Dierapy

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Update 39: Galesfe City Caledonia Hotels

Brad: This is Galesfe's Caledonia Premier Hotel, located near the waterfront with a view of the downtown skyline on the other side of the river.

Brad: Lot of buildings over here...

Brian: On the other side of the river is a regular Caledonia Hotel, also with a view of the river.

Brian: Night view, you can see the Galesfe Tower in the upper left corner as well.

Marikalf: A Caledonia Xpress can be found in the downtown area as well, next to the highway.

Tifalka and Marikalf: The hotel at night, and you can also see our condo in the round white skyscraper to the right.

Tifalka: We live on the bottom floor of the upper section of the building, between the two antennas.

Comments:

crushedcar, Schulmanator, 2ch, zelgadis, Marvin: Thanks for the comments!

[Blazerhawk 162]

Nice update! Like the night pictures.

[Schulmanator 5,787]

Nice hotels... they look out of my price range!

[Zelgadis 638]

Fantastic hotels! Looks like a fun place to stay.

Sorry this took me a little while. I've been preoccupied lately.

ISF

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Table of Contents, version 2

1st table of contents (updates 1 to 39)

Update 40, June 4th: Ruyarwni Dierapyámuk Myon: Top of this page.
Update 41, June 12th: The Suburb of Renmalnë: Top-middle of this page.
Update 42, June 17th: The First Mission: Middle of this page.
Update 43, June 26th: Captured: Middle of this page.
Update 44, July 4th: The Blitkarni Rebellion: Middle-bottom of this page.
Update 45, July 15th: New Knowledge and New Limbs: Bottom of this page.
Update 46, July 22nd: Cyborgs and Starships: Top of page 11.
Update 47, July 29th: The planet Myarun: Middle of page 11.
Update 48, August 8th: Doranar Biotech: Middle-bottom of page 11.
Update 49, August 23rd: Off to the desert: Top of page 12.
Update 50, September 3rd: Lauren Ahrns: Top-middle of page 12.
Update 51, September 19th: Galesfe Spaceport: Middle of page 12
Update 52, October 3rd: Galesfe Countryside: Middle of page 12
Update 53, October 10th: The planet Narya: Bottom of page 12
Update 54, October 21st: The planet Parel: Bottom of page 12

zelgadis:


(Other replies will be in the next update)

[Marvin 0]

Nice hotels you have there!

[pipishere 3]

Sorry i've missed a few updates Leech10! I love the new hotels and a Stargate?! Interesting!

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Update 40, Ruyarwni Dierapyámuk Myon


Tifalka: Just to the north of the city is this building, --
Marikalf: --finished just a few days ago.
Brad: Also, we don't work for Khatak anymore, we now work--
Brian: --here, in the Ruyarwni Dierapyámuk Myon.
Marikalf: That is Zukish for Myon Stargate Command, by the way.
Brad: The stargate was left where it was in the cave system,--
Brian: --though this facility was built on top of it.
Tifalka: It also extends underground, both in the original caves, and some new places that were added.
Brian: The elevator works now, too.
Marikalf: 10 different DPM teams were created to explore though the stargate,--
Brad: --and the four of us, Captain Lil Thobe, and Colonel Ronul Yelslew are in DPM-6.
Tifalka: Though we won't be going anywhere until they finish the base.


Marikalf: now, the building at night.


Brad: This is just a fake stargate used for training missions.
Brian: Though for a fake one, it is very realistic, you can even dial it!
Brad: You won't go anywhere when you go though it though.


Tifalka: The training forest area, complete with lake.

Comments:

Schulmanator: Even the Xpress?

zelgadis: You did find the returning holographic Myonian PADD-type communicator, right?

Leech10: Oh, look, a newly formed table of contents.

crushedcar, Marvin, pipishere: Thanks for the comments!

[Blazerhawk 162]

Oh, nice! Is it just me or was it planned that DPM-6 have 6 members?

[capitol1 1]

beatiful forest their mann lovin the stargate portals location.

[Zelgadis 638]

Ah, indeed we found it. Looking forward to a productive relationship.

ISF

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Update 41: The suburb of Renmalnë

Nikki: Hello, remember me? We

Nick: We will be doing this update, As Brad and Brian--

Nikki: Brad and Brian are doing something with the Dierapyámuk.

Nick: I was just about to say that!

Nikki: Well, you were too slow.

Nick: Renmalnë is in the northwestern corner of the city, and it includes the Galesfe Spaceport as well.

Nikki: It's a lot calmer here than in the downtown areas.

