Stargate-Andromeda (formerly known as Atlantica)

[Blazerhawk 162]

Welcome to my second CJ Atlantica. This CJ is based in the city of Atlantis, capital of Atlantica. The events in this CJ occur around 2200. The CJ is Sci-Fi and will contain some elements of that in almost every update.

Something you should know about how I play. I use a lot of cheat mods, but generally grow everything in my CJ. Specifically, I use these mods and lots.

Radical Ordinance Mod

NAM Radical Version

RH PlopMod (used infrequently)

SWAP

RIMP

NDEX (almost everything)

BSC(Simgoober and SMN)

HKBAT 

2ch.net.simplayer

Japanese BATs(If you ask I may not be able to tell where these are from)

That concludes the essential information.

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Introduction

I am Daniel Hunter, President of Atlantica as well as mayor of Atlantis. We came to Atlantica fifty years ago. Back then I was a Fleet Commander in the Intergalactic Space Force. Word had come of a new planet nicknamed 932B. I was dispatched to explore the planet. I had been on many of these missions before and knew from expierience that I should take a few supply ships along. I chose the V505 supply ships, as well as the T402 exploration craft for my fleet. This is a picture of the fleet over the Klenston Ocean.

 

We arrived at 932B on December 8, 2151. Protocol stated that before we could land we had to take atmospheric readings. When we did the readings came back with a grade of A+. In other words the atmosphere was better than earth's. We landed just to the northwest of modern day Atlantis. After a couple days of searching for life forms we confimed that there were none. Before settlement could begin colonization, certain structures had to be built. Among these were the Spaceship Landing Zone, Communtications Facility and Embassy Buildings.

"Your tour has been arranged. You will see these facilities today. I must warn you that a storm is approaching and you may get caught in it. Don't panic you will not be harmed. Now go."

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"First we see the Spacecraft Landing Zone here is a photo from shortly after its completion.

"Continuing on we see the communications facility. It handles all communication between 932B and Earth. It is also the militaries intelligence center. It looks as if a storm is near while we're here I will give you a guided tour of the facility.

"Okay the storm has cleared let's return to the emabssy. The embassy houses ambassadors from every nation known to man. Up on the 43rd Floor is our President's Office. He has requested to meet with you."

[woodb3kmaster 342]

Fascinating start! I look forward to reading more. (Woot for first reply!)

[owenluby 1]

Interesting start.. Ill keep an eye on it!

wen

[Schulmanator 5,793]

An interesting way to start. Looking forward to a CJ with Sci Fi. I enjoy that as well.

[GMT 389]

interesting start, I have to agree.

waiting for more

[RushHourFreak 1]

Great story.

Like the pics

A good introduction, getting ready for the former start!

RHF

[jacqulina 162]

interesting start good story,nice pics look forward to more

[tommiej 0]

very interesting start! like the story, looking forward for more pics..

[Blazerhawk 162]

Warning: Some the events in this update may be sensitive issues for people.

Disclaimer: All persons, groups, and/or events in this update are purely ficticious. Any resemblance to real people, groups, and/or events is purely coincidental.

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woodb3kmaster-Thank you

owenluby-Thank you

Schulmanator-Something can be said for good Sci-Fi. Thanks

GMT-Thank you

RushHourFreak-Thank you

jacqulina-Thank you

tommiej-Thank you

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Update 1-Terror

Inside the Presidential office.

"I have brought you here to look into a series of bomb threats received by several compnaies in Atlantis. The threats demand $14.5 billion, or a bomb will be detonated on July 7th. All the threats were found in the northern half of downtown. I will escort you and a group of investigators there tonight. I will show you the areas threatened as well as where the threats were found. Now get some rest. It's going to be a long night."

As I sat down to organize tonight's tour and investigation, I received a phone call from the Atlantis Inelligence Agency. They informed me of five possible suspects, and informed me that two of the threats were not credible, as they had detained those responsible for the threats, thus stopping those attacks.

Later That Night

"We will visit every site including those threats which have been thwarted. Our first stop will be in Eastern Downtown. This area contains the thwarted threats. Still you may be able to find out what these terrorists motives might be."

"Continuing on we enter Central Downtown. One bomb threat was found in this area. We will investigate that one in just a little while. This area contains two Atlantis's tallest buildings First i need to show you the area arond the final bomb threat."

