Aketor----------From destruction to riches

[atomius 0]

I promise i will post pics soon... anywhoo, here we go.

CHAPTER ONE-The discovery

 

explorer Markus Fergnano and his brother Jeano Capellini were the first white settlers in the area we now know as Aketor plain. they traded with the natives for anbout three years until the native chief Charljugga killed them. However there diary was not burnt with them and it still remains today in the Southern Aketor College library. The first explorers to build a camp were the Fanbongs. the Willhelms soon joined them and by the time the city was christened a town it had fifty settlers.

 

CHAPTER TWO-Development

 

Charles Aten made an offer to the natives. 50 dollars for the lot. once they agreed on his terms he built Aketor Town. It soon prospered.

 

CHAPTER THREE-Kraknoses Reign

 

Emperor Kraknos of the Zumbini Tribe attacked Aketor in year 5. He burnt ahlf of it to the ground. Aketor was then destroyed in a fire.

 

CHAPTER FOUR-Now

 

Now Aketor is flourishing. it is situated on the Sturch River which flows from the North weast sea to the weast Mountains.

[Konica07 2]

sounds like a really good story line, cant wait for pics

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

It sounds good, but what is weast? Is it west, or east?

[atomius 0]

the pics will be either at my site or here within a week.

Well, the story of how my region on Weast trotskaja got its name is very simple, yet very interesting. As many of you have noticed, i like getting things in order an done, thus i make a lot os spelling msitaakfes. I once ha a region called trotskaja which is now an experiment region used for game experiments. My second and current region of east trotskaja was created so i could make a city like Alenvale, my currently active city, which is to the south east of Aketor (look at the map at my site, it will be updated soon). It was going to be called west trotskaja, but then i remembered a story on the news about a family who lived in west Australia and how they wanted to change it to something or other ebcause they thought being west or north of something made it seem like thesomething was bettre and bigger. then i looked at the anme and realised i had made the mistake of spelling it WEAST instead of WEST, and thus the region was created. Weast is the shortedned version of weast trotskaja, and many rpoud Weastians love it.

 

P.S i am from new south wales. Why the darn tooting as the yankees say, didn't i call it New Sueth trotskaja?

 

P.S.S Trotskaja, as i have recently found out, is a yugoslavian surname.

[atomius 0]

Now, since you lazy hogs have not done justice to this topic, i shall elaborate.

KRAKNOS, A GUIDE TO DA GUY

 

Kraknos was born in Chitichatti, Wollmonga. As a wee 'un he enjoyed such pastimes as marbles, snooker and murder. By the age of fifteen he had thwarted Doktor Vuski's evil plans to conquer his village, little knowing that one day HE would be the evil one. At sixteen he left school to join an expedition to a mountain range known as Veeste Muntann, as the natives say. This journey took thre years of hias life, but once he got there he was venerated, veen the mayor, Ato something or other, told him he would *ahem* become a good and grand leader. He, at twenty took position of Vice mayor when Atomius went on a holiday for five years. At first he was a venerated and loved leader who gave what he got and got waht he gaved. Er... Anyway, he at twenty one, came face to face with the evil Doktor Vuski, now known as Doctor Vu by his radical followers. VU and Karknos engaged in ahnd to ahnd swordbattle and Kraknos eventually got a lead next to a large window overlooking Aketor city. The Doctor begged for his mercy, his monocle falling fourty storeys below into the seedy underground of Richhampton, now known as The Fuzz. Kraknos was begged for mercy and, after thinking of his family, let Vu live. But what a sorry sight Karknos was,crippled by war and his nose baly damaged. Vu gave him a life supprt system in a chair with wheels connected to a robotic casing thate enclosed him. His first breaths gasped through the respirator and then Vu said, his wrinkled ahnds closing into fists, Your wife, Gladella Romana Sucia is dead, your only son is probably also dead. Kraknos wrenched his robotoc form off the chair but a magnetic pulse kept him nback. He was victim of his own desires.

