Green Depra

[Ramona Brie 121]

Now, I wonder if I should let the bull roam. But, Choco's gone, and I don't know what to do.

[sim1234 62]

Update 33: Wow! The 2 mosaics are excellent, I love the transition from country life to tourism in the second mosaic, brillaint newspaper too!

Fantastic cliffhanger in your last update and congrats to all of the new citizens of Green Depra!

Keep up the great work!

[Ramona Brie 121]

And this cliffhanger could be a minute cliff for certain commenters. MagpieShooter is on that list.

Also, I used one of your updates in a new masthead design for the contest. Thanks, Choco!

[magpieshooter 1]

Originally posted by: Tracker And this cliffhanger could be a minute cliff for certain commenters. MagpieShooter is on that list.quote>

 

There are others, but I'm not saying anything

[patfirefghtr 160]

ooooooo my goodness Choco your cj is sooo awsome i cant belive i skimped out in following lol but i am gonna follow threw now cant wait for the next update

[jacqulina 162]

look forward to more

[Fallon144 1]

man this CJ is absolutely flawless, I simply adore the City Journals where people spend a lot of time and energy into small details. Please keep us updated since you have quite a lot of people following this CJ, and I am and will remain one of them

[Ramona Brie 121]

Sorry, he's gone, but should be back.

[Dr. Frickenstein 0]

Too bad you've got a huge amount of RLS. I can't what will hapeen next!

[Micah 16]

Oh no. Civil unrest & Civil War?!?! Sounds entertaining! haha.

[cowcorn 11]

Great political twist! It sure keeps me reading.

[patfirefghtr 160]

ok choco i hope all is well in green depra waiting patiently for an update lol

[nealos101 20]

Hey choco!

Unfortunatly I saw and browsed through the different updates too late to catch page 23 - RLS has paid its toll on me too but hopefully Green Depra will be ok, San Portello is due for some excitment as the next part of my story is coming soon, and hopefully San Portello will revolt and become a unified country.

I will have to see, but really I am posting here to say I noticed page 3 especially becuase you used some of my buildings (Castle Castle and Neyorka Bay), thankyou very much! Im proud to have them here if anywhere, and Im hoping to get the next one started once I get my coursework sorted soon.

Thanks, and can't wait to see some more pictures of Green Depra!

- N -

[choco1 4]

Update 34

The Retribution.

The flag waves, in the morning of the 14th of April.

The Day of Chaos.

We join one of Green Depra's three television channels, GDTV, with our host Mal Walden.

Mal: "In breaking news, riots are breaking out across the nation.  Gold Depra immagrants angry with Scarlets decision to withdraw Green Depra from the Depra Circle and his refusal to let Grocon dissolve Parliament have taken to the Streets of Green River.  What started out as a peaceful but agressive protest has turned into a painful riot."

"Lets cross live to our news helicopter reporter Frank"

"What can you see Frank?"

Frank: "Well Mal, things are getting ungly down there, pro-Grocon supporters appear to be clashing with pro-Scarlet, and we are seeing same bashings.  This is very concering Mal, we are even seeing some small fires being lit"

Mal: "What can you see further down the road?"

Frank: "There are people jumping on cars, and tippinf them over.  This is a horrible scene Mal"

Mal: "It certainly is, what is happening down there?"

Frank: "Oh my, this is terrible, there are more clashes and bashings!  Were are the police?"

Mal: "we're just receaving reports from President Grocon actually calling on Gold Deprovians living in Green Depra to rebel against the government.  What is he thinking?  This has to have some serious repricussions."

Frank: "Its not getting any better here Mal, we have people jumping on cars, chanting, shouting anti-Scarlet and anti Green Depra speeches.  This is a discusting and discraseful event."

Mal: "Thanks frank, we're getting a report in saying police are being sent in in large numbers.  Can we get a visual frank?"

