Dierapy

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Ama i Dierapyámuk Invasion!

Welcome to Dierapyámuk Invasion!

Now that the random Zukish is out of the way, there are a couple of things to know. First, the DPI universe is slightly different than the DPM universe that was seen in my previous CJs, such as DPI Myon being about 15 years ahead of DPM Myon in technology. Second, there is really nothing else to know. Now that that is over with, lets get to the main characters. But before that, the table of contents:

ToC:

Episode 1: The Unknown: page 1

Episode 2: The Unknown, part 2: page 1

Episode 3: Near and Far: page 1

Coastal Galesfe: page 1 (non-story)

Episode 4: Free at Last: page 2

CHARACTERS:

Name: Brad Meiring

Species: Human

Age: 17

Occupation: High school student

Background: The younger and more serious of the older Meiring twins, he believes himself to be just an ordinary teenager. However, he will soon find out that this is not the case, due to factors outside of his control.

Name: Brian Meiring

Species: Human

Age: 17

Occupation: High school student

Background: Brian is a lot like his younger identical twin brother Brad, though Brian is more likely to act without thinking rather than trying to form a plan in most cases.

Name: Mardon

Species: Nacran Ancaron

Age: 10130

Occupation: Traveling explorer

Background: Despite his age, Mardon has a tendency to act like a kid at times, though he generally knows when it is okay to act like then, and when he has to be serious.

Name: Cormani

Species: Nacran Ancaron

Age: 10127

Occupation: Traveling explorer

Background: Cormani is usually moe serious than her husband Mardon, and while she may appear to be annoyed by his actions, she secretly enjoys it.

Name: Valira Muchi

Species: Muphridian

Age: 46

Occupation: Space pirate leader, maybe?

Background: She has managed to get a hold of a disabled Muphridish Chekalandra class warship, and has recently repaired it so that it is fully operational. Her exact motives are currently unknown.

Name: Lauren Ahrns

Species: Muphridian

Age: 46

Occupation: Leader of a small outpost

Background: Valira Muchi's identical twin sister, she usually likes to spend time at an outpost on an unclaimed planet where she can live without being disturbed. However, that is likely to change now that Valira is starting to cause trouble.

Name: Trent Ahrns

Species: Muphridian

Age: 53

Occupation: Chancellor of the Republic of Myon

Background: Lauren and Valira's cousin, and like them he is also a leader of a group of people, though unlike the other two, his leadership is actually official to the rest of the known galaxy.

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Episode 1: The Unknown

Thurs. May 20th, 0150AL (2006)

Unknown starship, somewhere in space

Brad looked around at his surroundings. He appeared to be on a starship of some sort, and judging by the wide open and well lit hallways, it was most likely a Muphridish ship. However, that didn't give him any information as to why he was here, or where on the ship he was at.

Brad: Where's Brian at?

Brad paused for a moment, and then took off down a hallway, almost as if he knew where he was going. After a short distance, he reached a computer terminal on the wall. He activated it, and a hologram with a bunch of angular letters appeared. This was definitely a Muphridish ship, he thought, then placed his hand down on the body of the terminal. Somehow, after a short pause the writing changed to Zukish, and then disappeared entirely, to be replaced with a map of the ship.

He zoomed in on the rear of the ship, and soon found a room with two lifesigns in it, with several others scattered around it. After finding himself on the map, he lifted his hand off of the console, and it reverted to its original state, and then turned off. How did I do that? He wondered. Then before doing anything else, he took off down the hallway again, following a route he had determined from looking at the map.

Down the hallway, a quick turn to the left, then the right and up a flight of stairs, and another right. Brad suddenly stopped, and turned around and headed the other way past the stairwell he had just exited for seemingly no reason at all. Two more lefts later, followed by a short run down a hall, he soon slowed to a stop outside of an open door.

This is weird, he thought to himself, there's no one around, and how do I somehow know just what to do?

He then entered the room beyond the door, only to face another door, this one closed. He grabbed another control panel on the side of the door, and after a second, that somehow caused the door to open.

The environment on the other side of the door was nothing like the rest of the ship that he had seen. Instead of being empty and quiet, it was quite cluttered, with various pieces of equipment filling most of the available space. In addition to this, there was a Muphridian with short brown hair, and wearing a short dark blue dress, standing among the equipment, simply standing there like nothing was wrong. She was looking at the other side of the room, where Brian was just visible behind one of the other devices. Brian appeared to be wearing some sort of light tannish shirt with green markings on the shoulders, and some sort of plaid tank top over the shirt, but due to the equipment, anything lower than his chest wasn't visible.

After a couple seconds of just the humming of the equipment, the Muphridian began to speak.

???: So, what brings you here... I do believe I don't know your name. And just what are you wearing?

Brian: Do you really need to know, Valira?

Valira: Please, can't you just calm down? I'm only trying to help.

