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[homeandaway 1]

cant wait to see more!

~alex~

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Update 35, story: What could be lurking in the forest? - Part 2

July 16th, 0155AL

They left the next day and soon were on their way to the forest, heading though the northern part of the city.

After traveling several miles though the forest, Tifalka and Marikalf slow down, and take their pickup off the road and into the forest, going though an area where the ground is open enough to drive though. Brad and Brian put their car in Trans-mode 2, and follow them.

They soon stopped in a small clearing near a cliff, and they get their supplies out and prepare to enter the cave.

Tifalka: Here's the entrance.

Brian: Dark.

Brad: That's what the flashlights are for.

*They shine a flashlight into the entrance, which shows a tunnel that slopes downhill for a short distance, then splits into two tunnels, each going in opposite directions.*

Marikalf: If we're going to find what's down there, we're going to have to go in.

*They gather up the supplies they need, which includes several flashlights, some extra batteries, a life-signs detector, and some food, and they enter the cave.*

Note:

All Non-SC4 pictures in this update are not mine

Comments:

crushedcar, Marvin: You'll have to wait and see what's in the cave.

homeandaway³, Schulmanator, zelgadis, crazyyaya: Thanks for the comments!

[homeandaway 1]

OMG! - tell me what in the cave - do they die?....please tell me! - apart from that - nice, great pics!

take care and i look forwards to seeing more!

~alex~

[Schulmanator 5,787]

hmmmmmm... Batman????

Nah, Alfred would get fired for revealing that....

could it be... Captain caveman??!!

[Blazerhawk 162]

Lol at Shulmanator.

On a more srious note I am really curios what is in that cave.

[Simfan34 11]

A UFO? With all these species, I wonder what an alien might be. Why doesn't Myon send robots to explore? I wonder what is in that cave....

[jacqulina 162]

excellent work and pics my friend,looking forward to more

[Marvin 0]

Nice update!

[Zelgadis 638]

I vote for Captain Caveman.

ISF

[homeandaway 1]

cant wait to see more my friend!, tale care and be safe

~alex~

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Update 36, Story: Into the cave

July 16th, 0155AL

They take the tunnel going to the right, and after walking a short distance, they reach an area where large parts of the ceiling have fallen in, which block the passage a little farther down.

Brad: Lets go the other way and let the bat sleep.

Tifalka: Hopefully it isn't blocked too.

Brian: Looks like we'll have to get our feet wet.

Marikalf: Hey, look, some sort of cave critter!

Brad: Maybe we should check and see what else is in here before we go any farther, I don't want to meet some cave monster.

Tifalka: Good idea.

Tifalka takes out the life-signs detector and turns it on. The screen is full of different color dots, then Tifalka sets it to the side view and to only show large creatures. Instantly, most of the dots disappear, leaving several dots on ground level, and four dots clustered together underground.

Tifalka: Looks like we're the only ones here, other than the small cave critters like that one.

Suddenly, a dot appears on the life-signs detector, flies across it, and disappears on the other side.

Brian: What was that?

Marikalf: Probably a skewer, or someone in a flying car.

Brian: Looks like we'll have to climb down now...

Note:

All Non-SC4 pictures in this update are not mine

Comments:

homeandaway²: They don't die, but that's all I can say right now.

Schulmanator:  

Simfan34: Myon doesn't know about the cave (yet), and the group wanted to see the cave for themselves, not though a robot. As for the aliens, they may turn up... somewhere.

crushedcar, jacqulina, Marvin, zelgadis: Thanks for the comments!

[Schulmanator 5,787]

Mmmmmmmm..... wonder what else they will find...

[homeandaway 1]

ooh! - thats a intereting storyline!, cant wait to hear the follow on, take care and be safe

~alex~

[Blazerhawk 162]

Something flew across the screen. Uh-oh.

[Zelgadis 638]

Hope the cave critters aren't vicious.

ISF

[homeandaway 1]

i look forwards to seeing more of your brillaint work my friend! take care and be safe

~alex~

[Simfan34 11]

Flying car? Maybe... Nice writing you have there.

[Marvin 0]

Nice story so far, I wonder what else they will find?

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Update 37, Story: Into the Cave, Part 2

July 16th, 0155AL

When they climbed down, lights came on down the tunnel to the entrance to a room, and another passage heading off to the side.

Brad: I think we found what you detected.

They went down the door, which opened when they reached it, reveling what appeared to be a control room of some sort.

Tifalka: I never though there would be anything like this in here.

Brian: It would be better if we could read whatever it is that the computers say.

Marikalf: I wonder who built this?

Brad: Whoever it was, they seem to have left a while ago, there's dust all over everything.

They go up to once of the computer screens, and after blowing a layer of dust of the screen, they find a map of the cave. It showed what appeared to be storage rooms (each marked with a label of what looked to be a box), as well as a large room down below that was marked with a ring. Next to the ring room was another large room marked with what appeared to be the side of a cylinder with both ends on an angle, and a smaller room nearby had a symbol that looked like a round computer keyboard.

Marikalf: That one *points to the ring room* looks interesting, lets go there.

Brad: Are you sure?

Marikalf: I think the symbols are supposed to show what is in there.

Tifalka: But what would a ring mean? And the weird cylinder thing?

Brian: We won't find out unless we go down there to see.

Brad: I think we should split up down there to explore the two big rooms.

