Roselle- Kippis05's very first CJ

[homeandaway 1]

cant wait to see what ideas you have follwed and used!.

Take care my friend.

~AleX~

[Kippis05 2]

thanks you guys. I'm working on an update right now... I'll be posting it within the hour

-Kippis05

[jacqulina 162]

b eautifull work my friend amazing pics lots of great details looking forward to your next update

[Kippis05 2]

Update 21: Highway Persuit...

Hi everyone and welcome to my next update! Thanks for your wonderful ideas for possible future updates, and please if you have any more, don't hesitate to show them to me, they'd be greatly appreciated Now, several months ago I had started a small storyline about a nuclear disaster in Roselle's suburb of Pellaview. I had written futher dialouge to go along with it in future updates, but I misplaced it. Now, the script has been recovered and I'd like to finish the story I started two months ago...

"The two remaining members of the terrorist group had fled the area, leaving 

the remaining bombs with some 'hired help'. The mayor and

myself [beck] were discussing the events of the day..."

Beck: (leaving Mayor's office) I understand that you're upset, Mayor, but unfortunatley we still don't 

have any leads as to where they are located...

Mayor: They blew up a chunk of my goddammed city! I want those bastards dead!!

Beck: We'll do everything in our power to catch these criminals... 

*Beck's cell phone begins to ring, he answers*

...Poitras, where the hell have you been!? We need you in Pellaview!

Poitras: I'm on 32. Seems somebody gave a tip about a stolen tan minivan with the licence plate RD868

from a resident in Pellaview just moments before the blast.. It was spotted by a state trooper a 

few minutes ago.. We think that these are the guys we want.

...Wait a minute...

Beck: What? What do you see?

Poitras: I found the leeches! I'll call you back...

Beck: Don't do anything stupid!

*ends call, continues to the elevator*

Highway 32, 

1:03 PM August 11, 2007

Gorchev: Where are we going to go now? We need a place to hide out from the feds..

Harris: I know, I know! Dammit... 

*looks at a row of abandoned industrial buildings*

Ah, perfect! Let's get off..

*sirens are heard from behind. In desperation, Gorchev speeds up...*

Harris: Damn!! They found us!

**PULL OVER TO THE SHOULDER, YOU'RE UNDER ARREST**

Gorchev: Well? What are you waiting for!? SHOOT!

*Harris opens the sunroof and begins firing onto the persuing squad cars*

Poitras: Back off, back off!!

*One squad speeds up despite Poitras' orders*

Poitras: What in God's name are you doing DeLuco!? Pull back!

DeLuco: No sir, they're goin down!

*DeLuco returns fire shots and puts several bullets through the back window and into Gorchev's chest

The van careens off the highway and into a ditch, exploding on impact*

Poitras: OH... *****! Damn you DeLuco, you took out our only source to the f****** bombs!! 

...to be continued...

-Kippis05

 Mayor and Alderman of Roselle Township

Roselle: Vintage Charm, Contemporary Spirit.

[jacqulina 162]

wonderfull update my friend i enjoyed the pursute

[hamsterTK 93]

Kaabooom!!!

That chase is going to be more remembered than the OJ white bronco chase

[BlondeTwiggy 43]

oh this is cool lol i have missed it sorry, great pics and storyline

[GreekMan 246]

OHHHHHHHHHHH WOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

After reading this awesome thing I am just astounded.

it's the best thing ever!!!!!!!!

1. you have a lot of cursing, it's funny

2. I like the dialologs much more so continue with that

3. good choce of pics

[homeandaway 1]

wooh, wooh, go on !, so cooolio!, and amazing i was on the edge of my seat!.

Take care

~AleX~

[daniel01 0]

wow nice update

keep up the good work

daniel01

[asturianu 4]

OOOH! I like pursuits and stories in journals! Nice one! I like the real photos too! Great work, Brandon! I am still loving this city!

Cristian

[bat 6]

wonderful update and great story!

bat

[Voulpiotis 4]

Wow! Brilliant! I'm really looking forwawrd to your next update!

