Crimson Fall

[Naryanna 0]

Edited: OMG... ITS PAGE 2!  WOW... that was quick!

Teeparex: Hiya! Thank you very much! Hope to see you here again!

dralin321: Hello! Thank you very much for your comment! Hope you shall grand us a visit again.

Schulmanator: Hiya my friend! I am glad to be back also. =) Tnx on commenting and hope to see you again.

2nerdy4u: Greetings! I much apreciate the lovely comment you left, thank you and I do hope to see you here again.

edmonton_stinks: Hello! Thank you for stoping by and leaving sweet comment! I aprecite it very much and I hope you shall stop by again.

Dsrwhat316: Hey hey! Why thank you for such great comment it is much apreciated! Hope to see you here again my friend!

Skram: Hiya! Thank you for stoping here and leaving a lovely comment! I hope you shall pop in again.

Deathtoall:  Hello! Thank you for your visit and nice comment you left behind, i apreciate it more. Well, what happend to people in past shall be revealed true the updates alongside. =) I hope you shall visit us again.

suplado!: Greetings! Thank you very much for visiting and leaving a coment, it is much apreciated and I do hope you shall visit us again!

Thank you all!

The update shall be done sometime between 16 to 36 hours...

[penguin007 27]

Cant wait for that update

Will

[football_fever 6]

Ooops I missed the first chapter. It's a good one. You leave us many many mysteries to be solved. Don't torture us...

[Droftrah 2]

Another great looking CJ, I'll be watching this one too.

A+ (with honors) (Again!)

[jacqulina 162]

hiya sis you sure are doing some beautifull work here,the storys amazing too,awesome pics,cant wait till the next update

[Naryanna 0]

[jacqulina 162]

beautifull teasers sis,farms eh, i cant wait to see more

[tjperry88 24]

For some reason I just like this CJ! It's pretty unique.

[Naryanna 0]

And it is time for an update...

It was hard winter for people of Crimson Fall. They had to eat sparsley for their suppalys were not the greatest. Few of them passed away for they got lost in the woods covered with snow, others survived. They shorten their days and nights with telling stories of  not so distant past. They sat around the fireplace, drinking hot milk from their wooden cups and listened to the oldest man and his raspeberry voice.

He was telling about how easy life was when they had electricity and cars and planes and all sort of wonderful machines that made their life easier. He was telling how, when all seemed peaceful, war broke out... He told them how on one bright morning day some strange light was seen in the sky... And then it all begun... The earth begun to shake because of resonant beam of some sort that newcomers from sky directed at them.

"You shall all perish!" they said to the leader of the world.

"Why?" he asked with audiable panic in his voice.

"Why?!" they laugh at him: "Centuries ago we found your speacies lost deep in space on planet made of bare rock. Your kind seemed nice and so we decided to give you this planet, where you could prosper and WHAT DID YOU DO WITH IT!!!" they started mockingly and ended in angry, resenful shout.

"W-W-W-W-What did we do?" the leader of world asked with fear.

"You polluted the air, destroyed forrests, pile your junk all over... you were fighting all the time for not who shall rule, but for who shall pollute, destroy and kill more! You did not respected the land and other living beings! Species extincted before your eyes because of what you were doing!" they shouted.

"But...but...but..." he was trying to find something to convince them otherways... but it was true.

"Yes, your specie is a pain in the butt! No more! We shall end this and destroyed your kind! And we shall destroy everything your kind has build, EVERYTHING! We shall flood this planet and cleanse it for infestation!" they coldly said before they returned to their ship.

And it started... tornados, hurricans, earthquakes, outbursts, tsunamies... it all come, one after another. Alien ship hung all dark upon the sky while bringing the apocalypse to human race. People tryed to fight them, but succes was null.

"You seen what was left after their departure..." the oldest man said. He stood up and crossed the room. His pitch black eyes looked at every face gathered there : "Remeber this and do not forget!" he aded before he vanished into snow...

The winter passed. Spring air was sweet and birds were singing.

There was no more time for stories for they had to think about next winter and they knew that they should prepare more. Plans were made and soon works sta

[suplado! 23]

omg...cool update! nice story! well -- great house youre selling..hehe! blends well with the nature!..uhm -- very nice pics, i really like the bonus pics and the region view...

just want to know the water modd u use? very cool and very clear...

