Bedevere, a city journal ahead of it's time.

[ky72x 13]

Aww, dang it, I missed a few updates again! I had the chance to comment here a few days ago, dunno why I didn't... Anyway, these are excellent pictures and the plot twists are still keeping me guessing! Keep up the great work.

- Kyle

[Vanasonic 49]

Schulmanator: Lol. Nice to know you are sitting down are not to close to the cliffhanger yourself. We need you to be safe because you need to keep your city journal alive so I can get some more inspiration from it. >

jacqulina: You will find out what's on those notes soon. But Tom sure has to get them quick before the house collapses.

DaViru$: The nightlife is my favourite picture I've done so far.

Tommy_Vercetti3: Thanks! I enjoy making people get enjoyed.

rct3twins: Better late than never.

ky72x: Also better late than never.

I'm currently working on the next update. It might take a while because I'm trying to download a few stuff from modthesims2.com but it's currently going through a server upgrade and I'm reformatting how my updates work to make them clearer to understand. Because we are not following one character anymore but three; Jane, Tom and Wolf. They are all going three sperate directions.

Jane; was just let out by an unknown stranger.

Wolf; left behind in the cell.

Tom; on the run and just saw his house attack.ed.

I'm also in a process of getting a review, so wish me good luck!

[jacqulina 162]

good luck my friend,and im looking forward to that update

[Artman94 2]

holy crap...tom's house is on fire *runs to save donuts*

nice cliffhanger, man, this really makes me impatient for the next update! LOL

oh and nice Sims2 pic, i like the guy that's just relaxing in the background, he doesn't seem to be worried about anything, lol

those questions are really mysterious, keep up the great work!

[MasterPlanMan 1]

Really nice CJ so far. I like the rural areas a lot. Your airport looks sweet. You have some nice city building going on. Some of the shopped pics look pretty good but on others I'd rather see your work in better detail. I'll be following this one from now on.

[Vanasonic 49]

jacqulina: Well, here's the update.

Artman94: Lol, I like him too. He becomes a fairly important character in this update. The tropical t-shirt does wonders for your mental health.

MasterPlanMan: I'm glad you're enjoying my CJ. What sort of detail are you looking for by the way? I'll see if I can post some random pictures of Bedevere next time, like the night strip of Westpoint last time.

Update #11 - Triple Split [includes some more cliffs so hang on please]

“You sure you’re alright?” the stranger asked.

“Well, I am breathing,” I sighed.

“Follow me then.”

 

I followed the stranger outside the jail cell leaving Wolf confused behind. I could only see the back of his the stranger’s head and couldn’t make out the finer details of his face. I would guess he would be male because of the majority of people here were men; he led the way confidently deeper and deeper into the maze of cells. The stranger stopped and had a quick conversation with one of the security guards. I could hear sounds of agreement. The guard joined us and then the three of us entered a room that according to my estimates was in the centre of the security compound.

The stranger broke the silence when we walked in, "We need to talk," he said.

Where I was now, I had no idea.

I saw Jane leave with a brisk walk behind the stranger. I was left alone here with another cell mate for company. “Where are we?” I asked.

 

The person looked up from his book, “We’re at the temporary cell,” he saw my confused look on my face but continued,”We stay here for a month or so and then we get sent to the proper compound when they find enough room.”

 

“You’ve been here before?” I asked.

 

“No, but that poster on the wall shows what the punishment are depending on the crime you were caught doing- what are you in here for anyway?” whispered the man as he stood up from his bed.

 

“Nothing much,” but as I was looking at the poster, the consequences I was going to face would be unenjoyable to say the least. I was beginning to wonder where Jane was at.

 

“Where is that lady that was here a while ago,” the man quizzed. “I don’t know,’ I said, “I’m Wolf by the way.” I offered a hand. The man stared at me for a quick second but relaxed and shook my hand. “Roger here,” he nodded. “Want to go for some lunch?”

The note! It was in my burning home; I dumped the painting in a nearby bush and stormed in through the back door. I sprinted inside straight into the kitchen. I could hear cracking from above. Then the roof collapsed.

[ky72x 13]

Ah, wow. This is just getting more and more intense! I wonder what's going to happen next...

BTW, the car that Wolf is driving, is that a Lexus SC 430? (My favorite car) It sure looks like one! Anyway, keep up the great work.

- Kyle

[octaves 4]

Nice stuff here.  Great use of TS2 along side of its cousin, SimCity

[Vanasonic 49]

ky72x: Lol! What a coincidence! I myself like Lexus and fancied the look of this one far more than the other cars. Also the name reminded my of a certain game I play. *cough* SC 430 *cough*

Brad-MacD: Thanks! I see that you also enjoy Isotown. I like the site but I haven't been there in almost half a year, so I might take a closer look at that sig link. It was because of Isotown that I took up learning how to draw my own. I'm not the best yet though. Lol.

[jacqulina 162]

wow the story is hotting up excuse the pun,great work and pics my friend

[octaves 4]

I have the most posts on the Isotown forum

Haha, I have pixel art posted there on the forum too.

[Vanasonic 49]

jacqulina: Puns are okay, as long as you don't overuse them. Lol.

Brad-MacD: I noticed. Lol. I had a project of making my own isometric pixel town but gave up not so long ago. It was hard work. http://www.freewebs.com/pixelside/

[football_fever 6]

Pretty awesome. I'm glad you're using things from MTS2 in your story. Using TS2 without MTS2.com is like using SC4 without simtropolis. 3-way stories are great by the way. I use multiple angles whenever I can.

[Sim_Air 2]

this is one amazing CJ my friend! i especially love the plot! greta pictures and wonderful work you show there, keep it up!

[Vanasonic 49]

football_fever: I agree. I used to play the Sims with no custom content and now, I'm wondering how I enjoyed those many years of simming. Lol. I'm planning to have three main characters with three distinct personalities. It's fairly hard to find a personality Wolf would fit with but it shouldn't take too long.

Sim_Air: Thanks a lot! Appreciate it.

I'll try to get another update as soon as possible but the main priorities now is to fix up the story so far to make it more clearer and index up the random informative articles. Feel free to ask any questions regarding the CJ and the plot or point out any unrealistic mistakes. There's on I deliberately left behind and if anyone can find it, I'll give them a surpirse.

Thanks for the continuous encouragement.

[rct3twins 14]

DAMMIT! I missed an update

EDIT: Is this dead? Helloooooooooo?

[rocketoink 3]

Hi! As shivsood had done, I only just found this. It is amazing! The pictures were just so dazzling...wow!Loved the nukes!

[penguin007 27]

Cant wait for that update this cj is always intirguing and I love the cliffhangers

Will