Hamilton, Iorio

I like the first picture's selection of buildings. They work together really well and the district is small enough to show growth later on. Having said that, one of my biggest pet peeves is a downtown surrounded by undeveloped blocks. There is also a zot that was a little annoying. I'm optimistic though that as this journal goes on, your skills will improve. If you need some inspiration, bounce over to Retep Molinari's journals - he has crafted some good stories and long CJs that focus on redevelopment.

I like the historical look you got going on. The area will have a nise look once you mix in mordern building with the old.

[quote name='JGellock' timestamp='1346937284']
I like the first picture's selection of buildings. They work together really well and the district is small enough to show growth later on. Having said that, one of my biggest pet peeves is a downtown surrounded by undeveloped blocks. There is also a zot that was a little annoying. I'm optimistic though that as this journal goes on, your skills will improve. If you need some inspiration, bounce over to Retep Molinari's journals - he has crafted some good stories and long CJs that focus on redevelopment.
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JGellock - Thank you for the compliments/constructive criticism and for taking the time to visit my CJ. I will admit to being in kind of a rush with this update and I didn't have time to fix a few things (such as the zot you mentioned). As for the undeveloped blocks, the next update will find them 100% developed. I will check out Retep's journals.


[quote name='Jacob Guajardo' timestamp='1346937970']
I like the historical look you got going on. The area will have a nise look once you mix in mordern building with the old.
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Jacob - Thank you! I've actually done quite a bit with downtown and uptown Hamilton since this past update, and sometime this week I will have another update.

Where's the next entry?