Nick: The industrial areas.

Nikki: I wonder if they make anything interesting there...

Nikki: The power and water plants.

Nick: Just your average suburb area, with school.

Nick: Renmalnë has a big cemetery in it as well, and it still--

Nikki: Lots of cars there now.

Nick: As I was saying, there still is some--

Nikki: Too many cars.

Nick: Nikki!

Nikki: What?

Nick: Stop interrupting!

Nikki: Sorry.

Nick: Anyway, there still is some room left so it doesn't need to be expanded anytime soon.

Nick: And finally, a small commercial area in the center of the residential areas.

Nikki: Doesn't seem to be any interesting shops in there...

Nick: Is shopping the only thing you think about?

Nikki: No.

Nick: Good.

Nikki: You have to eat and sleep, too!

Nick: ...

Comments:

crushedcar: No, it just turned out that way.

zelgadis: Myon's working on a computer program to calculate the location of a stargate from its address in case you are interested.

capitol1: Thanks for the comment!

[Zelgadis 638]

Carpathia will find such a program useful. It's a little tricky for us to do that now.

Good update too.

ISF

[Marvin 0]

Nice update, I like the suburbs!

[pipishere 3]

A very nice update Leech10. I like the suburb area!!

[pipishere 3]

A very nice update Leech10. I like the suburb area!!

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Update 42: The First Mission

September 29th, 0155AL

Brad: From a cave, to a foggy forest...

Marikalf: The trees don't seem to be doing very well.

Colonel Yelslew: It looks like something was chasing someone and burnt all the trees

Brian: Chasing who to what?

Colonel Yelslew: Don't know who, but they were probably going to the stargate.

 Captain Thobe: Looks like it happened a long time ago, though, as new trees are growing.

 Tifalka: That's good.

Marikalf: Speaking of stargates, did you hear about the attack in the al'Hasiq Empire?

 Captain Thobe: No, I haven't.

Brad: What happened?

 Tifalka: Several people came though the stargate on Makir, and quickly overpowered the guards.

Marikalf: They then took a computer system and went back though the stargate.

Brian: What was on the computer?

Marikalf: They didn't say what was all on the computer, but there was information on some of their technology.

Colonel Yelslew: So somewhere out there is someone with al'Hasiq stuff?

 Tifalka: Yes, though they have to figure out how to make it work...

Brad: How long are we supposed to stay on this planet, anyway?

 Captain Thobe: Just long enough to explore the area, longer if we find any civilizations.

Marikalf: Here's a river.

 Captain Thobe: There's some odd eel-like fish in here... Whoa!

*One of the eels jumps out of the water at them, showing long fangs, before Marikalf knocks it back into the water with telekinesis. Colonel Yelslew then shoots the area where it landed several times with his gun, but the eel swims away.*

Brian: I don't think we should get to close to the water.

 Captain Thobe: You think!?

Colonel Yelslew: Lets go into the forest again.

 Captain Thobe: And hopefully there aren't any other creatures with fangs...

Brian: Nothing but trees and fog here.

 Captain Thobe: Are you sure there is anything worth finding here?

Marikalf: There isn't anything near the stargate, you would think if there was any civilizations here they would be near the stargate.

Colonel Yelslew: Yes, I guess you're right, its time to go back.

*The forest suddenly turns dark, as if someone turned the sun off*

 Captain Thobe: Okay, what's going on here?

Brad: I really don't think I like this planet very much...

Colonel Yelslew: The only thing I can think of that happened is its a solar eclipse of some sort. With all this fog and clouds, I can't tell what caused it though.

 Captain Thobe: I think I hear something coming!

*Tifalka looks at a life-signs detector, which shows a single dot flying overhead*

 Tifalka: I think its a bird of some kind.

Brian: A big bird.

Brad: Where is the stargate, anyway?

Colonel Yelslew: Its this way. *points*

 Captain Thobe: I'll dial.

*As she walks up to the DHD, there is a slight rustling sound in the trees, then the sounds of the stargate being dialed. Just after the third chevron was engaged, there was a bright flash of light, and they all collapsed.*

To be continued...

Comments:

zelgadis: It is just about finished.

Marvin, pipishere: Thanks for the comments!

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Update 42: The First Mission

September 29th, 0155AL

Brad: From a cave, to a foggy forest...

Marikalf: The trees don't seem to be doing very well.

Colonel Yelslew: It looks like something was chasing someone and burnt all the trees

Brian: Chasing who to what?

