Aberni: City at War -Paused-

[crazyyaya 4]

 ABERNI: City at War     Report #1 Vol. 1,July 22, 07

 

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9:00 A.M. Aberni City, Sadi Province. Insider reports claim that undercover officers of the Secret Police have uncovered plans to bomb sights in the city. Officials held a emergency meeting in Bureau 49, the HQ of government investigations. Until recently the new government had managed to keep the city peaceful, with no attacks in over four months.

9:30 A.M. The story is leaked to the media. Civilians become tense and fearful. The Secretary of State holds a press conference outside the Bureau in an attempt to reassure citizens that the city is not in danger of a attack. -" It is very important that we continue with our daily lives".

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Bureau 49

 

10:30 A.M. Security is heightened across the city. The public seems more at ease.

1:17 P.M. The temperature begins to rise, two cars drive onto a road closed off for a market. The city's fears are realized, two car bombs explode in a lethal fiery inferno. 12 Dead and 35 wounded. The bustling market place is turned into the scene of a massacre. 

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The scene of the explosion moments after two carbombs were denenated.

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1:19 P.M. The Mayor gives a radio speech as Aberni's hospital begins to flood with wounded civilians. A state of emergency is announced. Secret Police search the city for suspects as the fires still burn in the city market street.

3:47 P.M. As the city begins to recover from a distrubance in months of peace. a tip is placed by an unknown caller that the Shiu Temple will be bombed at 7:54 P.M. Panic fills the streets, people lock themselves in their houses.

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Shis Temple, the holiest site in the city.

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7:52 P.M. Every officer is put on duty, dozens of patrol cars fill the streets, the city has entered a state of paranoia. The bombing of such a religious site could start a holy war between the cities Shiu and Kalic populations. As the city braces for a potential nightmare I end my report, I will update you in several days of this city because this story must not go untold.

-Amash Noj

 

 

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[jacqulina 162]

very nice start and intro my friend,excellent pics great effects

[topcliff 1]

Interesting. Keep it coming. Leonardo

[englishmonkey 0]

Great photos, exlent story, the fire looks like real explosin

[Simfan34 11]

Interesting- I will remember to come back. You oversaturated the pictures too much, in my opinion.

[dralin321 0]

the plot is good, pics are..well fantastic, and the city is nice. In all, looks to be a great story!

[Abc987 3]

I will be watching for this "holy war"!

[Schulmanator 5,812]

Cool! Nice start!

[Amerikaner 42]

ohh this is good... i love the style you present this in...ohh i cant wait to see what happens

[Mikeaut1 261]

Wow this is certainly unique!! Can't wait to see what happens!! Nice use of BATs by the way!

[Cowboy-Texas- 0]

I like the pics.. nice variation in color.

[Cockatoo 2,257]

Great looking pictures and a good storyline too! I think you could be onto a winner with this CJ! Keep it up.

[toffeeman 0]

Intriguing story, ill have to watch out for this one.

[football_fever 6]

Wow, very nice. I agree the pics are a little oversaturated, but it still gives a good effect. Also, the Bureau building is really neat...I don't think I've seen that one before. Keep it up!

[Peng74 1]

Interesting story. Hope there's more to come.

[IDS2 3,429]

Wow that's really cool! I'lll be back for more!

[shivsood 5]

Good and interesting start - this is very different to any other CJ that I have read.

[jayo 44]

Nice start.Lovelly picture effects

[clonedclone87 95]

good job

[crazyyaya 4]

ABERNI: City at War Report #2 Vol. 1,July 23, 07

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 12:00 P.M. Aberni City, Sadi Province. After several hours of watchful guarding, there have been no attacks on the Shiu Temple, leaders of the Bureau are considering this an accomplishment. While leaders of the Kalic Church are trying to distance themselves from the terrorists who are, as we now know, Kalic Radicals. The city still remains on high alert after the attacks yesterday afternoon.

1:30-4:45 A.M. A secret meeting takes place at the residence of the mayor. Reports say the Midnight Meeting lasted well into the morning. As the sun dawned on 1 captial drive, military leaders exited with new strategies to combat the city's threats.

 

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 1 capital drive at 2:00 A.M. as a secret military meeting is held.  

8:00 A.M. Special sermons are held at both the Shiu Temple and the Kalic Church, for the deaths of yesterday, in an attempt to bridge the gap between the two religions.

10:30 A.M. In the mayor's weekly radio address, he tried to reassure his people that they are not in immediate danger and encouraged religious leaders to work together for peace.

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The Kalic Church, where special sermons were held today.

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3:04 P.M. My media crew and I follow a patrol car into Aberni's skid row, So far we have found nothing but minor charges, it seems all is peaceful. Suddenly, rapid popping sounds can be heard coming from the sky. I look up to see a sniper firing randomly into the streets below. The officer radios in backup as dozens of people flee the streets. I can see a small child and his mother trapped in the crossfiire between police and the sniper. 

6:30 P.M. Police have finshed storming the building, the sniper has fallen to his death. The mayor refuses to speak, as tension builds in the city an official report is released. 5 Dead, 13 wounded. The terrorist group has finally released its name, 

Havvas 

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The sniper shot and killed several people from a window of the yellow high-rise

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[U]9:54 P.M. The city is still in panic. As the sun begins to fall on the horizon a loud noise is heard from the Shiu section of town. A patrol car is found on fire in a back alley with two officers in it. Rescuers attempt to save them but it is too late. Havvas takes credit for the ambush.

10:00 P.M. The mayor speaks at a televised conference,

" We have seen the devastation this group can cause, we have seen the fear they can strike in us, but now they shall see the brutal way in which they can be brought down."

All out war is announced on Havvas after the murder of two police officers. 

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11:56 P.M. A tragically eventful day has come to a close. In future days the efforts against Havvas will be considerably stepped up. For my next report I will be embedded with troops who are being deployed to find Havvas in the Eastern Hills. It may not be published for several days, until then, feel free to ask my assistant anything about my reports or the city/events in them. He will be happy to answer them.

 

Upcoming Report: Chasing Havvas: An indepth view of the military's search for Havvas. 

-Amash Noj

 

[Schulmanator 5,812]

Hmmm--- some very interesting developments.

[IDS2 3,429]

Very cool! Especially the Photoshopping. I like the Kalic Church and the tenements. great work.

[englishmonkey 0]

Grerat photoshopping again, some are a little overdoned, but it gives it a realistic effect i guess. I love the stroy plot.

[dralin321 0]

Please continue!!!

[englishmonkey 0]

How do u edit those photos?

[jayo 44]

nice work!lovelly pics and photoshopping

[jacqulina 162]

wonderfull update my friend coming on really well so far,great work on those pics too

[crazyyaya 4]

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[jacqulina 162]

great post card my friend looking forward to more

[englishmonkey 0]

Can't wait for it.