Tifalka: Marikalf and I can go in the ring room, while you can go in the weird cylinder thing room.

Brian: Okay.

Brian: Well, this is a problem. We're up here, and the elevator is down there in a pile of rubble.

Marikalf: Not really.

Brad: Huh?

Tifalka: We can carry you down.

Brad: But how will we get back up again.

Marikalf: I can lift you back up.

Brian: How? That's a long way down.

Marikalf: I'll just use telekinesis. I never said I could do that?

Brad: No, not that I can remember.

Marikalf: I thought I did...

Tifalka: Well, lets go.

Brad climbed onto Tifalka's back, and Brian on Marikalf, and Marikalf gently carries them down to the lower level, and they go though a door near the broken elevator into another hallway.

To be continued...

Note:

All Non-SC4 pictures in this update are not mine

Comments:

Schulmanator, homeandaway², crushedcar, zelgadis, Simfan34, Marvin: Thanks for the comments!

[Blazerhawk 162]

Okay that's slightly odd. What could that map be leading to?

[homeandaway 1]

wow! - sounds interesting!, very modern!, i look forwards to hearing and seeing more!, be safe ~alex~

[jacqulina 162]

wow those are awesome cave pics i enjoyed looking through them i wanted more lol.excellent updates my friend and pics

[Fox 1,444]

Very interesting storyline.. very creative of you.

I enjoyed the use of the real images mixed with game images too ... 

I look forward to the next instalment of your suspenful story.

[Zelgadis 638]

Jeepers, I wonder what's in there? Sure wish I knew!

ISF

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Update 38, Story: A New Discovery

July 16th, 0155AL

After going down to the lower level, they passed an opening in the wall, where they saw an underground lake.

Brad: Looks like whoever was here first didn't think they lake was important.--

Brian: --they haven't done anything at all here as far as I can tell.

Marikalf: Whoa, they must have had a lot of security here before.

Tifalka: But why just leave the doors wide open?

Brian: Looks like they were only here to protect whatever is in there when whoever was here was still here.

Tifalka: The ring room is straight though the room, while the funky cylinder thing room is off to the right in there, so I guess it's time to split up.

Brad and Brian walk into a short, but big, hallway, and open the door.

Brian: Looks like some sort of hangar.

Brad: At least now we know what the cylinder thing represents.

Meanwhile, Tifalka and Marikalf open a similarly sized door to another large room.

Tifalka: Myon has a stargate?

Marikalf: I guess we do.

Tifalka:  How come New Carpathia hasn't found this one?

Marikalf: I don't know.

*The stargate suddenly makes a clanking noise, and the 1st chevron lights up, then the 2nd, and the 3rd.

Tifalka: I think someone's coming!*

Marikalf: Hide!

They run back to the side of the stargate, and hide behind  some of the equipment there, just as a wormhole is established in the stargate.

Not long after a two people, followed by a group of troops came through the wormhole looking confused, and the wormhole closed.

First Person: Hello?

Troop 1: Where are we?

Second Person: Commodore Aran, I think we dialed the wrong address.

Commodore Aran: Yes Colonel Maeglin, this is definitely not New Carpathia.

Colonel Maeglin: Where's the DHD at?

Commodore Aran: I need everyone to spread out and search this place until we find the DHD so we can go home.

As they began to spread out, one of the troops saw Tifalka and Marikalf behind the equipment.

Troop 2: Hey!

Commodore Aran: Who are you?

Marikalf: I'm Marikalf and she's Tifalka and--

Tifalka: --we... we were just exploring when you came though the stargate.

Marikalf: Just don't shoot us.

Commodore Aran: Oh... I'm Commodore Aran from New Carpathia, and where are we?

Tifalka: In the bottom of a cave north of Galesfe City--

Marikalf: --in the Republic of Myon.

Tifalka: What's a DHD?

Commodore Aran: It's what you use to dial the stargate, and it looks like a round computer keyboard with all the symbols that are on the stargate on it.

Marikalf: I think its in the other room. *she points at a side door in the room*

After Commodore Aran and his troops dialed the stargate and went back to New Carpathia, Tifalka and Marikalf went to find Brad and Brian walking into the room between the two big blast doors.

Brian: What was the noise in there?

Marikalf: A group of New Carpathians dialed the wrong address and came out Myon's stargate instead of theirs.

Brad: Myon has a stargate?

Tifalka: Yes, and I think we should tell someone before someone less friendly comes though it.

Brian: That sounds good.

Note:

All Non-SC4 pictures in this update are not mine, and thanks to zelgadis for letting me have Commodore Aran and his troops in here. Also, this is also the last update like this for now.

Comments:

crushedcar: Well, now you know.

zelgadis:

homeandaway, jacqulina, Fox: Thanks for the comments, and I'm glad you like it!

[Blazerhawk 162]

Awesome update. I recognize that first stargate picture. Now all they have to do is figure out Myon's gate address.

[Schulmanator 5,787]

Cool! I guess looking for a star gate would be a star search? (Apologies to Ed McMahon!)

[2ch.net simplayer 180]

lol

"sorry! wrong number!"

[Zelgadis 638]

Heh. Even though it turned out okay, Commodore Aran's going to be pissed when he finds the lacky who dialed the wrong number.

ISF

[Marvin 0]

Ooops... Great updates!