The Legend of the Silver Comet

[Firebird 40]

What happenes inside your computer when you play the game?

 

The Legend of the Silver Comet

Tales from Malvalion.

A region inside your head.

 

A silver comet moves ever so slowly, gracefully even, across the Malvalion sky. Most of the people are to concerned with there shopping a night after work to notice it, and even so, stuff like that is always falling across the sky. The mayor

[imhurt66 0]

Hummmmm...Interesting.I like the way your writing this CJ because I have o make the image whihc is really cool. I wonder what will happen next in this...town

[RadioheadFan 1]

STORY! Always love to see the CJs with storylines out there, and it sounds like this one has infinite possibilties. Can't wait to hear some more and see your cities, keep up the excellent work!

Jamie

P.S. I absolutely love the quote in your signature.

[Firebird 40]

Here it is, the homework can wait, I have not had insparation this good in months!

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Her plate started to shake; the cup of grape juice rattled and toppled over. She stood up

[Sisu 1]

Good and intresting story. But i would like to see some pictures too.

[Firebird 40]

I have decided to make some of the pictures to go along with the cj after wakeing up with the idea of how I could do it, and if you want to, you can still email me your pictures and I will post them on image shack so it does not slow down the page. The responce time between the story postings will probably be longer beaceuse I have to take the snapshots.

[A199999999 0]

well.that was a good point of view from the sims!

[Firebird 40]

 I was waiting for someone to realise that!

 

[Firebird 40]

 Sorry about the double post above this one.

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Then, as suddenly as it had gone, the world around her erupted to life again, only it was as if nothing had ever happened, everything was normal, despite the fact that people kept walking trough cars and she could not find her father. She ran up the steps and through the house to look for her father again, but it was hopeless. He was missing.

She went back outside a sat down on the hard concrete steps outside the mansion looking at the yard, it was daytime now. People were bustling around, trying to get to there jobs, no one was stopping to talk. She was lonely, scared, and confused. It was like she was in a game or something. She decided to try and talk with the people walking around so she walked through the garden and opened the iron gate.

[Ramona Brie 121]

Different! Wow, this is a SIMCity Journal, title Sim accentuated.

[Rymac91 15]

wow...this is a pretty cool City journal Idea...I'm going to bookmark this one.

[MayorTim 16]

Pretty cool! I will keep reading.

[Firebird 40]

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[Ramona Brie 121]

Talk about staying on top of custom content! The heliport just came out of the SimGoober production line and here it is in this SCJ. (SIM is the S)

[Frymon 0]

Wow is all I can say.Keep it up

Fmon

[sloppet 3]

nice interesting start!
always nice to see something new!

 

 

[Firebird 40]

Thanks, i'm working on the next installment, but don't forget, I've got homework too.

[Equilibria 16]

This story looks like it could be a lot of fun. Very creative and original. Nice job.

[nycsc4 5,250]

sounds cool, but i would like to see some more pictures

[Firebird 40]

Here's to you

Sorry it's so short , homework

 

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            They had each fallen asleep on different sofas, and between getting reproachful looks at by the manager and not getting much sleep because they kept hearing booms and explosions from outside, they decided to leave the building as soon as they could to get on their way.

“So, what do you have in mind” Will asked her.

“I have absolutely no idea” she said.

They were walking down 11th avenue looking at the high rise buildings; the creator had evidently not touched this place in a while.

“I think I should talk to Maxis, to check in, ok?” Will asked passing a hot dog stand and grabbing one right out from under the stand person’s nose who kept staring at Lisa for some reason.

“Hel-lo” she said to the “programmed” person as Will walked into an alley way with his hot dog .To her surprise, the person blinked and shook his head of sandy blonde hair; he couldn’t have been more than 14.

“Um, cou-could I help you” he said, his cheeks turning scarlet.

“No thankyou” she said with a face that said, “just another boy…” She walked away from the stand and followed Will.

“My names Austin if you….” he yelled from behind but broke off.

It did not occur to her that that was not the way normal Sims acted.

“I don’t know how long I can be here any longer Ben, it’s driving me crazy, two years Ben, two years… imagine…” he was on the verge of tears.
“I’m sorry but we have not made much headway, we’ve pulled everyone off the development of Sim City 5 to work on this problem and you do not know how hard it has been to keep the government from knowing this” Ben said exhausted “Two years of working on the same problem, it’s been a real pain and your savings in Maxis have nearly dropped to zero, we can’t keep doing this.

[A199999999 0]

Good update!

[sloppet 3]

hell yeah it's good!!

[jacqulina 162]

nice start interesting story

[GMT 389]

very cool story!

i love it.

cant wait to read more

[Firebird 40]

Update comming soon (had a date last night), thanks for all your good comments!

[mudspreader 0]

Very imaginative approach to CJing! Keep up the good work, Some more pictures would be nice.

[Firebird 40]

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[A199999999 0]

the story is still very intresting! please update.

[Frymon 0]

the story is very iteresting,But some more pictures would be nice,still good story.


Fmon

[Firebird 40]

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"HELP!!" called out a familiar voice "HELP I'm hanging off this darn cliff!!".

"Well, why are you there!" Lisa called out, following the voice.

"I don't know, one second I was handing a hot dog to some old programmed bald person with an overlarge mustache, then I find myself hanging off this cliff" he yelled " I would really like it if you - there you are" Lisa had walked out of the forest and found herself staring at a huge cliff.

"Oh snap" she said covering her face "I hate heights, Will could you help him" she said cautiously.

Will frowned; he did not believe her for a second, but, he walked to the edge and grasp his hand, gave a huge pull and he was he was flat on his back in seconds with Austin at his feet "I'm too old for this" he said panting.

"Thanks for---" Austin said his face was a sweaty glowing fireball.

"Don't mention it" said Lisa looking at him with a puzzled look.

He opened his mouth to say something.

"Literally" she said, becoming stern.

"Ok then" Will say breaking the moment "what do we do now".

They all turned their heads toward the forest, they heard a sound that, could it be, sounded like a helicopter.

"Are you three all right" came a calm, official sounding over a loud speaker.

"Um, for the moment, yes, unless one of us falls off a cliff again" Will yelled at the helicopter.

"Would you like a lift?" said the man.

"Well duh" said Lisa.

The helicopter landed in a clearing, making it very windy.

"Oh now look at my hair, it's getting all frizzy" she complained.

"Why are girls so concerned about their hair?" Austin couldn't help himself.

"Because we are, that's why" she said agitated.

He looked confused.

Will rolled his eyes.

"Are you getting on Will" Ben said.

"Ben?" Will said confused.

"Yeah, I put in for some field work, I was getting board, along with these guys, and he jerked his head. The four guys in the copter nodded.

"But aren't you trapped here with us" Will said confused.

"Thought it was time to see the problem from your point of view" he replied with a grin.

"You did, did you" Will replied.

"So" Ben said as they flew to the nearest town "has anything strange happened lately?"

"Does landing off a cliff from out of nowhere count" Austin frowned.

"Does memory loss count" Will say.

"Does everything count" Lisa pointed out.

"Hmm, I don't know, but it sounds like we have a virus, and a very clever one at that" Ben said with a thoughtful face.

"A virus, designed only for SimCity 4, preposterous" as he stood up to look more intimidating. The copter lurched to one side and he fell down.

"Hey" Ben said "it could be true".

Will just sat there, frowning.

EDIT: I fixed this post.