Green bay The story of Jake Grandfield

[heyden_simcity_4 5]

Green Bay

The story of Jake Grandfield

 

                

Jake Grandfield sat in the car and looked out the window of the moving van.

He and his family have been driving for 14 hours on there way to Green bay.

As the moving van speed down the highway Jake watched as trees flew by finally

He saw a green sigh bearing the words, Green Bay Wisconsin. Jake sat up as he

And his family passed the small community of Stevensville which is located on the 

edge of Green Bay. As he looked out his window he saw kids playing in the streets

And parents working on there gardens to bad he and his parents didn’t live here

Instead they moved into a large apartment in the downtown area.

 

 

 here is the small community jake passes on his way into town 

As time went on the beautiful country sights quickly disappeared and a huge city came into view. Finally Jakes family pulled into an apartment parking lot Jake stepped out and looked around as he ran towards the front door he ran into the Building manager Mike Kennedy. Mike walked to his car and put his books away then turned back to Jake “if you head down the street you will find a mall “he said then he got in his car and drove away. Jake walked up the road and sure there was the mall. 

here is Jakes Apartment complex 

here is the mall that mike tells jake about 

                                                               well thats all for now

[collgab 10]

cool really nice start i really can't wait to see more of this really cool CJ!

keep up your hard work!

[luker91 0]

good start and like i said before i like how you use the pine trees...good story line you have going... is this a recreation cj? because if it is, i would like to see lambeau Field (go packers) keep it up good luck on continuing!

[FavreKev04 13]

I love Green Bay, Wisconsin! But this I don't love

[Cjah 15]

lol....

Favre your quite funny....

Anywho..I must say out of all your CJs...this one really catches the eye and it was a pretty good start considering the amount of photoes,but still...good job!

[moganite 4]

Nice star showing you recreation

[BlondeTwiggy 43]

Keep up the good work heyden!

[heyden_simcity_4 5]

next update will be on saterday

[Yoman3 5]

Nice start!!! Try useing infranview to resize your pics insted of paint. Just google infranview

[sloppet 3]

good start of a new cj (once again..)

Keep it up heyden!

[onlyplace4 603]

Nice start, though you reall need to get better pics as the ones you are posting are way too pixelated. Will follow this with interest.

[heyden_simcity_4 5]

thank you to all who replied lambeau field is comming as soon as a batter biulds it lol onlyplace4

[cityhawk 12]

Looks like a nice start, heyden! Take the other peoples' advice about the pics, though; and use more punctuation marks, too, please, so that everybody (at least me) can read your text without having to guess where a sentence ends and starts. Anyway, lookin' forward to more!

[heyden_simcity_4 5]

Update number one

 

Jake walked up to the mall and checked out some stores it had to be about 7pm when he left on his way home he passed the green bay teen center and then as he walked to his apartment he noticed 2 police cars and an ambulance parked on the street . Jake started to

run as he got to his house he saw his father lying on the floor, he had been stabbed. Jake walked up to his father who was lying on the floor and grabbed his hand “dad” he said as

he bent over his father’s body jakes dad looked at him and began to speak “son there is something you should know I am not your father “then at that moment he died.

 

 

Donald Treampleton didnt even make it to Simgobber hospital on east street

 

Jake ran to his room and locked his door how could this happen, it was all a lie .then jakes room door opened and in came his mom “Jake I am sorry I didn’t tell you but your father left me when you were very young and then I meet Donald all I know about your father is that he lives here in Green bay “at that moment Jake stood up “if he’s in town I will find him “then Jake walked out of the room jakes mom sat there for a moment soon Jake would fine out the truth .

 

 

Michael Grandfield sat at a bar downtown with his body guards being the mayor of Green Bay was a tough job. Michael picked up the paper and read the first headline MAN IS STABBED IN DOWNTOWN AREA “too bad “Michael said as he threw the paper out and paid for his beer as he walked out side a black limo pulled up to the bar .The mayor and his body guards got in the limo and started to head for city hall  as the limo headed towards Bleaker road they passed Jake to bad Michael wasn’t paying attention because he would have seen his son Jake .

 

 

Red lines mark the corner of Bleaker and Frist street where jake passed his fathers limo

 

                                                                  thats all for now

 

[moganite 4]

nice story

[cityhawk 12]

I always love those "tell, then die" stories that stirs up many questions about who's who and what is really going on. I look forward to more!

[Micah 16]

Excellent storyline. I like this dark CJ.

Very great start and good photos!

[JoeMeister 1]

Nice start of your CJ ... Great Story btw!!

[RiverCocytus 0]

Ah, the macabre is always the best. Ever read Edward Gorey?

[purpledaddy 6]

So how old is Jake anyway?

[heyden_simcity_4 5]

jake is 17 purple daddy

[heyden_simcity_4 5]

                                                           Update number 2

Jake walked to a large park in eastern Green bay where he slept on a park bench he really did not want to go home at the moment as he sat down he started to remember all the fun times he had with Donald, then a tear trickled down his cheek he would miss him so much . Donald was like a second father to Jake more then his actual father was anyway. Night fell and Jake fell asleep he had know idea what was waiting for him in the mourning

Here is the park where Jake sleep on a bench.

 

Michael sat in his office at city hall thinking of what he had to do in the morning the chief of police had informed him that it was his ex wife’s boyfriend who had been stabbed earlier that day . Michael stood up and walked over to the window as he looked out the window he saw a bum lying on the parks benches man he needed to get this homeless problem fixed. Michael got in his limo and drove home he would worry about the homeless in the mourning.

Here is a photo of city hall can u see the park in the background

[BlondeTwiggy 43]

good story so far, I can't wait to see what happens next

[moganite 4]

wait til the mayor find out he has a stalker his own son this story is great

[BigBang0315 0]

Great story, love the pictures, can't wait for more!

[Micah 16]

Like I said, excellent storyline. Truly strong... Micheal is such a bad guy. Keep up the great job!

[heyden_simcity_4 5]

hey micah hes not bad wait till next update

[___idiotbox 0]

heyden: Great CJ! I really like how you can see the thoughts of both characters!

-Ellie

[usnaguy 0]

nice job with the story. keep it up.

[heyden_simcity_4 5]

thank you all