[Schulmanator 5,787]

Great stuff! Lemme check y wallet before I bid. Do you take notgeld money? I have a trillion marks!

[Deathtoall 28]

Nice story and the pictures are beautiful as always. Hope for more!

[Dsrwhat316 12]

i seriously got the chills reading the story....ooh.... as for the SC4 pics, they are gorgeous, as always. i hope there isn't a lot of rain for the royal street house 002; with it being below ground, they could have an inadvertent swimming pool! great update!

[2nerdy4u 1]

Oh wow... that was fantastic. Stunning. Beautiful. Very well written.

"Pain in the butt." Hehe... nice.

And great pics. This is a fantastic CJ; great story and great pics. Great job.

[Teeparex 6]

This is great, there are so many little details which make up the islands. The story is superb. It's like science fiction in a fantasy setting. How does the house-bidding thing work? I quite like Royal Street 001. Or is it all just for show?

Keep up the fab work!

EDIT: I would like to bid the sum of 4,500,000 Simelions for Royal Street 001 please.

(I am wealthy man, hehehe)

[Naryanna 0]

A quick info about house bidding:

The unit we use is at this point is Simelion.

Exchange you currency at Simtropolis Wolrdwide Bank. We decided to go by that way for preventing the confusion.

The bidding offer should be posted in your comment stating the following info:

-Wich house you are bidding for 

-The amount you are offering for it.

If another person offers more and you realy want the house it is suggested that you raise your bid and so forth until about an hour before next update when I shall declare that the biding is officialy closed for the purpose of updating.

If you dont manage to buy a property in Newspot there is still hope for living in Crimson Fall for there shall be offers for other vilages/cities also.

[penguin007 27]

Nice tranquil areas and the transport map looks great

Will

[Zelgadis 638]

Funny that you posted in my CJ just as I was planning to post in yours for the first time too. This is very good. Beauty mixed with a good story mixed with a touch of humor. "Your species is a pain in the butt!" Love that line.

ISF

[KingTitan 6]

ROTFLMAO.....nary.....you are awesome at photo-shopping.....i think you are probably the BEST one at it in regards to simtropolis cj's......

I put my bid for "ROYAL STREET 002"

I bid as many $$ as you wnat....however, all i ask in return that you name it "Titan Manor"

My bid starts at 30 billion USA dollars.

I WANT IT lol

[Naryanna 0]

Before Teaser:

penguin007: Hey Will! And there it was and update, hehe...

football_fever: Hey there! It happends, no hard feelings. Oh, but I have to do a lil torturing hre and then, lol... Well, some misteries were revealed, otheres are still waiting to be.

Droftrah: Hey hey! Thanky ou very much! Well... the third one shall be up soon also.

jacqulina: Hey sis! Thanky ou very much! Much apreciated!

After Teaser and before the Update 2:

jacqulina: Hehe, thank you. Well, there werent exactly farms, but neverthless..

funkytim88: Hello there! Well, I am definetly glad you like it. =) Thanks!

After Update 2:

suplado! : Hey hey! Why thank you very much! It is much apreciated and I certanly am glad that you like it. The water mod I use is PEG_WATERMOD_Clipper_205 and I love it as I love every single mod Pegasus made. =)

Schulmanator: Haha, I am sure you have enaugh under your thumb, my friend.

Deathtoall: Thank you very very much! And more it shall come, worry not.

Dsrwhat316: Hello there! Seriously? Wow, I am glad that it had that effect on you. Hopefully more chills shall come. As for Royal Street 002, worry not. Its not much rain in Newspot. =) Ty fro gorgeus comment!

2nerdy4u: Hey hey! Why thank you! I am realy glad you like it and your comment is flattering. Tnx for it, its much apreciated!

Teeparex: Thank you very much! Glad you like it!

penguin007: Hello again! I am glad you like my work, Will. Well, I am not so good at transporation but well, I am trying...

zelgadis: Hey! Isnt that interesting, haha. Well, your CJ was a lovely discovery. I love it, seriously! Ty for nice comment. =) Haha, well ya, I actualy laught when I wrote that sentence... lol...

