Tristar101 commented on rileyskioo's file in Commercial
1. Wayyy out of scale. To me just by looking at the picture, it sorta looks like it's 20x20. I suggest making it a 3x5 or a 4x5, so it dosen't take so much room and so it also looks realistic in proportion
2. For the fact you used something that MS Paint is capable of doing, makes it looks a bit, weird, in my eyes atleast. It's best to moderate your high, neon tone of colouring, and only colour things if you really need to.
3. Find some decals. It's not too hard. Also, attempt to get some decals off of some smaller buildings from the game to put the logo onto, or the storefront onto, and then make sure to colourmesh it in so it looks like it matches.
I can't say much. Read the BAT Thread that was provided by some of the commenters.
2/5. 1 for effort and 1 for creativity.