprised I should say.

Nice work! Good luck with your CJ.

-un1

[JJC12321 0]

Great photoshopping there. I love the effects it makes, i will be back...for more!!!!

[Zezug 6]

Nice, really like the effects on your pics, and good start on the story.

[Haljackey 17,241]

Looks very promising. Excellent RHW shot Travis!

[Jazzmaster 716]

Great start! Interesting story and nice rain effects!

[threestooges 0]

Interesting start to this Travis. I don't get around here much anymore, but I'll try to keep updated on this. I like the effects in the pics and the story has already taken a curious turn. I'll be interested to see where you take this.

[panthersimcity4 162]

Oooooooh I like the story (which might sound morbid since a mother and her children were just brutally slaughtered)

Nice effects as well. I love that country freeway, reminds me of Oregon.

[Amerikaner 42]

Looks pretty interesting, its nice to see you over here as well Travis! The CJ as a whole looks amazing as usual and the story is no less entertaining, will be interesting to see what happens next.

[JakeMD 107]

Looking great, those images seem so realistic!

[jacqulina 162]

great start nice story too,great effects on the pics my friend

[Geronimo 4]

Nice start, interesting story and great pictures! Look forward to first update..

[SirUnger 13]

Really nice photoshops, the fog and the rain look very realistic. I can#t wait to see more.

[fabsies55 5]

yea its looking pretty good, the fog and rain look really realistic and hope to see more.

[Schulmanator 5,787]

Intriguing! A great way to start a CJ.

[wishfulanthony 3]

A great start for you, Travis! I'll be looking forward to your next updates!

[ilikehotdogsalot 307]

Wow travis, where have you been hiding these skills? Reminds me a bit of hamstertk's journals.

[qinbenjiaren 0]

love this CSI CJ, want to see more, surprise us!!!

[art128 4,618]

very great pictures Travis ! And looking forward to more !

[sEAhAwk fAn121 0]

Great start Travis!

Can't wait to see more!