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Wonderful chapter, as usual.

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    Welcome to page 3!
     
     
    Thank you everyone for your support!  The nice comments keep me writing!

    gurrgkud, Amryai200, MayorTim- Thanks for visiting, Im glad people are liking the story. 1.gif

    jacqulina- If the replicator hadn't broken, Im sure cliff would have made you some money to buy a region too. 18.gif

    Rhino- Those are sprinklers that randomly show up in the fields.

    RadioheadFan- Thanks, the settlement picture is one of my favorites.

    screamomatic- The region is downloadable, see page 2 for the link.  Regarding giant metropolis' this is a story made with SimCity of course, hint hint... 5.gif  And about the farms, they do have quite a bit of farmage there for two people.  Farah went a little overboard when planting crops for them. 31.gif

     

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    Excellent update! I love the new settlement, another beautiful simplistic farming town. Keep it up.

    RHF

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    SWEETNESS! OH MAN!  DUDE! 25.gif  I love the storyline, and awesome work on everything.  I will have to check in more often!44.gif44.gif44.gif44.gif


    -SC4M

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    I really hope this hasn't been abandoned.... It was so awesome!

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    hey!

    cool idea of making a cj. i like it. the exact oppoiste of all those mega-city cjs.
    nice looking small villages and all packed up in a book-like story. great44.gif

    even tho the buildings doesnt fit to the fantasy-game atmosphere, but i dont mind bout that.
    it gives another touch to all that.
    i hope u keep on


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    hey!
    i like it. really.
    are those country roads traffic enabled or just lots?


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    WoW! Why did I not check in sooner? I hope this hasn't been abaondoned...it's far too good! It's so anime! Please update!

    Mr Veggie

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           After a while Keele, Farah, and Reid all had houses over in Eternia.

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           Reid designed a medium sized brick house with a simple yard and a pool. Farah went for a nice little villa with a patio and a nice sized herb garden. Keele decided to go a little overboard since they had extra money. His was a large, almost mansion sized house. Since he was technically the ruler of Eternia, he thought it was fitting for him.

           The new houses fit perfectly onto the peninsula by the bay with Cliff and Maria's.

     
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           Early one morning shortly after the new houses had been finished, Keele heard a boat out in the water.

     
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           It turned out to be a bunch of people from Rasheans. They were interested in what was going on.
           Several people decided that the land was a beautiful place to live and wanted to move in right away. After discussing it with the others, Keele decided it would be fine. With the help from everyone that wanted to move in, they could create a nice little town.
           They decided the town would need a name and after a long discussion, Alexandria was chosen.


     

           One evening Cliff and Maria were sitting on their porch talking.
           Maria took a sip of her lemonade, You know, we should go up and destroy the remnants of our ship, in case someone finds it.
           Yea, I had thought about that too. With all these new people running around, someone is bound to find it sooner or later. Cliff said.
           The radio still hasn't picked up any transmissions.
           Cliff went over to the edge of the porch and looked up at the first star of the evening. It might be quite a while before we get anything. You've got to remember how far out we are here.
           Maria sighed, I guess, its not like we have it bad here either.

           The next day they went up to the crash site and destroyed the rest of the ship.


     

           On a bright sunny afternoon, Farah went to meet Keele in the construction zone where several new houses were going up.
           Keele had just finished his surveying of the buildings and streets.
           Hey Keele hows it going?
           Keele glanced up from his paperwork he had with him, Pretty good. A few new people came over today and picked out plots for their houses.
           That's great! This place is really starting to grow. Farah said. Hey Keele, do you have any plans today?
           No, I just finished here. Did you have something in mind?
           I was thinking we could take a hike up to the place that thing crashed and take another look at it.
           Keele grinned, That's a great idea! I never did get a good chance to look at all the stuff in that crater. Lets go.
           With that they were off. Near mid afternoon they arrived at the crash site. Across the hill from the town.

     
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           Farah walked into the clearing first. Look! Everything is gone. Theres only some rocks and weeds left here.
           Keele surveyed the area. This is really odd. Check out near the main area at the end, the dirt seems to sparkle.
           Wow, it does. Farah walked down to the end, leaning down to watch the dirt on the ground sparkle occasionally. I wonder what happened to all the stuff that was here.
           Keele didn't need to wonder, he had a pretty good idea where it was, now he had just had to prove his theory.

           When they arrived back in town, Keele quickly said goodbye and headed down the road toward Cliff and Maria's house.
           Before coming to the house he cut through a field and approached a large shed. This specific shed had been Cliffs project after finishing the house. He never allowed anyone to help him, and neither him or Maria would ever say what was inside.
           Keele snuck up to the door and reached to pull the latch.
     
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           Just before his hand touched it, he received a horrible electric shock.
           While it startled him, and hurt quite a bit, he wasn't giving up. He moved all around the barn, reaching toward it slowly before being shocked. Whatever it was surrounded the entire barn. There was no way to get in.
           His hand numb from so many shocks he decided to give up. Although this just proved his theory that they were hiding something in there. It had to be something from the crash site.

     

     

           With all the new people and supplies coming into Alexandria, Reid helped begin a waterfront area near the town. The area was mainly planned as a dropoff and storage area for supplies, but there was a simple waterfront built in for people to come and watch all the excitement.

     
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           Most of the major work around Maria's house being done, she decided to take up a hobby. Because of her love of flowers she decided to start a wildflower garden near her house. When they had picked out the campsite in the beginning, Maria had chosen the site because of the small meadow with a patch of wildflowers. She brought a few of them into her greenhouse and begin growing multitudes of them and transplanting them near the house.
           Soon she had a huge wildflower field started.

     
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           In no time the town took shape. The houses were finished, many new farm fields were started, and a few small businesses had even sprung up.

     
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           The whole town was gathered one evening, having a celebration for the completion of Alexandria. There was a huge barbecue, games, and singing. Near the end of the party they were all startled to hear a long loud horn bellow across the bay...


     
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    Yes yes, I am back from the dead and once again dabbling in SimCity... 5.gif

    I thought it fitting that I continue on with my story seeing as how a large part of it was still sitting here finished and not submitted.
     
    More to come at a later time, please enjoy this long awaited update and I apologize to everyone I left hanging for so long. 15.gif

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    an excellent CJ, you can really see you spend much time on it and have a lot of fun with it at the same time.

    Please keep us updated i'll follow this one

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