Colonel Yelslew: Don't know who, but they were probably going to the stargate.

 Captain Thobe: Looks like it happened a long time ago, though, as new trees are growing.

 Tifalka: That's good.

Marikalf: Speaking of stargates, did you hear about the attack in the al'Hasiq Empire?

 Captain Thobe: No, I haven't.

Brad: What happened?

 Tifalka: Several people came though the stargate on Makir, and quickly overpowered the guards.

Marikalf: They then took a computer system and went back though the stargate.

Brian: What was on the computer?

Marikalf: They didn't say what was all on the computer, but there was information on some of their technology.

Colonel Yelslew: So somewhere out there is someone with al'Hasiq stuff?

 Tifalka: Yes, though they have to figure out how to make it work...

Brad: How long are we supposed to stay on this planet, anyway?

 Captain Thobe: Just long enough to explore the area, longer if we find any civilizations.

Marikalf: Here's a river.

 Captain Thobe: There's some odd eel-like fish in here... Whoa!

*One of the eels jumps out of the water at them, showing long fangs, before Marikalf knocks it back into the water with telekinesis. Colonel Yelslew then shoots the area where it landed several times with his gun, but the eel swims away.*

Brian: I don't think we should get to close to the water.

 Captain Thobe: You think!?

Colonel Yelslew: Lets go into the forest again.

 Captain Thobe: And hopefully there aren't any other creatures with fangs...

Brian: Nothing but trees and fog here.

 Captain Thobe: Are you sure there is anything worth finding here?

Marikalf: There isn't anything near the stargate, you would think if there was any civilizations here they would be near the stargate.

Colonel Yelslew: Yes, I guess you're right, its time to go back.

*The forest suddenly turns dark, as if someone turned the sun off*

 Captain Thobe: Okay, what's going on here?

Brad: I really don't think I like this planet very much...

Colonel Yelslew: The only thing I can think of that happened is its a solar eclipse of some sort. With all this fog and clouds, I can't tell what caused it though.

 Captain Thobe: I think I hear something coming!

*Tifalka looks at a life-signs detector, which shows a single dot flying overhead*

 Tifalka: I think its a bird of some kind.

Brian: A big bird.

Brad: Where is the stargate, anyway?

Colonel Yelslew: Its this way. *points*

 Captain Thobe: I'll dial.

*As she walks up to the DHD, there is a slight rustling sound in the trees, then the sounds of the stargate being dialed. Just after the third chevron was engaged, there was a bright flash of light, and they all collapsed.*

To be continued...

Comments:

zelgadis: It is just about finished.

Marvin, pipishere: Thanks for the comments!

[Blazerhawk 162]

Cool update. Now what's going on?

[Blazerhawk 162]

Cool update. Now what's going on?

[pipishere 3]

Ohh another gripping update Leech10....eagerly awaiting the next installment!

[Zelgadis 638]

Oo... Intriguing! Wonder what's up...

ISF

[Marvin 0]

Nice update there, now what could be going on?

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Update 43: Captured

September 29th, 0155AL

Brian woke up to find that he had been tied to someone, but couldn't tell who it was. As his sight started to go back to normal, he looked up and saw a silvery door in a black wall, which had some odd, blocky writing on it. He then looked over to his right, where Captain Thobe was sitting, but when he looked over to his left, there was nothing but another wall.

Brian: Were is everybody?

 Captain Thobe: Huh? Uhh... I don't know.

Brian: It would be nice to know were we are.

 Voice: You are on a Blikora of the Dlorwani.

 Captain Thobe: What's a Blikora?

Brian: And what's a Dlorwani?

The door opened to reveal a person who looked like a large cat, with brown fur.

  ???: I'm a Dlorwani, and the ship you are in is called a Blikora. Also, I am Kloren.

Brian: Kloren?

Kloren: Yes, It's my name. Who are you, and why are you here?

 Captain Thobe: I am Captain Lil Thobe and he is Brian Meiring, and we are peaceful explorers from the planet Myon.

Kloren: Where is that?

Brian: Though the stargate.

Kloren: What address?

 Captain Thobe: And why should we trust you?

Kloren: Come over here.

They walked over to one of the windows, and Kloren showed them all of what was out there.

Kloren: The Dlorwani can give your planet all the technology you need to build stuff like this, and also the protection from any enemies you may have.

Brian: What kind of protection?

Kloren: Anything you need. Here, watch.

Kloren walked over to a nearby control panel, and after pressing a few buttons, there was a bright flash and a blue beam shot into the sky.