"Finally we arrive at the waterfront. One threat was found here. This is Atlantis's financial district. Now we'll go to the first bomb threat site."

"This is where the first bomb threat was found. It is the headquarters of Leftwich Construction, and also Atlantis's third tallest building. The threat was found two days ago."

"The second threat was found here. This is a general office building and has a mall on floors one through thirteen. The threat was found yesterday."

"This is the Atlantis Supercomputer. It houses all information for Atlantica's residents. It also contains all criminal records and teleportation data. When in Atlantis, any time you get online you are accessing this database. It is near one of the thwarted bomb plots."

"This is the University of Atlantis's soccer field. The threat here was thwarted; however, you may still be able to deduce the terrorists motives."

"The Mall of Atlantis was the other thwarted plot. It is the busiest mall in Atlantica. I will let you do some investigating and tonight we will rendezvous at NDEX Office Supplies Headquarters to discuss your findings. Oh, by the way here is the list of possible suspects. If you could narrow it down please do so."

We rendezvoused as planned that night. Our discuusion revealed that the trrorists were plotting to kill the most people with one bomb as possible. In addition to that they were trying to mess up the Atlantis Supercomputer. Teleportaion records are used to correctly transport the matter. Any corruption of this data would result in injury or possibly death. We also had a list of five suspects.

(ringtone)

"Yes, hello, this is Daniel Hunter what may I do for you? At Jameson Chemicals? You got a trace? Okay we'll be there in five minutes."

"AIA just intercepted a phone call. 'The wrath of Venus' just threatened Jameson Chemicals. They traced the call and want us to get over ther pronto."

We drove across town not knowing what to expect. We all knew we may not get out alive. These terrorists would be armed. We arrived at the building and rode up to the 89th floor, to the origin of the bomb threat. A voice called over our headsets 10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1...

...to be continued

[crazychickensc12 84]

Lookin good here, your off to a wonderful start!! keep up the good work

[Yoman3 5]

Indeed very Sci-fish. May I ask where that stadium came from?

[Angrymidget134 0]

Interesting!

[Angrymidget134 0]

yes where did the stadium come from?

[Blazerhawk 162]

Yoman3 and Angrymiget134 the stadium was made by Raika and can be found on his site. http://raika-s.hp.infoseek.co.jp/ click the third button from the bottom (right above it is line that reads in Japanese

[Schulmanator 5,793]

Very interesting plot development

[Blazerhawk 162]

Disclaimer: All persons, groups, and/or events in this update are purely fictitious. Any resemblance to real people, groups, and/or events is purely coincidental.

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crazychickensc12-Thanks

Yoman3-Thanks. Did you find the stadium?

Angrymidget134-Thanks. Did you find the stadium? Also if you want to say something you thought of after you replied please edit your post.

Schulmanator-Thank you.

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Update 2-Gotta catch them all

10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1...Now

Crash!

We broke down the door. On both sides of the doorway were guards. They started firing at us. Two of the sharp shooters in our group shot them in the shoulders. The rest of the group panicked and started firing on us at random. Their shots were terrible, and they quickly ran out of ammo. We got busy cuffing them up. Then we heard the door slam. I looked around; Alice Polinski had escaped. I opened the door and started running down the hall after the only person I could see. She turned and ran into one of the elevators. She was headed for the roof plaza on 101st floor.

I took the stairs. Running up the flights, I got to the plaza just as I saw a figure jump over the edge of the building. I looked over to see the figure turn on a jet pack and head for Peace Park. Peace Park was just across the river, and would no doubt be crowded at this hour. I checked my watch. 10:05 pm, she was going to try to blend in with the crowds there. I knew that I had to get there quickly.

Almost without thinking I got into my parachute and jumped down. Traffic on the road was light and I landed next to the car we had used drive over here. After removing my parachute I jumped in the car and sped toward Peace Park.

I arrived not a minute too soon. I could see Alice landing over by the Park River Bridge.I hopped out of the car. As I ran toward the bridge I saw that she wasn't moving. When I got to the bridge, I look ed at her. Guessing her height at 6 foot even she was tall and very angular. I charged her knocking her on her back. Just then the ground started buckling and bouncing. I stumbled backwards and fell over the edge of the bridge. The bucking was making hard to hold on. Just before I fell Alice reached her hand out. I grabbed it out of instinct. She yanked me onto the bridge and just as quickly knocked me into a state of semi-consciousness.