"Ah... yes, we're moving down now"

Frank: "And we can really see the police pushing, they are in their riot gear and are desperately trying to stop the crowd."

Mal: "They don't seem to be having much affect"

Frank: "No, they're having real trouble with this.  The crowds can't be controlled!  This is insain!"

Frank: "The crowds are moving down, they are retreating from the police, down to the Green River Hotel"

Mal:  "Are the police following?  Do you think they will be able to control this situation soon frank?"

Frank: "I'm not sure Mal, er, Jesus Christ!!...."

Frank: "Oh my God!  The Hotel has just exploded Mal, this is chaos down here!"

Mal: "Oh gosh, this is horrible, terrorists have struck in Green River."

"People are running out of the hotel, the rioters are scattering, the walls of this building are literally melting.  It is seriously intense down there."

Mal: "Fire and Ambulance Authorities are about to arrive on the scene, we don't have any information as to who has caused this, but this is planned, and a major operation"

Frank: "This isn't supposed to happen in Green Depra, tragity has struck out tiny nation and..."

Mal: "I have to cut you off there Frank, this is an emergency report, Gold Depra battleships have been seen moving into Blackberry Inlet!"

"..."

The next 24 hours, Green Depra time, will shape this nations future more than any other period in history....

A nation hangs by a thread.

Thanks for reading....

[Shadow Assassin 336]

Wagh, does this mean Green Depra gets nuked? I hope not.

[metasmurf 705]

Very cool update

[choco1 4]

Thankyou all for your gracious comments!  I really appreicate them!  Its great to be back, and I hope you enjoyed todays story-driven update.  I'll only reply from the last paper, simply because I'm only one man, but I still really appreciate all the other comments left before that.  Sorry.

Nik-nik Ah, only time will tell.  One thing is definite, Green Deprovians aren’t push overs. Thanks mate.>>

Goin2Chicago It will, and I’m sure from the last update that there will be some changes…  I hope they are all good ones of course!>>

Szarkoz Ah, that’s the sadness of this all.  Thanks for the comment.>>

Zelgadis Thanks… it will be exciting, trust me!>>

Fabiocb Thanks for the support mate!

Darmok I hope I didn’t! But there’s nothing like a good cliff-hanger! Cheers mate!>>

6underground Thanks for stopping by President 6U.  And I guess we’ll see how things pan out!>>

Tracker (6) Wow, thats alot of comments! You don't have to leave that many! hehe.  Oh, do you think you could not make those comments about my future story-line, I don't want to ruin it. Thanks. Thanks for your constant support and comments.  Cheers mate.

Cityhawk Thanks for your thoughts, I’m sure Scarlet will take them into account.  Glad you liked the cliff-hanger.  Cheers mate!>>

CDI_spy I think they would welcome the support!  Thanks for stopping by mate.

Threestooges Thankyou, and I value your opinion very highly, and will definitely take it into account.  Thanks mate.>>

Sloppet Thanks sloppet, great to see you!>>

Lakeyboy hehe, Shhhh! Well, I thought Doyle had the face of pure evil, and Grocon had an evil name.  And I put two and two together.. and bam! I had the Gold Depra president! Well, actually Scarlets laws are the exact opposite of Howard’s laws, that’s why Grocon was pissed off by them.  Thanks for the pointless reply!  Oh and I really like your signature.  I enjoyed it!>>

Magpieshooter (2) Well… I wouldn’t be too sure about that!  Cheers mate.>>

Jacqulina (2) Thanks, I’m glad you liked it.  And sorry to keep you waiting!

Jarnomiedema Yeah, nothing like a bit of excitement.  And I’m going to hold you to that offer! Cheers.>>

Terrymunweihao Oh, you sense correctly… thanks for your comments and support!

Slann Thankyou very much!  And Green Depra will definitely need your support.