KingTitan: Hey there! Now you made me blush. There is so much ppl here that do gorgeous work!

Bidding is still on!

Right now we have following:

Teeparex offering sum of 4,500,00 Simelions for Royal Street 001.

KingTitan offering sum of 30 billion USA dollars for Royal Street 002 with the demand that it is renamed to "Titan Manor".

Update shall be done sometimes in next 36 hours.

[KingTitan 6]

W00t W00t....I hope I am the only one that wants that mansion 002 I love it.

Waits.

[Naryanna 0]

Cya when I will ahve update ready... And KingTitan, I guess that that haiusy shall be yours if things goes this way.

[jacqulina 162]

beautifull work sis yet again,all the details you have done i know they take forever to do caus mine do too lol,mind you im so slowwwwwww at building.i love the pics very nicely done

[2nerdy4u 1]

That road bridge looks great there. And the swaying footbridge is quite nice too. I love the terraforming.

[Dsrwhat316 12]

jeez, if you're this good at terraforming, i wonder how good you are at city building, because i think that terraforming is the harder to get to look right. please update soon!

~ Dan

[suplado! 23]

well ill go check the wate modd..thanks!

anyway -- the teaser pics are awesome...very nice terrain!! cant wait for the next update!!

[Naryanna 0]

Congratulations to our new property owners!

The normal update is almost done. All that is needed is some story writting, uploading and posting so stay tuned.

[KingTitan 6]

AWESOME YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!

Thanks Nary.....

Let's see... I got find a decorator. need to hire some staff.....OMG I have so much to do....... It's gonna be a wonderul summer retreat.....

LOL. Thanks friend...you make your CJ so interactive and fun.

[Naryanna 0]

And It is time for new update... I hope you shall find it enjoyable...

Dense fog was hanging over the darkened land as they picked up a body of a beutiful young woman. Her skin was pale-white, cold and slipery. One of the mans tooked of his coat and put it around the shoulders of uncosious female with long, currly, raven-black hair twirled with sea grass. They carried her to a village and found the softest bed to lay her in it.

One called the village healer Ambrosia to tend to misterious lady, other went and gathered other villagers and third sat there looking at the sight of angelic beauty. She was hardly breathing at all as her pale-pink cracked lips lightly opened and a soft moan penetrated the silence. He felt mesmerized as he moved closer and his hand unconsciously  lifted up and moved towards her breasts in  wish of touching ...

"What are you doing?!" a  shreaking voice come from  the door and he abruptly stoped and retreated.

"I...I..." he stutter and blushed to deepest red.

"Move away, you silly lad!" old female said as she aproached the sleeping beauty while shooting  angry looks at  young male.

She examined her, sliped some floverly smelling liquid in her throut : "There, there... that should wake u up lass..." she said in motherly voice.

Beauty opened her eye-lids and showed her unearthly green eyes. She moved quickly up the bed, knees pulling to her chest while she grabed the cloth and pulled her up to her neck. She looked around in confusion and her lips twisted in fright.

"Its all fine... dot worry, you are safe sweety.." the healer said with warmest voice her vocals could produce and touched her shoulder assuringly.

She nodded in respons and layed back, not speaking at all.

"How should we call you?" Ambsoia asked the girl but she did not answered.

"What happend to you?" she tryed again but got no answer.

"There shall be time for that..." she said as she was moving towards the doors : "They will bring you hot stew..." and she desapeared.

Beauty looked and young man that was still standing in the corner of the room unable to move his eyes from her... and threw angelick smile at him that accompanied the wink. He wide opened his mouths in surprise and wanted to ask something but was interupted by a female carrying stew.

Few days has passed but still gilr didnt told her name, nor she told how she came here. In time, people stoped asking and just started to call her Annyena. She was still weak, laying in the bed most of the time but she was eagly exchanging looks with Friyel, one of the young males that brought her is.

It was strange redish evening when villagers noticed that Friyel is missing. Soon they discovered that he was not seen for couple of days already. They gathered with dogs and started the search for him.

[penguin007 27]

Another great update your areas are beautiful

Will