Brian: Help!? How is what you are doing supposed to help?

Valira opened her mouth to respond, but then suddenly turned to face a seemingly empty part of the room as an odd rustling sound was heard.  

Everyone stared at the location for a couple of seconds, and then Valira and Brian turned back to each other. She then raised an arm into the air and opened her mouth to reply again.

Suddenly, a large green fireball erupted in the middle of the room.

Brad: Brian!

Something hard hit Brad in the front, forcing him away from the fireball, and then everything went black.

Brad suddenly sat up and looked around. There was no equipment scattered about, but there were a couple random articles of clothing lying in a corner of the room. Brian was asleep on another bed, his snores the only sound in the room, and the Muphridian, Valira, was nowhere to be seen.

Brad took several deep breaths to relax.

Brad: That's the fifth time I've had that dream this month... what is going on?

[Schulmanator 5,787]

I am excited to see Lauren , B&B and the rest return in a new CJ. I look forward to their adventures.

EDIT: Those dreams sound like trouble on the horizon.

[Zelgadis 638]

Oo, are we opening with some premonitions?  Very interesting.  Bit on the creepy side though, when your twin suddenly shoots at you...

ISF

 

[Korot 6]

Hmm, I remember such a dream from DPM 1, though the ship looked different. Can't wait to see the rest of the story.

Regards,

Korot

[Follarch 326]

Myon is back! Oh, i mean, Stargate: Invasion is back! Er, here!

Good start off to an amazing city journal, and that ship is a behemoth! Just in one close up image i must have seen well over 10 to 15 gun turrets. Valira is well protected. And i know i promised my first reply would be a mega-reply, but...i lied. The next one will be.

[astronelson 339]

Yay! More Sci-Fi! And this time I'm here from the start.

"What is going on?" A good question indeed. Only time will tell.

[Follarch 326]

Welcome To the First Mega-Reply on Leech's New City Journal! Wooo!

 

Episode 1: The Unknown

Thurs. May 20th, 0150AL (2006)quote>

2006? Hm it's in the future this time...sorta. I think?

Unknown starship, somewhere in spacequote>

Unknown is right. Even from the little snippet in my CJ didn't tell the whole design of this monster...Looks like a pick.

Brad: Where's Brian at?quote>

Brad? You're 17, what in the world are you doing aboard a Muphridian Warship?

After a short distance, he reached a computer terminal on the wall. quote>

Ooh! Time to play the latest Harry Potter game! Is it even available on the Muphridian computer console?

and soon found a room with two lifesigns in it, with several others scattered around it.quote>

Well on a "Warship" of that size, of course he's not alone, which is the scary part.

How did I do that? He wondered.quote>

Cause you're kongfu action jesus?

*Looks at the image* My lord how many turrets does just that one section have?

 ???: So, what brings you here... I do believe I don't know your name. And just what are you wearing?quote>

She smiles when she's evil.

Brian: Do you really need to know, Valira?quote>

Brian knows who the green lady is.

 Valira: Please, can't you just calm down? I'm only trying to help.quote>

Uh huh, yeah, you say that now. Just give it ten seconds.

Suddenly, a large green fireball erupted in the middle of the room.quote>

Uh huh, "Helping". It's always nice to "Help", huh Valiraevilwomangirl?

Brad: That's the fifth time I've had that dream this month...quote>

Wuh oh... A bit too many times for a reoccurring dream. Something's up here.
 

[Blazerhawk 162]

That ship reminds me of the Destiny (SGU).

Brad should probably see someone about this reoccurring "dream." Seems a bit suspicious to me as well.

[jacqulina 162]

great comeback my friend

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Welcome To the First Mega-Reply on Leech's New City Journal! Wooo!quote>

And here's the first mega reply reply!

Episode 1: The Unknown Thurs. May 20th, 0150AL (2006)quote>

2006? Hm it's in the future this time...sorta. I think?quote>

Last time I checked, 2006 was 3 years ago...

Unknown starship, somewhere in spacequote>

Unknown is right. Even from the little snippet in my CJ didn't tell the whole design of this monster...Looks like a pick.quote>

The picture in your Cj was just the very front of the ship...

Brad: Where's Brian at?quote>

Brad? You're 17, what in the world are you doing aboard a Muphridian Warship?quote>

No idea. You'll have to wait and see.

After a short distance, he reached a computer terminal on the wall.quote>

Ooh! Time to play the latest Harry Potter game! Is it even available on the Muphridian computer console?quote>

I doubt it...

and soon found a room with two lifesigns in it, with several others scattered around it.quote>

Well on a "Warship" of that size, of course he's not alone, which is the scary part.quote>

Though possibly less scary than if it was a ghost ship.

How did I do that? He wondered. quote>

Cause you're kongfu action jesus?quote>

Huh?