She dragged me into a car and started tying me up. We were headed toward the library she said to some driver. The library didn't make much sense since it was just down the block from Atlantis Police Headquarters.

Once inside the library, I was taken down the stairs, into the basement. Then toward the back of the room she opened a trap door and forced me down there.

Today it was the top story on the news. I'm locked down under the Atlantis Main Library. The outside world has no way to conact me. And I'm in the hands of a terrorist group that would like nothing more than to see me torn to shreds.

...to be continued

[Yoman3 5]

Yup I got it. Thanks for your help!

[jacqulina 162]

wonderfull work and pics,good close up shots.nice start to buildings planning is good and the detail,beautifull night pics

[Blazerhawk 162]

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Yoman3-Glad to be of assistance.

jacqulina-Thank you very much.

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Update 3-Turning The Tables

I was desperate to say the least. The more they talked, the more nervous I got. They were planning my death for sure. That's when I heard a pulsing sound in my mouth. My phone! I had suspected that these terrorists would have disabled it. Tapping my left thumb and forefinger together I picked it up. "Hello," I whispered.

"......" was all I heard.

I hung up. But now I had an idea. I reopened the connection, then whispered "509-094-8970."

"Hello, this is WTOP Channel 8 Atlantis. How may we help you?" came a cordial secratary.

"You can help by recording this and playing it back in about 30 minutes."

"Sir?"

"Daniel Hunter speaking, contact AIA."

"Yes, Sir."

"AIA recording started." said one of the base generals.

Looking to my left I saw a trash can. I reached my foot over and kicked it as hard as I could. The leader ran over.

"It might help you, if you keep quiet," she barked at me.

"Sorry, ma'am. Say what's you're name?"

"Nellie Parker. Why do you want to know?"

"Just curious. You know any of these people?"

"A few. That's John West," she said pointing. "And he's Robert Gilmore."

"What are you guys doing working together?"

"I don't know. Whatever the corporation says. Why am I even talking to you?" She turned around and slapped me.

I waited until she was gone. Then I told whispered, "AIA, did you get those names."

"Sure did."

"Run a comprhensive check on those names. I'll be there in 10 minutes."

I hung up. Then with my nose I activated the rope cutters on my military suit. After wriggling around for a little while I cut the ropes. Then I ran out the door. I crossed to the nearest teleportation station. Using my ID accessed a secure passage to Atlantis Army Base.

I took a short nap. I awoke to a knocking on my door. It was General Klaximiher. He showed me a chart and said curtly, "This just from the first names we got on that recording."

I stared in amazement.

to be continued...

[Schulmanator 5,793]

Interesting plot development!

[ccecill 52]

Very good so far crushedcar. I'm going to be starting on your review right now. btw, I got that stadium.

[football_fever 6]

Amazing story! You're going to have to tell me the names of some of those awesome looking buildings...the gold one near taipei 101 and burj dubai? Also the one labeled Atlantis Plaza Building...great city

[Blazerhawk 162]

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Schulmanator-Thank you.

ccecill-Thanks for the review. Check my signature.

football_fever-The gold building is called (wait for it) The Gold Tower. It's on the STEX. The Atlantis Plaza Building is Al Burj by ks_jpn it is found at his site. Here is the link.

http://www.geocities.jp/ks3514136/bat.html

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Update 4-Like something out of Sci-Fi

That night I went to bed late. When I finally did get to sleep, I was in no way resting peacefully. Strange memories kept coming to mind. A bright flash of light then, boom, nothing. I don't know how long I was out like that. I do remember waking up to a jolting of my bed. I was half awake when I heard the distinctive shattering of glass. I was thrown out of bed and on to the floor. I struggled to stand, only to be laid out with another powerful jolt of the building. I heard a strange sound as that of metal when in bends. Then, all too suddenly, it stopped. I turned on my computer. The standard "we just had a major earthquake" screen popped up.

8.5! Less than 48-hours ago we had had a 7.8. This reminded me of that supercheesy 10.5 movie. Of course no one at that time knew that a similar scenario would play out nearly 120 years later. Anyway, that was enough to keep me up the rest of the night.