   Despite this he led a fairly powerful life. though the aladies didn't much acre for his dating, he had power and was a military leader. But he pined for his son, sometimes destroying whole buildings in the effort. Eventually, when lord Atomius came back from his travels in Faremia, he waged war upon Kraknos, eventually ending in a hand to ahnd duel bwteen them in front of Vu. Kraknos, suddenly realising waht he had done, killed himself via a starngely glowing sword. Vu and Atomius later had dinner with there friends at the mayors house. When Vu asked Atomius whether Kraknos would repent his crimes in hell, Atomius answere Who cares. they both lauhged. After all, the true evil in Aketor was the mayor and his evil friends. THIS FILE IS TOP SECRET. IT MUST NOT BE VIEWED, ESPECIALLY BY THOSE AT SIMTROPOLIS.COM SELF destruct in nine, eight, seven, six...

[mentarman 14]

Lazy hogs, lol. Anyway, this sounds interesting but I think you'll find you don't get a lot of comments until you get some pics up. That's just the way it is.

[atomius 0]

yes. you americans do realsie that before the television set there were only radios,a nd no one complained that there weren't no piccers! in those times. just think was adolf or churchy would have thouhgt about that! Good day, gentlemen. i must retire following my forthcoming stetment. Good dbye.

[Glenni 1,444]

atomius stop saying you americans all the time!!! they would get invaded by hitlers army army to if the planes in those days was'nt so retarded you know.......

 

and besides whenyou say that all the time how do you know that all the people  on this site are americans?and besides this site is canadian.

 

and by the way learn to type properly boy!geez....

 

 

 

and  FYI i am not american ......there is a microscopic country called Norway in Europe.....

[ExiL3 10]

What I think Glenni is trying to say is, You mostly don't get a lot of replys before you post many updates, and have made it to atleast the 3 page. Until then you'll just have to earn the reputation!

take care

PS! oh yeah, it's true, there are a lot of Europeans, and Asians here!

[Glenni 1,444]

lol ok exil3 didnt quite get that one.

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Date: 7/30/2005 8:09:02 PM Author: atomius yes. you americans do realsie that before the television set there were only radios,a nd no one complained that 'there weren't no piccers!' in those times.

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That was because there was no way to have a picture displayed though the radio. However, you can put pictures in a CJ, so do some before some moderator closes this due to lack of pictures.

[Glenni 1,444]

bet he dont even know how to do so...just coming up with a ton of excuses......

[atomius 0]

i will put some pictures up for blimey sake. waht is with you? why can't letters be enough? but if you do so desperately need to soothe your unimaged eyes i will come forth with some in a month or so. till then, gopodbye.

[Glenni 1,444]

ah month?ok...i guess....i dunno....

[K_m_H 0]

heh let's be patient. Great story you have there I'm sure the pictures will be just as good when they arrive.

[GAT-X105 3]

Well the entire point of a City Journal is to show off the cities you've made in the game. Which is hard to do without pictures to go along with the words.

Anyway, it seems like a good start.

[newyorkrunaway1 110]

hmm... have i lost my vision....

Where are all the pictures??!??!?!

 

I cant judge until i see.

[atomius 0]

LOL. I am most amused indeed. G T G. (did i spell it right?)

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

If you say you have pictures at your site, why don't you post them here?

[atomius 0]

Because its a waste of time posting them in two places when people can already see them in the first place. That is rather obvious. But i don't ahve pics of AKETOR at my site, only of ALENVALE which is an adjacent city. Aketor is ten miles to the north west of Alenvale, as youshould know by looking at the map on my site.

[GAT-X105 3]

Why do you find us amusing?

And secondly, most people prefer to read a CJ here as opposed to someone's site, plus here you can see peoples' comments. Also, you haven't posted the address of your site in this thread (as far as I can tell) and that makes it kind of difficult to go to your site.

And even if you do have pictures on your site, you just said that you don't have pictures of this city on your site. So that makes the whole thing pointless.