*Looks at the image* My lord how many turrets does just that one section have? quote>

I see 5 main guns (towers), 26 secondary guns (turrets), and parts of two superweapons (bowls).

Brian: Do you really need to know, Valira? quote>

Brian knows who the green lady is. quote>

It seems so.

 Valira: Please, can't you just calm down? I'm only trying to help. quote>

Uh huh, yeah, you say that now. Just give it ten seconds.quote>

10... 9... 8... 7... 6... 5... 4... 3... 2... 1...

Suddenly, a large green fireball erupted in the middle of the room. quote>

Uh huh, "Helping". It's always nice to "Help", huh Valiraevilwomangirl? quote>

It would help if they wanted to cook some s'mores...

[Benedict 3,119]

Dreams are confusing.

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Episode 2: The Unknown, part 2

Thurs. May 20th, 0150AL (2006)

Brad: That's the fifth time I've had that dream this month... what is going on?

Before he could think about the dream any more, the alarm went off, bringing an abrupt end to Brian's snoring. After a couple of seconds, when it became apparent that Brad wasn't going to turn it off, Brian groaned, then swatted at the alarm, missing twice before managing to make it stop.

Brian rubbed his eyes, then stretched and yawned, then turned to look at Brad, who still hadn't moved.

Brian: You had that dream again, didn't you?

Brad: Yes...

Brian: What do you think it means?

Brad: I don't know... what I don't understand is that it each time I have the dream, it seems to be different.

Brian: What do you mean? You never mentioned that before.

Brad: It's not really different, it just seems like minor details change around. I take a different path, or you say something different, stuff like that.

Brian: Oh. Don't you think you should tell someone else about it?

Brad: Probably... it was just a weird dream the first time, but for it to come back 4 more times, something pretty much has to be up.

Voice: Brad! Brian! Hurry up!

Brad and Brian each got up and left their room, and walked down the hall to the kitchen to find that Nick and Nikki were already eating their pancakes, though Nikki still seemed to be half asleep, and both, like Brad and Brian, still in their pajamas. Brad and Brian grabbed their own plates, and sat down.

Brian: After breakfast?

Brad: Yes.

After the two had finished eating, they walked over to a woman who was currently cooking some more pancakes.

Brad: Mom?

Rachel: Yes?

Brad: I had an odd dream last night.

Rachel: Odd? In what way?

Brad: I was on some sort of Muphridish ship, then I did... something to a computer terminal to make a map show up, and after that I ran down to another room in the ship, where Brian and this Muphridian named Valira were at. After that, a fireball appeared in the middle of the room, and then I woke up. Also, it’s the 5th time it's come up, too.

Rachel: Interesting. Is there anything else, or was that pretty much it?

Brad: That was the main parts of it.

Rachel took the pancakes off of the griddle and then transferred them over to a place, which she then handed to Michael, who had just entered the room fully dressed.

Rachel: Do you think it might mean something?

Brad: Possibly, that's what I wanted to talk about.

Rachel: I don't know anything about getting meanings out of dreams, though I could find someone who does. I'll let you know after school. But for now, you really need to get ready, or you'll be late.

Brian: Yes, mom.

Galesfe City

Leech: Well, now that I'm playing SC4 again, it would be good to show some pictures.

Nikki: So we're going to do the commenting!

Nick: Ugh...

Leech: I'll be leaving now.

Nikki: No.

*Nikki grabs Leech and pulls him down onto a couch*

Nikki: And stay there or I'll get the water.

Leech: Do I have to?

Nikki: Yes.

Nick: And I don't want to be alone.

Nikki: Huh?

Leech: Oh, all right.

Nick: Now, where are we?

Leech: Mt. Jamig.

Nikki: I can see that... This here's a basic campground on Mt. Jamig, for when you just want to get away from the city without 

actually getting away from the city.

Nick: The Syomï Minazí Êd Myon, or in English, the Myonian National Stadium, and its the where the Myonian national soccer team 

plays.

Leech: Various hillside developments. It was tricky tearing up the old highway and putting in the new RHW there... Replacing the 

trees was easier.

Nick: What? Replacing trees? Tearing up the highway?

Nikki: What are you talking about? It's always been like that.

Nick: Same as above, but at night.

Leech: The big farming tower, and several smaller ones.

Nick: And a lot of skyscrapers.

Nikki: And shops!

Nick: And more towers, and a park.

Nikki: More of the highway, as well.

Leech: It's M-11, by the way. At least the part of M-11 that goes though the city.

Comparison episodes:

Galesfe City Episode 10

Galesfe City Episode 27

Comments:

Schulmanator: Indeed...

Zelgadis: Who's shooting at who?

Korot: DPM 1? Do you mean Galesfe City/Dierapyámuk-Myon, or DPM 2? Probably the latter, as Galsfe City ended before you joined ST, but I can't remember any other incident like this in either right now...

simcity4fan12: Yes, that is sketchup, with background from Celestia.