In the morning, I contacted the 607th special-ops company in Ocean City. The 607th was a covert group of female saboteurs and spies. I was planning on having a couple of them infiltrate the Wrath of Venus cell. They requested I come to Ocean City to lay out the plan.

Normally, trips to Ocean City were one-day deals. Just 100 miles to the south of Atlantis, Ocean City was a major military installation. The town was set in the foothills of the Northwest Range. When I arrived via car, (it was a scenic drive) the 607th took me into the Ocean City Base Headquarters. We were discussing strategy when the sky darkened. A storm was coming and it was going to be a big one.

We prepared to shut everything down. Just before we were completely shut down, we received a radio transmission.

"This Fox 2-Niner-niner reporting to base. Come in base."

"This is base," said the leader of the 607th.

"We have unidentified objects in the water."

"What are your cooridinates?"

"3 degrees 18 minutes North by 175 degrees 5 minutes West. The objects are at least the size of submarines."

"Can you enable video?"

"Yes."

"Fox 2-niner-niner we can't see anything down there."

"...Electrical systems......altitude falling..........................mayday.............BOOM!"

"Fox 2-niner-niner come in."

"................."

"He crashed." One of the captains said.

"Yes, but from what?"

I thought for minute. "Check the video pause it just before the crash."

"What in blue blazes is that?"

"I don't know. Some sort of EMP."

Crash.

We looked outside. We were in the storm. It was going to be a while.

"Was it just me or was that green lightning?"

"Huh?"

"That was."

"I don't get it. Why would lightning be green?"

"Well, static electricity can produce bolts of green tint. But, that would be a massive charge," I said.

We sat down to ponder this. Well, for a while it was just as dark as could be. It was a perfect time to research that question that was on my mind. Who was this mysterious corporation behind the Wrath of Venus?

"Power is out to every part of town," said someone.

I was busy. I did glance outside. Let's just say that it wasn't this dark the last time a typhoon ripped through Atlantis. I quickly got back to work though. Remembering the chart I had seen I pulled up the page for the company where Nellie Parker worked.

Genetic creatures, what on earth would terrorists want with those? I was going to check everything out, but something inside me made me shiver.

...to be continued

[Schulmanator 5,793]

Hmmm- the plot thickens!

[football_fever 6]

Very nice. I'll be reading this from now on.

[Blazerhawk 162]

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Schulmanator-Yes, it certainly does.

football_fever-Thank you at least I know a couple of people are reading it. Also feel free to ask about any building you like.

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In the Middle of Nowhere

When the storm passed I drove to Howard Tech Labs in Oliver City. The other two terrorists worked at jobs in a telemarketing service and a political ad company. I would alert the security at those buildings, but there seemed no need to investigate further into those cases. Howard Technologies worried me though. Nanotechnology, when used improperly, could create destruction thousands of times greater than any bomb ever invented.

To say that Oliver City was a technology town would have been an understatement. To say that its name fit would have been a complete and utter lie. The town of 1900 people was located to the northwest of Atlantis in a valley between Mount Shumaker and Granstad Peak. It was the home to many of the galaxies greatest scientists, most of whom worked in the labs that dominated the town. The town was also a mining town.

Howard Technologies had built their lab in one of the more remote locations. It was actually on the top of Mount Chatahochno. This was because of the nature of business in which they dealt, not because they wanted to be isolated so they could plot intergalactic destruction.

Upon arriving at the lab I proceeded to the site administration building. I took the elevator to the 13th floor. Walking down the halls, the building seemed almost abandoned. If it weren't for the incessant sound of Pong and other late 20th century games I would have freaked out. I turned left and went into a door marked "Genetic's Lab Supervisor."

knock...knock...knock

"Come in," said an all too familiar voice. I walked in very cautiously.

"Ahh...Daniel. I see you have come to check out our outfit. Am I correct?"

"Don't tease me, Jonag. I'm not here to socialize. I am here on official government business."

"Oh, right. You're the President."

"Shut up, Jonag. I want to see the records on genetic research here for the last year."

"Do you have a warrant?"

"I'm here as AIA; I don't need a warrant."

"Oh really, I think you do." He pulled out a PCC1 assault rifle. "Don't make me shoot you."

"What makes you think I'm not feeding this directly to AAB? Show me the documents."

He reluctantly put away his gun and handed me the records. I walked out as fast as I could and headed toward the genetics lab.