[bigfatpaulie 0]

great update, I saw the words 'highway persuit' and I kew that the story was back

awesome job, my friend. Waiting for more!!

[ky72x 13]

Excellent update my friend, I love car chases and this was a very nice update, this storyline is turning out to be a great one! Keep it up, as I can't wait for more.

[Equilibria 16]

Top notch work here. I like the realism in the city, and the realism in the storyline (I take it you watch "24"...)

BTW, where did those highway chase pictures come from?

[crazyyaya 4]

nice story, entertaining, look forward to the next update

[Kippis05 2]

Thanks everyone, I'm posting replies to your comments in a couple of hours (1 hour = billions of years )

And that update will be coming in the next 24 hours so stay tuned!

-Kippis "Gone Bananas" 05

[Schulmanator 5,810]

[Kippis05 2]

Thanks everyone, I still gotta get to those replies, but I'm working on a comic project, so I'm gotta logged right now, but that update is coming, I promise you. (If not, you can come and beat the crap out of me )

-Kippis "Gone Bananas" 05

[Kippis05 2]

GASP! Did you hear that!? Kippis is posting personal replies!!

 Yeah, well it's about time I got around to doing this, it's been a while I know. So let's get started...

 

cityhawk: 

Thanks for your support. And yes, I watch '24' on occasion

 

natuurzoon: 

I'm glad you enjoy the destruction as much as I do lol..

 

bigfatpaulie: 

Yes, I'm back, with avengance. I guess I like chaos and destruction.

jacqulina: 

Everything is okay now, thank you my friend. I'm glad you like the story so far...

 

Schulmanator: 

Thanks for your continued enthusiasm, and I like the new 'picture posting'

 

defcon pilot: 

Well thanks for your drool, it all helps.. Hmmm, sheer talent-ocity, you say? Excellent.

 

patriots_1228:

 I never thought about Las Coastas influencing the story, but I think you're right

 

belfastuniguy: 

Well, keep on coming bak, there's plenty more

 

homeandaway: 

Thank you my friend for visiting. Hope you're having a great time on vacation...

 

daniel01: 

Thanks for your imput. I actually got around to making a 'Little Italy', and it worked out fantastically.

 

ky72x: 

Hey Kyle, yeah, that industrial sector sounds like a great idea, but I hope my Sims don't become cranky little bastards (like usual)

 

hamsterTK: 

I don't think this chase will be that famous lol. Thanks for dropping by

 

BlondeTwiggy: 

Heh, no problem twiggs, I'm probably the laziest when it comes to posting in other's CJ's

 

GreekMan: 

Yeah, I admit that I cuss waaaay too much when I'm writing a story, kinda like a "good cop, bad cop" thing

[homeandaway 1]

cool replies!, anyway, cant wait to see more of your great work my friend!

Take care as always

~AleX~

[daniel01 0]

thanks for the replies, so the 'Little Italy' worked

good luck on the next update mate

ciao

daniel01

[Kippis05 2]

Haha so here we are, 4 months later... I'm really sorry you guys, but after these few months I've realized I don't have the time or energy to continue my CJ anymore. To all my fans, I apologize immensley, but unfortunatley these things happen..

So, to any moderator that reads this, I'm afraid I'm giving you the green light to close this thread permanantly

Thanks again to all of you for your tremendous support thru my first of hopefully more CJ's in the future. To all of you, I bid you good day

-Kippis05
Mayor and Alderman of Roselle Township


Roselle. Vintage Charm, Contemporary Spirit.

[Cleaner475 150]

don't delete it - keep it there as a memory of what a great CJ it was!

perhaps one day you'll have the time to reopen it or do another

Richard

[suplado! 23]

nice update...also a nice story...

[ky72x 13]

Aww... it's sad to see this one go... this was an excellent CJ! Well I hope that you do make a new CJ sometime in the future. I'll be ready for a new one! Take care and I'll see you later Brandon.

- Kyle