Archean: There's 460 of the secondary guns on the entire ship. (each with 3 guns on the turret) 116 main guns. (the towers)

Archean²: Huh? This isn't a mega reply...

astronelson: It's much better when you can actully watch from the beginning.

Archean³: Ah, there it is... and I've already replied to this one.

crushedcar: Might be because it is somewhat based off of the Destiny...

jacqulina: Thanks for the comment!

Leech10: Um... hi.

Benedict: Yes... expecially when random things start happening...

[Blazerhawk 162]

That picture of the farming towers looks perfect for a sci-fi city. Overall that city looks great.

[SounderBruce 173]

Great work! Where'd you get the stadium in the last update? It'd make a great addition to my new and future CJ.

P.S. This is my 900th post!

[Schulmanator 5,787]

Perhaps this dream interpretation may help. It does not include anything about a fireball though.

Running

To dream that you are running away from someone suggests that you are attempting to elude a certain situation. You refuse to admit accountability for something you have done. In particular, if you are running from an attacker or any danger, then it implies that you are reluctant to hardships and obstacles.

To dream that you are trying to run but cannot make your feet move as fast as you want them to indicate that you feel unworthy of praise and appreciation. You feel undeserving of something. It can also indicate that you have reached the phase or REM.

To dream that you are running alone implies that you will gain prosperity faster than your peers. Perhaps you are trying to evade an issue that you know is unfavourable or negative.

To dream that you are running with others represents future wealth and rewards.

Computer

To see a computer in your dream represents expertise, knowledge, and the progression of today's world. You are being offered new possibilities and options. This dream may also symbolize your desire to break free from conformity and be able to exude your own personality. You tend to follow the group without offering your ideas or suggestions. You are too passive. Perhaps you feel inferior and unimportant in your role.

To dream that you computer has a mind of its own implies that you fear being unorganized and unable to manage the aspects of your life. You may feel burdened and pressured by others and unable to determine your own actions.

To dream that a computer has a virus indicates that there is some aspect of your life that you cannot dominate.

Spaceship

To see a spaceship in your dream indicates that you are imaginative and artistic. It suggests that you should partake on a mission of inner discovery and comprehension. Change your outlook on a certain issue, even if it seems strange and peculiar.

[Follarch 326]

 

Episode 2: The Unknown, part 2quote>

The second episode of the whole journal and theres already a part 1/part 2 combo. Huh, nice.

Brian: You had that dream again, didn't you?quote>

Oh! Hello, oh i mean, Ama Brian! Didn't know you lived with Brad till as of right now.

Brian: What do you think it means?quote>

Perhaps it's a vision into the possible future type deal. Seems to be a lot of those goin round the galaxy lately.

Brad: It's not really different, it just seems like minor details change around. I take a different path, or you say something different, stuff like that.quote>

The future could be drastically changed just by deciding to jump out of bed instead of stepping.

Brad: Mom?quote>

Mom?

 Rachel: Yes?quote>

Mom! There's a mom!

Brad: I was on some sort of Muphridish ship, then I did... something to a computer terminal to make a map show up, and after that I ran down to another room in the ship, where Brian and this Muphridian named Valira were at. After that, a fireball appeared in the middle of the room, and then I woke up. Also, it’s the 5th time it's come up, too.quote>

I'm guessing someone in that society would understand everything he just said, instead of staring at him asking what  in the world is a "Muphridish".

 Rachel: Interesting. Is there anything else, or was that pretty much it?quote>

Huh, seems like I was right to guess. The mom isn't making a psychiatric appointment.

Brian: Yes, mom.quote>

Obey your momma!

Galesfe Cityquote>

Ah, so that's where the Meirings are.

And just to ask, Brad and Brian are childs 1 and 2 of 4? Adding Nikki and Nick? Poor Nikki being all alone with her mom. There's too much Testosterone! D:

 

[lucky7 73]

Excellent storyline and the the city looks impressive. Looking very much forward to more, I am really curious,

lucky7

[Korot 6]

Originally posted by: Leech10

Korot: DPM 1? Do you mean Galesfe City/Dierapyámuk-Myon, or DPM 2? Probably the latter, as Galsfe City ended before you joined ST, but I can't remember any other incident like this in either right now...

quote>

I mean DPM 1. That I wasn't around when you made it doesn't mean that I didn't read it. Last month I was actually looking for DPM 1, found it and read it. I also read Myon City (the one before that, where they found the Zukes) and Zebatikbe, or something like that. And I do remember something with a dream, though it was indeed different than this.

And now about the actual update: Hmm, nothing much to add here, doesn't really remove much of the confusion. It's only clear that you indeed started right from the beginning, though do you have already found the stargate?