Jonag had been one of my officers during the Galactic Civil War. He hated me for giving John McKing the position of second in command, a position he believed he deserved. While he would never openly admit it, he would love to see me dead.

Everything was very neatly organized, and except for a few reports missing around October of last year, it was a complete report. I handed the folder to the receptionist and asked what had been going on at that time. She simply replied that she had been hired last month and knew nothing of it.

I left the folder and headed over to the security facility. Using my credentials, I was allowed in right away. I was checking the monitors for anything unusual. After finding nothing I decided to leave. 

I took an Aeriel tour and found nothing unusual in the lake. "Odd," I thought. "Normally that's where any water-specific genetic experiments go. Last time was here it looked like an aquarium."

I was on my way home when I saw the lights on in the Glavine Xyomium Factory. That place never satyed open past 5:00 PM. It was now 6:21 PM. I turned in to investigate. Over the sound of the machinery I heard some voices.

"How could you let him escape?"

"I don't know. He's an ex-Navy Seal. They're trained for that kind of stuff."

"Well, alright. But next time I want him dead the minute you see him, understood."

"Understood. If I ever see him again he won't know what hit him."

I had a sinking feeling they were talking about me.

...to be continued 

[FlyingFreeze2 0]

This is a pretty nice story if you ask me. And i would in agree with others that your buildings are very interesting indeed. I'm definatly going to keep an eye ( or two ) on this cj.

[Blazerhawk 162]

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FlyingFreeze2-Thanks. I really appreciate knowing someone is reading this.

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Turn and Run

It wasn't good. Hearing a murder plot never is. I wanted to hear more, but I knew that if I stuck around I was going to be dead. I quickly planted a bug on the side of the building and ran back to my car.

I started the car up and drove away. I was half of a mile from the edge of town when I heard an ominous ticking. There were only to things that made the sound I was hearing, astrophysics labs doing expieremnts on ping-pong and golf balls and time bombs. Since I didn't see a astrophysics lab, or any other buildings for that matter, in the area, it had to be a time bomb.

Tick...tick...

Thinking quickly I put my briefcase opn the gas pedal and prepared to jump out.

Tick..tick...

I jumped out, landed on my side and started rolling down the hill. I grabbed a tree and slowed myself. Then I heard the final sequence of the time bomb.

Tick...tick...BOOOOOMMMM!

Whoever was behind this obviously didn't want there to be any witnesses. I used my teleporter to get home. Once there, I tried to forget the last few days by watching television. It was no use; I couldn't forget. I checked my mail.

Now who would send me a postcard from within the city. I flipped the card over. It read: "I have to see you tonight. Big news. Tell no one. Mark Hunter."

Mark! My brother. It had to be big if he requested in this fashion. I teleported downtown to his office.

Hunter Corp. was the largest company in the galaxy. My brother had founded it only 25 years ago, mainly as video game company. It had since grown to a giant company associated with anything computer related.

I entered Mark's office. He saw me and stood up.

"Hi," he said calmly.

"Hi. You wanted to see me about something," I replied.

"Ah, yes. As you may know we recently had a hack attempt on our computers."

"I know."

"Well, the source of that attempt has been determined as Mason Fusion."

"Mason Fusion? The engine supplies company."

"Yes. The best we can tell the information they after regards the cybernatic transporter we are working on."

"Okay, what do you want me to do about it?"

"We need intelligence on that company for any possible motives for the attack."

"Okay, I'll look into it tomorrow. I've got to go now."

I left for the Galactic Alliance Secratariat. I was going to request that nations put themselves on the lookout for any suspicious activity around Howard Technologies or Mason Fusion.

After that I went to the Atlantican Congress to inform them of the situation. I was glad to see that the renovation of the buildings was complete. It took me an hour to explain everything to them.

Finally, I was home.

I went to sleep rather quickly. That dream repeated itself. I was sound asleep at 2:00 AM, when the one thing I dreamt about happened. I didn't know it until the next morning. It would alter life as I knew it and turn my world upside down.

The next morning I awoke to the sound of my telephone. I picked up.

"Hello," a voice said.

"Hello."

"Shut up. Listen to me. Cease your investigation of Howard Technologies or else."

click...

...to be continued 

[jacqulina 162]

excellent update love what you have done so far,wonderfull pics

[Schulmanator 5,793]

Cool stuff!! Keep up the good work