Martian Colony

[rawr APPLES 15]

.....seriously? NO WAY!

[un1 41]

I love spam for dinner!

[Evillions 552]

I had lag when I was typing my CJ intro. So I'm sorry if the there were mutiplue theards.

In anycase, the REAL story actually begins here.

(No Pictures for now. Just read.)

In the year 2042. Earth knows that Mars can be habitable or colonaztion. During 2042, the colony spaceship lanched into Mars orbit and landed safely. Years later a colony was formed. Since the colony grown big enough for a spaceport. Earth has decided to have the public live on Mars. Before 2071, another colony ship was about to lanuch. Thousands of people walked into the gates of the ship and everyone was ready for takeoff. 5...4....3....2...1....0....BLAST OFF!!!!!! Thousands of people waved goodbye, cried, and happy. Soon as it landed, it landed at the colony that formed first. Soon as it landed. Thousands of people gathered to see the spaceship land. It was an abuzz you might say.

STORY END

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Update #1 

Main Colony

(Pardon me if the pictures don't show. I'll just make a link to it then.)

Soon after the new Earthian indivdual had landed into Mars. They all took a tour around the main colony. Eventully they became residents. Anyways, they settled right here.

(Don't mind the cars, no replacement for cars came aways if anyone wants to do it.)

In addtion, they went to the pool to cool off or be heated. And, you don't want to know what happen in there. A 23-year-old man vomited in the pool. And made bubbles if you know what I mean.

After that, a highway in Mars! You never see those in the other Martian colonies. 

If you seen the factory areas. Nice, high-tech, clean, etc. It was huge for a high-tech industrail area. And no pollution because techology is more advanced than earth's because of mineral and knowledge.

Just a close ups. The pictures is self-explantroy.

Spaceship building. This spaceship is the finest of the year! Will be in the market in 2073 at your local spaceship dealers! lol

Furthermore, you might know the building next to the dome zoo. (Simcity 2000 anyone?)

Additonally, a new staduim for those sports fans out there. Its baseball by the way. (I did a zoom to check if there is anything inside.

Close to the industrail area. A high-class robot store. Replaces that pesky I-bot store. 

Last but not least. An overview of the main colonys'  downtown area. Or urban area.

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That concludes update #1. Tune in more about the story. And it shall be answered.

[Follarch 327]

And comes the start of a Sim Mars journal. Nice little short story about your journal's history. Though I honestly exacted to read that when the second colony ship arrived they would find the colony deserted. oO *insert creepy music here*

[JakeMD 107]

great SM journal!! I love your use of the new content developed post-beta 2.

[Evillions 552]

Replies:

Archean: I hope you like my first update so far. Thanks for looking.

SWAT-MEDIC: Thnak you. BTW are you still working on BATs and the transit part like air/sea ports?

Also, I had to remove the maxis oridances out becuase my city was going down hill. So do you might as well add more oridances while you're at it.

[Patricius Maximus 236]

There are many things I could say about this CJ and the concept itself, but it can be summed up as "I like it.". Can't wait for your next update.

[Evillions 552]

Update #2 A new colony eshtablished.

Welcome to 1-1 Cellblock. A sub-colony to the main-colony. Its called a sub-colony becasue its not a major colony so thats why its called a sub-colony. But this sub-colony isnt the worst. Its the best because its the first sub-colony established. And its engerneeirs are reowned for areospace techolngoy for varoius reasons. In anycase. Heres 1-1 Cellblock.

Just an intersection next to some parks and offices.

You see that sim over there? Well he must be destoryed ,becasue he wants to take over the main colony and all the colonies possible. Code name: Stinky socks

Stinky Socks thinks: I must take over Mars and its coloines....MMMWHAHAH.....interuped 

Stinky Socks says: Ouch! What was that for?!

Random Sim: I dunno. I felt like it.

Stinky Socks thinks: Arrggggg. 

Stick Socks: OUCH!

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Getting back to 1-1 Cellblock. Heres a new resident tower building. A high-class condo with ALL you want here. 

Beside the condos. Are the Colony-of-the-art middle-class apartments. Just with a pool and a virtual sunroof.  (Rent is $1500.23 + 2% tax.)

Like I said earlier, this sub-colony is reowned for its aerospace techogloy. They use these type of ship for shuttles for Earth to Mars and vise-versa. (Not meant for starship battle criusers or war.)

I feel bad for Earth. With these kind of ships. Millions of these are made each year. Ever since 2009, people belive UFO existed. And thats true because those "U.F.Os" are Mars battlefighters. The real fighters are 10 times more powerful than a fighter. 

Just some offices. Nothing new, but something old.

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That ends the tour of the new colony. For more infomation go to the "roots" musmem. 

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Replies:

Patricius Maximus; Thank you. Heres update 2 for you and everyone else.