Archean: Brad and Brian have 1 older brother, Micheal, and the younger sibblings Nikki and Nick. Or at least, thats how much I remember form Galesfe City, or DPM1 as I call it.

Regards,

Korot

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Korot: I don't remember anything about a dream in Galesfe City... Are you referring to the Granon Hogankhum incident?

To clear up some of the confusion (maybe): DPI is an alternate reality, different from DPM, where the stargate was discovered earlier (though Mloret hasn't been met yet), and technology is about 15 years ahead of where it was in 0150AL in DPM. Other events may or may not occur the same as they did in DPM, you'll just have to wait and see. Note that Valira wasn't around in Galesfe City...

Archean and Korot: There are 7 Meiring siblings: Brian, Brad, Tiffany, Michael, Nikki, Nick, Larissa, arraigned in order from oldest to youngest.

PS: It's The Planet Myon and Zabitake, Vinawasho for the older ones. Also note that Granon Hogankhum is now spelled Granon Hoganxum. (pronunciation is the same)

[Benedict 3,119]

Woah, is there no TV in the Meiring house, then?

[Follarch 326]

Seven children. My lord well, at least the Meiring name will continue once Brad, Brian, Michael and Nick begin to procreate with a lucky, lucky girl. ....for each of them of course.

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Episode 2: The Unknown, part 2quote>

The second episode of the whole journal and theres already a part 1/part 2 combo. Huh, nice. quote>

DPM 2 opened up with a part 1, 2, and 3. Just a part 1 and 2, here.

Brian: You had that dream again, didn't you?quote>

Oh! Hello, oh i mean, Ama Brian! Didn't know you lived with Brad till as of right now. quote>

They lived together in the past 2 CJs, why would this one be any different?

Brian: What do you think it means?quote>

Perhaps it's a vision into the possible future type deal. Seems to be a lot of those goin round the galaxy lately.quote>

Huh? There are?

Brad: It's not really different, it just seems like minor details change around. I take a different path, or you say something different, stuff like that.quote>

The future could be drastically changed just by deciding to jump out of bed instead of stepping.quote>

True... especially if you break your leg doing so.

Brad: Mom?quote>

Mom?

 Rachel: Yes?quote>

Mom! There's a mom!quote>

Yes, they have a mom.

Brad: I was on some sort of Muphridish ship, then I did... something to a computer terminal to make a map show up, and after that I ran down to another room in the ship, where Brian and this Muphridian named Valira were at. After that, a fireball appeared in the middle of the room, and then I woke up. Also, it’s the 5th time it's come up, too.quote>

I'm guessing someone in that society would understand everything he just said, instead of staring at him asking what  in the world is a "Muphridish".quote>

They did make first contact with the Muphridians over 100 years ago...

Brian: Yes, mom.quote>

Obey your momma!quote>

Indeed.

Galesfe Cityquote>

Ah, so that's where the Meirings are.quote>

Yes, though they live a bit to the west of Mt. Jamig.

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Episode 3: Near and Far

Sun. May 23rd, 0150AL (2006)

Brad closed his copy of Harry Potter and the Half Blood Prince after marking the page, and then set it aside on the bedside table.

Brad: So, now what?

Brian: Apparently we have the ability to use at least one of the Muphridian's abilities, and are the first humans to be able to, at least as far as everyone knows.

Brad: It would have been nice if they could tell us what abilities we have.

Brian: Indeed... it would certainly help actually learning how to use them. All we know is that you have some form of precognitive ability, though that's the one ability that's pretty much impossible to control.

Brad: Plus I don't have any idea how we could get on a Muphridish starship anyway.

Brian: Indeed, though it does make me thing about just what is all up there.

Brad: Yes, the Muphridish-al'Hasiq war, plus the various smaller wars in Follomer and Carpathia, there's bound to be a lot of ships flying around out there.

Brian: Indeed... tons and tons of starships.

Another unknown starship, somewhere in space

This particular starship had a very unusual appearance, almost as if it was grown instead of constructed like most other starships. Even the interior was different, with similarly green walls, as well as an apparently stone floor and ceiling, and stone-looking columns along the walls at regular intervals. The room was somewhat small, about the size of a large bathroom, and was sparsely filled, with only what appeared to be a bed down on the floor, similar to a futon, and a small waterfall on the opposite side of the room, mounted on the wall.

One figure, wearing a feminine-looking green tank top, a short gray skirt, and no footwear at all appeared to be sleeping, sitting down against the wall on the bed, slowly breathing. The figure appeared to be human at first glance, though a closer look reveals that the person has webbed feet, as well as what appear to be gills. The stone door suddenly opened and a second figure walked into the room.

???: >It's time.<

The first figure quickly looked up at the new arrival.