 Captain Thobe: Nice, though I don't think our leaders would want to make deals with someone who captures their people.

Kloren: I di--

 Computer: Tliramomukhlatanigo!

The prisoners have escaped!

Brian: What was that?

Kloren: It is nothing to worry about, there seems to be a slight problem in the cargo holds. The crew will take care of it.

 Captain Thobe: What kind of problem?

Kloren: The announcement didn't specify.

Kloren goes over to the controls and pressed a few buttons, then a screen with the same blocking writing that was on the door showed up. He pressed a few more buttons and a section of flashing text appeared on screen.

Kloren: It seems the ventilation system has failed in the cargo holds.

Brian: And they would announce that here.

Kloren: This is the bridge of the ship, any important announcements will be announced here.

 Captain Thobe: Oh.

Suddenly, the door opened again and two guards came in, and whispered something to Kloren. When they were finished, they went back outside and took up positions on either side of the door.

Brian: You need guards to protect us from a ventilation failure?

 Captain Thobe: Wait... I've heard of you before... You want to take our planet, don't you.

Kloren: Why would you say that?

 Captain Thobe: Why else would you take us prisoner and try to get our planets stargate address?

Brian: And it would explain the guards outside the door, too.

Kloren: So you are smart enough to figure it out. But it doesn't mean you can stop me.

Kloren points out another window to two ships already in the air.

Kloren: The Dlorwani have more than enough ships to take your planet. If you tell me its stargate address, I will go easy on you two.

Brian: And the others?

Kloren: I can't guarantee that.

 Captain Thobe: Then the answer is no.

Brian: If we don't tell you, you can't find it.

Kloren: You will tell me it, not matter what you say now!

Brian: I don't think so.

Kloren: You will!

Brian: No.

Kloren takes a swipe at Brian, and he collapses, bringing Captain Thobe down with him. He then goes over to the controls and signals the guards, then prepares to take off.

Kloren: We will see about that. Guards, make sure they don't try anything.

 Guards: Yes, sir!

However, a flickering of the lights, followed by another warning, and a large explosion deep within the ship changes his mind.

To be continued...

Comments:

crushedcar, zelgadis, Marvin: Now you know at least part of what is going on...

pipishere: Glad you like it!

[Schulmanator 5,787]

Sounds like the fur is about to fly!!!

[Blazerhawk 162]

Reminds me of the early seasons of Stargate SG-1, well, except for the cats. Why does everyone pick on cats?

[Marvin 0]

Beware of the cats...

[Zelgadis 638]

Just throw a bucket of water on them. That'll disorient them long enough for you to make your escape.

Although, I'm sure you've got something much more conducive to the plot planned.

ISF

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Update 44: The Blitkarni Rebellion

September 29th, 0155AL

Brad: Where are we?

Marikalf: I don't know, but it looks like some sort of cell.

Brad: And where are Brian and Captain Thobe at?

 Tifalka: I don't know.

Marikalf: Someone's coming!

2 guards wearing black armor show up outside the cell, each holding a long metal staff with a bulge at the top.

Guard 1: We can help you.

 Tifalka: What do you mean?

Guard 2: Get back to wherever you came from.

Colonel Yelslew: *yawn* What's going on?

Guard 1: You are on a Dlorwani Blikora on the planet Tloro.

Brad: Where are Brian and Captain Thobe?

Guard 2: They are on the bridge

 Tifalka: What is with the staffs?

Guard 1: I'll show you later.

The guards walk over to a control panel, and after pressing a few buttons, the door to the cell opens.

Guard 2: Here, you can have your stuff back.

Marikalf: Who are you, exactly?

Guard 1: We are members of the Blitkarni Rebellion, and we are here to gather information for the rest of the rebellion.

They begin walking down the halls of the ship, to a room near the center.

Brad: Is this the bridge?

Rebel 1: No

Colonel Yelslew: So why are we here?

Rebel 2: This is the main power room of the ship.

As they open the door, they hear something begin to power up on the other side of the rooms.

Rebel 1: We must hurry, they are getting ready to take off!

Marikalf: Hurry and do what?

Rebel 2: There is a power source over on that wall *points* You need to remove it, it looks like a metal cylinder with writing on it.

Tifalka and Marikalf go over and remove the power source from its attachment system, while the rebels do the same with a second power source on the opposite side. Soon after doing this, the large object on the other side of the room begins to power down again. However, as they leave the room, they hear someone enter another part of the room.

 Voice: Stop!

Rebel 2: Get away from the door!