[SounderBruce 173]

great update

[TimeMaster 4]

Awesome! I think that SimMars journals are the best. Good luck.

-Time

[timcravey 169]

Cool! Way to go Evillions. Are you going to do some BATs for this CJ?

[Evillions 552]

Replies:

ComputerGuy890100: Thank you. I hope you'll like the next update on Feburary 1st.

TimeMaster: Thanks. I hoped you liked my updates.

timcravey: Yes I did. I just finshed my prefabs and factories today. Just check in the workshop fourm. And you might find it. Also the jobs on my factory BAT is way too high for a small BAT. About 6,000 jobs on a small building. Sheesh. And my prefabs. Just need to render them. Along with my residentail complex. A tall, twisting building like your I-bot headquarters.

All viewers: I might let this CJ turn into an interactive one which allows you to live on my colonies. Just need to vote. And I hoped you like my jokes for some of my updates.

Thanks for viewing.

[WARGOD 11]

Great CJ so far i started sim mars or the first time is its fun hope to see more updates soon

[Evillions 552]

Update #3 Part 1/3

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We been to the main colony in update #1. Well this time there has been improvement. The year 2075. The coloinsts who came from Earth in 2071. They have good lives and all that. But they learned that an attack is coming. They must prepare with starfighters and ships. So far the massive ones that main colony has can stand a chance aginst the warships. According to the probe. But thats later and this is now. What matters is change. And here it is.

Heres the ships. So far these ships need to be moved to the future site of the main colony's spaceport. 

Here's the rebuilt area you might know

You might tell some difference from these two pictures.

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Replies: WARGOD: Thanks and hope you like simmars. Look in the workshop forum in simmars. And see how you can BAT.

[jacqulina 162]

interesting start and intro my friend,looking great so far.fantastic pics too.

[De Ja Vu 117]

Wow! Looks great! I haven't seen many sim mars CJs but I think that this is pretty cool!

Keep up the nice job!

-Dejavu

[Evillions 552]

Update #3 2/3 Spaceports and War Preparations

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Replies: 

jacqulina: Thanks hope you're watching this new update.

De Ja Vu:Thanks. I think this a first simmars CJ. I think not sure.

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Before war. The colonies have put all their resources together to establish 3 spaceports. The first for starfighters. The second one for coloization and military. The last spaceport is for bombers, battle cruisers, and starfighters. So far the colonies dosen't know who we're up against. So we sent another probe to check. But thats later.

So heres the first spaceport. 

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This spaceport is the first. As you can see. There are starfighters and cargo ships.

A gamma KLX-3 laser.

Heres the chemial and ship fuel factory for the spaceships.

A cargo ship with all the extra fuel for the fighters.

An overview of the first spaceport built.

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Second Spaceport.

Just spaceshuttles equiped with beta XLK3-23 lasers.

Close up of the shuttles.

And a colony ship. This is the one I was talking about in update #1.

More of them.

Overview of the second spaceport.

A skyhigh hotel for the guests. 2000$ for one room/ one night.

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Third Spaceport

Some fighters are ready to be shipped to the launch pads

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Bombers, fighters, battlecruisers, and fighters. Too much to pick. So little time....

The battlecriusers have Ultra magmum 6K2HZ lasers. Best lasers on the market and able to destory an asteriod!

Fighters and small cruisers right here. Equiped with Gamma 5YTC lasers.

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Thats ends this part of the update. 

The vote is still up. You can still vote if you want to live on my colonies!

[ironicepitome 0]

Nah, i'd rather be a human living on earth.

[Twenty20 28]

It's very impressive, you've a lot of futuristic buildings ! Your martian colony is awesome and...can I say realistic ? Great work !!

[Evillions 552]

Replies

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ironicepitome: your choice. No-one is forcing you to live on Mars.

Twenty20: Thanks and I might its not that realistic. But who knows! Stay tune for update 3/3.

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Update #3 3/3 Take off and Flight

Important Document of the Goverment of Mars

9/23/75 A4.GB56K

Since we launched a new (spy) probe. We're able to seek our attacker(s). It seems to be a colony of Earth. Named XJK4-23. No offical name has been declared. We should of have a diplomcy with them. But they didn't want to be with our alliance. So they decided to attack Mars so they can remain the best plant on the Mily Way Galaxy. This remains one option for Mars. WAR. We delvoped a mining factily next to our bases. Since it has major protection. Such as shown here. 

 

Moreover, the bases have just as amount of protection as an army base. Expect just a bit more. Right now part of the fleet took off to XJK4-23. The other part stood back or ready for combat. So far, we had a transmission from the captain of the fleet. 

Captian: So far we had no deaths reported at XJK4-23. We just set up a base to 

XJK4-22. A neighboring planet of XJK4-23. We had part of our fleet stood back at Mars for protection and just incase of an invasion.

