Red Star Productions

[delija21 295]

well this is my current project...this is first of totaly 5 buildings that will make an residental mega lot

<img alt="" src="http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/2348/belville9pi3.jpg" />

<img alt="" src="http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/7294/belville10er6.jpg" />

<img alt="" src="http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/3769/belville11zq2.jpg" />

<img alt="" src="http://img167.imageshack.us/img167/5071/belville12es1.jpg" />

  Edited July 30, 2011 by delija21  

[ianpaschal 77]

Looking good! Very nice start. I doubt this is your first try at making buildings. I know it's in its early stages but I have to say it; you need more detail! It's good that you have some frames and things on the windows, but the overall structure could use some more framework around whatever the wall surface is made out of. It looks pretty modern so it's probably made out of some sort of paneling, which needs seems and things. Other than that though, very nice start.

[WeekendCityPlanner 19]

Me likey. As Scipio said; detail, detail, detail. If ya have a lotta detail, this thing will look great. What program are you using. 3ds MAX?

[Sim shady 12]

I think you have an excellent start here My advice is to stay the course and listen to everyone else's advice

[delija21 295]

thanx...nice to hear you like it....this is my second bat...i will add some more detail but not now because i will get finish with modeling of buildings that will be on the lot....so,here is my current progress and yes i'm using 3dsMax

[DarkEldar 6]

These are very good, it would also be nice if you could get BAT4MAX so we could see these in an SC4 view

[delija21 295]

finaly....the belville complex

[Godzillaman 21]

Now that looks good!

[bbfan02 23]

Wow, can't wait to see it completed!

[delija21 295]

current progress

[Jasoncw 12,030]

They're looking good so far. It looks like the links didn't work in your latest post though.

[delija21 295]

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[bixel 1,228]

The models are real nice, tho you will need to start working on the textures. also it is good to have certain parts of geometry with a different texture, and of course the roofs need soe work. All in all tho this is looking to be a really nice complex!!

[delija21 295]

wich one do you think look better....1 or 2???

By delija21 at 2008-02-12

[metasmurf 705]

Number 2 I would say Seems you have some problems with the texture tiling though

[ianpaschal 77]

Well, 2 LOOKS better because you can see the lines, even thought I THINK they should go the direction of 1.

If you can get them to go with the sides of the buliding, like #1, but have the obvious divisions of panels like #2, that would be the best I think.

[delija21 295]

well...i made some changes on the roof and this is how it looks now

By delija21 at 2008-02-12

By delija21 at 2008-02-12

[Jasoncw 12,030]

It's still hard to tell. When you do the preview, make sure at the top it says "1:1", and make sure that you don't resize the screenshots.

I like #1, I think it's a unique angle.

[bixel 1,228]

hrmm...do the roofs really look like that? You are really close to have some great BATs here but eh roofs are still too simplistic for me. Sorry I am not here to disuade you but to help you as much as I can. Try checking out some of my roof designs and see what you can come up with. Also here is a housing project in India - for some inspiration of roof and apartment design.

source thread here:http://www.inrnews.com/indianrealestate/all/

if you like these designs go here for the main plan >>

http://www.alliancein.com/orchidsprings_keyplan.htm

click on floor plans for excellent reference and design...hrmm this is a pretty neat looking place maybe I will BAT it --- but I got a lot of things going on. Just dropping in to give you ideas and inspiration.

[delija21 295]

i know it's unusual to se roofs like that in real life but here is a pic of the original render how the buildings will look like when the construction is complited...they are all bare and there will be nothing on them...that's why i made roofs like that...

By delija21 at 2008-02-13

[delija21 295]

this is how it all looks now

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[Jasoncw 12,030]

You should model the ribbing on the roof.

[jugioh1012 2]

I like the roof.I don't see what is wrong with it...

[WeekendCityPlanner 19]

Jason's right, you should do the ribbing on the roof. If the roof is mearly just a texture, it'll look poor and unrealistic. I think you should also do more with roof junk. Also, there should be some more activity on the lot and the model. You're not going to fly over a major city and find nothing in those balconies. In my personal opinon those textures look unconvincing. Or maybe it's just because they're not my type of textures. Who knows? But other than that the model looks terrific.

[Criquette 0]

Nice bats! But it would be even better if you make it fitable with road layout like.. this - /\

[bixel 1,228]

Ooh, its starting to look better and better! Very nice updates.

[delija21 295]

current progress on belville nr 2.....i will try to finish belville nr 1 during this weekend

By delija21 at 2008-02-14

By delija21 at 2008-02-14

[bixel 1,228]

Yo are getting better and better. Of course I like big stuff and you are doing just that. Luve It. Keep going. Dont hesitate to completely change the colors and textures of stuff sometimes you get remarkable results. Its looking good.

[delija21 295]

small update

By delija21 at 2008-02-16

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don't get discouraged by the critiques, you're progressing wonderfully, keep plugging at it and you will not only have a masterpiece but will have picked up a lot along the way.