Bokrif Ah, only time will tell… I’m glad you like it!>>

sim1234 Thanks, glad you liked update 33.  And I hope you also enjoy update 34.  Cheers mate!>>

Patfirefghtr (2) Wow, thankyou very much!  I’m glad to see you in GD, and even more glad to hear you like it so much.  Sorry to keep you waiting but I was on camp! Cheers mate.>>

Fallon144 Why thankyou!  I appreciate those comments, and I look forward to seeing you back!

Dr. Frickenstein I know what you’re saying!  Bloody camp! Hehe, cheers mate.

Micah Hehe, I sure hope so! Thanks for the comment.>>

Cowcorn Oh yeah, it’ll do that! Hehe, thanks mate!

nealos10 Hey Nealos!  Great to see you!  I hope so too, and I look forward to seeing that in San Portello.  I hope so too, there is nothing worse than a divided country, I wish you the best!  Ah, you mean pink depra, well, it wouldn’t be a swinging party country without your wonderful BATs!  There was actually a lot more of your ones there, but they didn’t fit in the picture!  They are great bats, and I really like using them.  Thanks for the comments, and I will keep an eye out for your book!>>

Shadow_Assassin Hey shadow, It could mean many different things, I’m not quite sure which really.  Cheers.

Metasmurf Thanks!  Great to see you and glad you liked it!

EDIT: I don't know why those smiley faces are there, but there is nothing I can do t delete them because they don't appear in the edit box.  They must be a side-effect of sopying and pasteing from word, I guess I'll have to stop doing that.

Choco.

[magpieshooter 1]

'Aint you lucky, the SCJU peacekeeping laws have just been passed... Which means that you could call on the Union for aid, if needed

[Dale Kent 28]

Choco:

You know, Doyle was my year 12 co-ordinator in '92 at Scotch. He's actually not such a bad bloke.

Dale

[sloppet 3]

Awesome update! the picture are as always very good!

"Chaos - It's just the beginning

Every promise I made I

[Rayden 7]

IT was updates like that which force me to set this CJ as one of my favourites, along with Simtropia, PalmPoint, 3RR, Depoe Bay and Eye Candy Album. I just wished I could have mine look 1/10 as good as yours. Congrats and keep this good job.

Cheers

Rayden

[bat 6]

Excellent new update!

bat

My 300th post !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Mikeaut1 261]

Wow, sensational work with this city journal. This is probably one of the most unique journals I have ever seen. Continue to amaze me with the news reports. And also with the pictures. Excellent!!

[Darmok 34]

YIKES!

That's Heavy!

I can almost hear the shouts! "Run to the hills!"

Waiting for more!!!

Have a great easter weekend!

[Nik-nik 3]

Gosh things are starting to get ugly. And that just before Eastern. I do not see any bunnies hopping the streets, I see an angry mob. Speaking of the mob was that an Hotel with serious lag of protection from the local Mobs? Hence the mob is burning down the place but the big question is is the mob behind the mob?

Anyway, take care of that serious incursion soon or else the mob will take ov er.

have a great Eastern   

[choco1 4]

Hey guys!  Thanks for the comments all.

I just popped back in to make an announcement....

I give you, the first upload in the Chocolatemax EyeCandy Range:

CM Parade Lots:

Finally released!  After being shown here way back on page... 10 I think, I have released them to the world.  Pop over and tell me what you think!

I hope there are no bugs!

Anyway, find them here.

Until next time, choco.

[Dr. Frickenstein 0]

- Massive of riots.

- An exploding hotel

- Gold wants war w/ Green.

Could it be worser?

[CDI_spy 5]

Incredible... who knew residents of such a peaceful nation could make a situation escalate to violence?

I'm more shocked at the events than I will be examining the technical presentation of this update... however, great custom lots and PS effects!

[Rayden 7]

  Good old days of SimCity 3000 

[patfirefghtr 160]

i agree choco very great update omg its soooo real i love it man i wondering is gold gonna blast or not or they flexxing muscle omg i cant wait to see the next update and i hope u had fun at camp glad u r back