Captian: Transmission over.

Since the military needed aleast a base or more. We set up two bases for coloinest, and troops to live on the bases. Commerial and Industrail use is a factor to our bases. Without it, we couldn't manfacture weapons, gadgets, armor, sell products, etc. Just an overview of the bases.

 

  

At the western base. (the shuttleport). We set up small mining factiles around the port for production of spaceshuttles and small battle crusiers. We also had to build labor camps for increased production. 

(Sorry for using the picture twice. But it has mining factilies around the camps and the port.)

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That ends update #3 3/3. Remember this, more posts or views = more updates. This rule can show me that people actually want to see more updates. But then again your choice. So Stay tuned for more!

[Evillions 552]

Ghost town here. An update but no replies. So I'll try to update tomarrow if possible.

[ilikehotdogsalot 311]

What an awesome CJ, such a creative idea! I really like it and hope to see more, I might have to even try this myself, it looks like a lot of fun

[Evillions 552]

Just a overview of the colony. The militay bases are not included what you are seeing right now. The base is at far right of the region which you can't see for noe since it has to be filled up.

This can give an idea of the cities and colonies you saw in this CJ.

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Replies:

ilikehotdogsalot: Thanks and I hope this can give you some ideas in your CJ. Also stay tuned for Update #4. Also if you spaceport parts and all that, go to somy's BATs and that yushia sim broad thing. They have LOADS of good BATs that can fit with Simmars. Also you can find some good ones in the STEX but never likely on the LEX.

[Evillions 552]

Update #4 1/2 Operation: W.A.R

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Like I said there is going to be a war between Earth and Mars. Since the government of Mars doesn't want bombing around the colonies. Insted do it on XJK3-23. So the fleet from XJK4-22 commcenced into combat. 

Mars vs. Earth / XJK4-23

Many were destoryed in the first hour of combat! 

Then the remaining took action and boom! (bombing sound) The Martain fleet fought the Earth fleet into the battle of death!

Then nothing left but a few of each.

More combat.....

Then the last ship is destoryed of the Earth fleet. 

But thats not the end of the mission. More to come.

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That ends part 1. Come back and post your ideas for part 2!

[JakeMD 107]

Update looks great, nice detail in the war

[Graiskye 0]

Very cool, If I could make one tiny suggestion it would be to spellcheck. It just makes the posts seem ....less intelligent.

Very cool CJ tho.

[Evillions 552]

Replies:

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SWAT-MEDIC: Thanks, stay tuned for more.

Graiskye: Thanks, I tried using the spellcheck. Didn't work for me. I'll try to spell some words better next time.

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To all: The poll standards will go into effect in update 5 and so on. Soon after the war is over. But if I plan to have something about the colony. Then it will have to skip for an update.

300th post WOOT!

[Evillions 552]

Update #4 2/2 Teaser

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Part 2 of the war.

Since the Earthlings escaped the battle. We must attack the main city so we can stop the mass production of weapons and ships. So far, we ended our production of our space ships since its a 100% chance that we would win. In addition, our ships have the best weapons tech. and best

R and D center in the galaxy. Just then, we have recived a photo of the main city.

(Work in Progress)

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That ends this teaser, stay tuned for more updates.

BTW: I need some military BATs for Simmars. If anyone like to help just PM me. Or better yet have some BATs that I can have.

[Evillions 552]

Update 4 2/2 Operation: W.A.R

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Since the Earthlings escaped the battle. We must attack the main city so we can stop the mass production of weapons and ships. So far, we ended our production of our space ships since its a 100% chance that we would win. In addition, our ships have the best weapons tech. and best

R and D center in the galaxy. Just then, we have recived a photo of the main city.

(Work in Progress)

We learned that the main city is called "Delta City" at the planet Earth.  We deployed tanks to the main city to destory the tanks only. We can't kill people because they didn't do nothing wrong compared to the government.....  Although the tanks we have might be from World War Two. THe tanks have been modified for better combat and advantages. Whereas, Earth did the same. There's no "upper hand" in this battle. All equal but the amount of tanks and types of tanks.

The western side of the battle feild. Thats Mars.

The eastern side is Earth.

Then..... COMBAT time!!!

 

Little caustiles this time than the spaceship battle.

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Then the tanks moved...

More combat........

Then the last Earthling tank is left.

The remianing are closing in...

Oh wait... More surviors in the Martian army! WE might have a chance!

And drum roll please.................

The Martian Army has won! Woo!!!

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That ends the war now. If you wish to comment please do so. And the poll results will go into effect in the next update. Please keep in mind the poll will the CJ's path. Such as an interactive one or a story. Your choice.

[Evillions 552]

no-one here. Do I have a broing City Jouurnal here? If I do, then I might as well close this CJ. (Not really closing it. Its just the lack of replies of this CJ. Not too many replies ever since.)