One of the rebels aims his staff in the room, the bulge now glowing blue, and fires off some sort of energy blast at the large object, which explodes. The other rebel hits a button on a nearby control panel, and the door starts to close. before it finishes, they can see a fireball on the other side of the room stop expanding, and begin to fall in on itself. Just after the door closes, there is a second, much larger explosion.

 Tifalka: What was that thing that blew up?

Rebel 1: That was the ship's main engine. Without it, and the power sources, the ship can't take off.

Brad: If we removed the power source for the ship, why are the lights still on?

Rebel 2: The ship has backup power systems, to run any critical systems like life support and communications. 

Rebel 1: The bridge is just up here. There should only be a couple guards, and Kloren, the captain of the ship to deal with.

They run up a set of stairs to another door, which opens as they approach, revealing two more guards. The rebels shoot them with their weapons, and someone at the controls turns around to see what is going on. One of the rebels tries to shoot him, but misses, instead hitting the window. Colonel Yelslew then fires two shots at him with his gun, and he collapses. They then walk over to Brian and Captain Thobe, who are lying on the floor.

 Captain Thobe: We need to get him back to the base soon.

Marikalf: Huh?

They get Brian sitting up, which reveals 5 long slashes where Kloren attacked him. Meanwhile, Kloren is slowly reaching for one of the fallen guards' weapons lying on the ground behind them.

Kloren: Dloktalokatla blitnak gla Blikoratla!

I will not tolerate chaos on my Blikora!

Brian: (somewhat weakly) No.

Brian looks at Kloren, an then Kloren suddenly is sent flying across the bridge and crashes into the far wall, and then is knocked sideways into the controls.

Marikalf: Huh?

 Tifalka: What?

Marikalf: I didn't do that, at least not sending him flying into the other side of the room!

Rebel 2: We have to leave now, before the others figure out what happened here.

He goes over to the controls, and an alarm activates soon after.

Rebel 1: Everyone, we have to get back to the stargate as quick as possible.

Colonel Yelslew picks up Brian after one of the rebels undoes the bonds between him and Captain Thobe, and they run down the hallway as the other rebel throws something into the control room. 

Just as they enter another room, they hear an explosion.

 Captain Thobe: What was that?

Rebel 1: The bridge has just been destroyed, and we are in the ships transportation room.

He hits a few buttons, and goes over to join the others. There is then a bright flash of light, and they find themselves in some sort of station next to a train-like vehicle. They get in, and it soon speeds off down the tube it is in.

Brad: Now where are we?

Rebel 2: This is the main method of long distance transportation, it will only be a short time before we are back near the stargate.

Brad: Brian, how are you?

Brian: It hurts. Also, for some reason, I feel odd, but it has nothing to do with what Kloren did. I.. I think I flung him across the room.

Marikalf: You? How?

Brian: I just don't know... Try asking me again when I don't hurt so much.

Rebel 1: We will soon arrive at the station, though there is a base on the other side from the stargate, we must figure out some way of stopping them before they can send out troops to try and stop us. They may have already be notified of us coming here, so if there is any guards, that is where they came from.

Marikalf: I can do that.

As they arrive at the station, they see several guards stationed outside, and as the doors opened in the train car, Brad, Tifalka, and Colonel Yelslew opened fire, quickly taking them out before they had a chance to return fire. They then ran outside into the forest, and Marikalf turned around to face the stain as she raised he arms

There was a bright flash followed by what sounded like thunder, and the station seemed to explode, and this was followed by several smaller bangs from the base. Just as this finished Marikalf collapsed.

 Tifalka: Whoa...

Tifalka picked up Marikalf, and they ran deeper into the forest to the stargate.

Brad: What exactly were you doing in the bridge?

Rebel 1: We set the self destruct for the ship.

The sound of a loud, far-off explosion reaches their ears.

Rebel 2: And I think it just went off.

As they reach the stargate, they hear several ships approaching, and they quickly go an dial Myon. As they transmit the signal to turn off the shield guarding the Myon gate, they hear a loud bang, and 2 fireballs appear on the other side of the gate from the DHD.

Rebel 2: Hurry, they will soon turn around to begin their main attack!

They run though the gate, and just after it shuts down, another blast flies right though it... 

Comments:

Schulmanator: It seems like some of the fur got burnt as well...

crushedcar: Maybe because cats aren't in Stargate SG-1?

Marvin: Thanks for the comment!

Zelgadis: And just where would they find a bucket of water?

[Schulmanator 5,787]

Cool! Lots of action.

The fur's a-flying again here!