???: >Cormani, I'm not ready!<

Cormani: >You can do... whatever it is you do on your own later, Mardon. Right now I have something to tell you.<

Mardon: >What?<

Cormani: >We're heading back to the al'Hasiq region.<

Mardon: >Haven't been there in awhile... that one planet, Terra, I think, was interesting, I wonder what it would have been like if we had stayed longer and helped the Romans out, how they would have done in space...<

Cormani: >We're not really here to uplift others, though if the Dlorwani get any more problematic we might just do it anyway... Anyway, the planet's usually called Earth now, and that area really isn't the best place to uplift anyone anyay, too much chaos already. There's Myon, Carpathia, Vinawasho, the al'Hasiq, the Muphridians, Follomer, and that's just some of them. Though Earth really doesn't need uplifting now, both Carpathia and Follomer come from there.<

Mardon: >Chaos? True, the al'Hasiq and the Muphridians do seem to be doing their best at attempting to blow the other up... just like they did back when we were only a millennia old.<

Cormani: >Only... At any rate, it seems that the Muphridians are going to win, they've recently began building new starships that they call the Chekalandra class, each one about 5.6 km long, and each one capable of laying waste to an inhabited planet in about an hour, leaving behind basically no higher life forms... Give them a day, and the planet will look like it has just been formed. Good thing they at least follow some sort of military code, and keep the destruction to the enemy starships. While the al'Hasiq have more powerful weapons, the Muphridians have more weapons, though I still hope the war can be ended soon. And that's only the main conflict in the region.<

Mardon: >Ick.<

Cormani: >And apparently, one of those ships has gone missing.<

Mardon: >Great. Can't they keep better care of their ships?<

Cormani: >Apparently, it was disabled in battle, and when they came back to retrieve it, it had disappeared.<

Mardon: >Typical. What can you expect from a civilization that is younger than you are?<

Cormani: >Only barely... and at least they aren't childish like you are.<

Mardon: >Hey!<

Cormani: >At any rate, Myon's one of the central planets in the region that isn't trying to blow everyone else up... at least, not now.<

Mardon: >So what are we waiting for?<

Cormani: >Patience.<

Cormani: Carmucaicivvup tacarmaion.

Soon, we will go to the planet Myon.

Galesfe City

Nikki: Guah? There's a hole in the city!

Nick: Huh? No, that area just hasn't been rendered yet.

Nikki: Oh.

Nick: And it looks like someone doesn't know their way around the city. They come in down a street, get on the highway, get off the highway, head around to the far side of Mt. Jamig, get on a subway, head to the opposite corner of Mt. Jamig, get off the subway, get on the light rail, and then loop back around again, when if they just turned left instead of getting on the highway, they could have gotten to wherever it is they're going easier.

Nikki: Hmm, looks more open in this part of the city.

Nick: Not so much on the other side of the mountain, though.

Nikki: And here's the highway, again.

Nick: It's open over there as well.

Comments:

crushedcar: Glad you like it!

ComputerGuy890100: Sorry, I have no idea where the stadium is from. I can't find it in the plugins folder, the STEX, the landmarks menu, and querying the thing doesn't help, either.

Schulmnator: Interesting. Did you check for explosion? That might work...

Archean: Already replied to this one.

Archean²: Pure blood? Well, the entire family has red hair...

Trees:

https://www.sc4devotion.com/csxlex/lex_filedesc.php?lotGET=132

https://www.sc4devotion.com/csxlex/lex_filedesc.php?lotGET=1585

https://www.sc4devotion.com/csxlex/lex_filedesc.php?lotGET=1586

lucky7: Thanks for the comment!

Korot: Already replied to this one as well.

Leech10: There's also New Chicago, but I don't really reccomend reading that one.

Benedict: Huh? They have TVs...

Archean³: Umm.. yes. They're a little young, though, right now.

Leech10²: Another big reply...

[Follarch 326]

Episode 3: Near and Far

Sun. May 23rd, 0150AL (2006)

quote>

 

Hmm, 2006. almost four years ago, Follomer would be probably around the point of discovering the Stargate.

copy of Harry Potter and the Half Blood Princequote>

 

Where's Ian when you need him? 

Brad: So, now what?quote>

 

Partay?

Yes, the Muphridish-al'Hasiq war, plus the various smaller wars in Follomer and Carpathia, there's bound to be a lot of ships flying around out there.

Brian: Indeed... tons and tons of starships.

quote>

 

There's one adrift over the Agonite planet. I haven't decided what to do about the fleet though.

Cormani: >You can do... whatever it is you do on your own later, Mardon. quote>

 

What "exactly" is he..er, she...Mardon doing there on the bed?

helped the Romans out, how they would have done in space...quote>

The next best selling movie. Romans...in SPACE!

Cormani: Carmucaicivvup tacarmaion.

Soon, we will go to the planet Myon.

quote>

 

And make lots of friends.

Galesfe Cityquote>

 

Looks like the city has a nice, big park that's one giant forest.

Nikki: Guah? There's a hole in the city!quote>

 

I see it i think! That think at the edge of the skyscrapers, north side?

And it looks like someone doesn't know their way around the city. They come in down a street, get on the highway, get off the highway, head around to the far side of Mt. Jamig, get on a subway, head to the opposite corner of Mt. Jamig, get off the subway, get on the light rail, and then loop back around again, when if they just turned left instead of getting on the highway, they could have gotten to wherever it is they're going easier.quote>

 

Oh the joys of sims trying to find their way to work. lol They no smart in advanced society.

[Schulmanator 5,787]

I am glad to see Myon again. I wonder whose unknown ship that is. It looks ominous.

[Korot 6]

Leech10: Using any traffic simulators? Also, what seems to be the shortest/easiest route, doesn't have to be the fastest one, though in this case, just turning left would indeed have been faster.

Originally posted by: Leech10

Brian: Indeed... it would certainly help actually learning how to use them. All we know is that you have some form of precognitive ability, though that's the one ability that's pretty much impossible to control.

Brad: Plus I don't have any idea how we could get on a Muphridish starship anyway.quote>

Why would they want to be on a Muphridish starship to begin with?

Brian: Indeed, though it does make me thing about just what is all up there.

Brad: Yes, the Muphridish-al'Hasiq war, plus the various smaller wars in Follomer and Carpathia, there's bound to be a lot of ships flying around out there.quote>

Brad, I think Brian asked you a retorical question.

???: >It's time.<quote>

To get out of bed and get dressed?

???: >Cormani, I'm not ready!<quote>

Yes, everybody always wants to stay in bed a little longer.

Mardon: >Haven't been there in awhile... that one planet, Terra, I think, was interesting, I wonder what it would have been like if we had stayed longer and helped the Romans out, how they would have done in space...<quote>

A bunch of decadent people flying around, with their mind set on conquring everything? Please not, though the Middle Ages, that followed the Romans, weren't that good either.

Cormani: >Only... At any rate, it seems that the Muphridians are going to win, they've recently began building new starships that they call the Chekalandra class, each one about 5.6 km long, and each one capable of laying waste to an inhabited planet in about an hour, leaving behind basically no higher life forms... Give them a day, and the planet will look like it has just been formed. Good thing they at least follow some sort of military code, and keep the destruction to the enemy starships. While the al'Hasiq have more powerful weapons, the Muphridians have more weapons, though I still hope the war can be ended soon. And that's only the main conflict in the region.<quote>

Sounds a lot like the deathstar in Star Wars, that one could also rip a planet apart in a day.

Cormani: >And apparently, one of those ships has gone missing.<quote>

And no-one has though of installing tracking sensors?

Mardon: >Great. Can't they keep better care of their ships?<quote>

My thought exactly

Mardon: >Typical. What can you expect from a civilization that is younger than you are?<quote>

Define civilisation. Unless Mardon and Cormani also 'helped' the Muphridians, I doubt a species can come to existence and advance to this level in around 11.000 years. However, if M&C helped, they are to blame for whatever the Muphridians are currently doing.

Mardon: >So what are we waiting for?<

Cormani: >Patience.<quote>

You either have patience, or you don't have patience. If you don't have it, you can try to train to get more patience. Just sitting there and waiting for you to have patience, doesn't mean that patience will eventually come to you, though it does take a lot of patience to wait so long.

And that's the end of my seccond mega-reply. The other CJ I posted my first in didn't have any updates after the one I mega-replied to, so I can only hope that fate wont be the fate of this one.

Regards,

Korot

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Originally posted by: Archean

Episode 3: Near and Far

Sun. May 23rd, 0150AL (2006)

quote>

 

Hmm, 2006. almost four years ago, Follomer would be probably around the point of discovering the Stargate.quote>

You could most likely just ignore the date... each CJ seems to have its own timeline, I think Carpathia is several decades in the future...

copy of Harry Potter and the Half Blood Princequote>

 

Where's Ian when you need him? quote>

No clue

Brad: So, now what?quote>

 

Partay? quote>

Maybe?

Yes, the Muphridish-al'Hasiq war, plus the various smaller wars in Follomer and Carpathia, there's bound to be a lot of ships flying around out there.

Brian: Indeed... tons and tons of starships.

quote>

 

There's one adrift over the Agonite planet. I haven't decided what to do about the fleet though.quote>

Explore? Not much left to explore around Earth, though, too many other civilizations.

Cormani: >You can do... whatever it is you do on your own later, Mardon. quote>

 

What "exactly" is he..er, she...Mardon doing there on the bed? quote>

"Et." The gender inspecific 3rd person Ancaron pronoun you're looking for it "et." Not "it," though it could be translated as such in some cases.

helped the Romans out, how they would have done in space...quote>

The next best selling movie. Romans...in SPACE!quote>

And watch them get blown to bits when they invade the Muphridish Empire!

Cormani: Carmucaicivvup tacarmaion.

Soon, we will go to the planet Myon.

quote>

 

And make lots of friends. quote>

Just be careful of gender confusion.

Galesfe Cityquote>

 

Looks like the city has a nice, big park that's one giant forest.quote>

Indeed. Free mountain inside!

Nikki: Guah? There's a hole in the city!quote>

 

I see it i think! That think at the edge of the skyscrapers, north side?quote>

Not that hole... The giant undeveloped area to the left of Mt. Jamig.

And it looks like someone doesn't know their way around the city. They come in down a street, get on the highway, get off the highway, head around to the far side of Mt. Jamig, get on a subway, head to the opposite corner of Mt. Jamig, get off the subway, get on the light rail, and then loop back around again, when if they just turned left instead of getting on the highway, they could have gotten to wherever it is they're going easier.quote>

 

Oh the joys of sims trying to find their way to work. lol They no smart in advanced society.

quote>

And apparently they have the same problem in Carpathia...

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Coastal Galesfe

First, a note: The city and story sections will now be separate from each other, so each update that appears will have whatever I have ready, so hopefully 'll be able to keep some sort of orderly schedule in getting them out.

Nikki: Whoa, big.

Nick: This is one of several shield generators for Galesfe City. There are also plans on linking various shield generators like this with others on the planet to form some sort of planetary shield, though I have no idea how they're doing that, or how far they are.

Nikki: There are also beam weapons set up here as well, modified to work effectively in an atmosphere, that are also capable of attacking things in orbit.

Nick: There are railguns in there as well, though they can't be seen.

Nikki: There's underwater farms in the area as well.

Nick: And trees. There's lots and lots of trees.

Nikki: And more farms.

Nick: There's research in the area as well, hence the subs.

Comparison episodes:

Galesfe City Episode 33

Comments:

Archean: Already did this one.

Schulmanator: You'll have to wait and see... though you should already know who's ship it is.

tarrina: (previous update) Glad you like it!

Korot: Will do this one after the update.

Schulmanator²: Maybe it broke and they're trying to find somehwere to buy a new one.

Leech10: Only one?

Also I'm working on something that involves a randomly odd Japanese song and the characters from this story (and a couple that aren't) in case you're interested. More information later.

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Originally posted by: Korot

Leech10: Using any traffic simulators? Also, what seems to be the shortest/easiest route, doesn't have to be the fastest one, though in this case, just turning left would indeed have been faster.quote>

Not sure what I'm using, actually...

Originally posted by: Leech10

' alt='> '>Brad: Plus I don't have any idea how we could get on a Muphridish starship anyway.quote>

Why would they want to be on a Muphridish starship to begin with?quote>

Don't know...

To get out of bed and get dressed?quote>

Maybe?

' alt='>

'> ???: >Cormani, I'm not ready!<quote>

Yes, everybody always wants to stay in bed a little longer.quote>

Even non-humans.

A bunch of decadent people flying around, with their mind set on conquring everything? Please not, though the Middle Ages, that followed the Romans, weren't that good either.quote>

They would likely learn a lesson real quck if they attacked the Muphridish or al'Hasiq...

' alt='>

'> Cormani: >Only... At any rate, it seems that the Muphridians are going to win, they've recently began building new starships that they call the Chekalandra class, each one about 5.6 km long, and each one capable of laying waste to an inhabited planet in about an hour, leaving behind basically no higher life forms... Give them a day, and the planet will look like it has just been formed. Good thing they at least follow some sort of military code, and keep the destruction to the enemy starships. While the al'Hasiq have more powerful weapons, the Muphridians have more weapons, though I still hope the war can be ended soon. And that's only the main conflict in the region.<quote>

Sounds a lot like the deathstar in Star Wars, that one could also rip a planet apart in a day.quote>

Not that powerful... The planet's still in one piece, just with a molten surface. Not scattered halfway across the solar system.

Mardon: >Great. Can't they keep better care of their ships?<quote>

My thought exactlyquote>

Would be nice.

Mardon: >Typical. What can you expect from a civilization that is younger than you are?<quote>

Define civilisation. Unless Mardon and Cormani also 'helped' the Muphridians, I doubt a species can come to existence and advance to this level in around 11.000 years. However, if M&C helped, they are to blame for whatever the Muphridians are currently doing.quote>

In this case, it is as long as the Muphridians have been in existance, which is 99xx years, don't remember the exact amount. Mardon is 10130 years old. The Muphridian civilization was created by the al'Hasiq, which have been around for a lot longer.

And that's the end of my seccond mega-reply. The other CJ I posted my first in didn't have any updates after the one I mega-replied to, so I can only hope that fate wont be the fate of this one.

Regards,

Korot

quote>

Well, there's an update now...