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Update 2:The Resort Area of Oceanopolis

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MayorDreams

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Hello everyone this is the second update of my CJ this update is about the Resort Area ok i typed alot and had all the pictures on this update but i use safari and used back space and it went back to the previous page and all my hard work was gone i was sooooo mad but anyway heres the first pictureresortarea.png this is the main Resort area this area makes about 8 million dollars every 3 weeks the Resort area is spotted with casinos hotels restaurants shopping malls department stores etc the sun sets infront of this area making it a ideal area for honeymoons dates proposals and its just a great spot most visitors rate the resort area a 5star vacation hotspot ok next pictureSSSRTower.png this is the Seven Seas Spa Hotal Casino and Resort (Long name yes yes it is) this however is not the most popular resort to goto it is the most expensive :( now heres the most stayed at best amazing resort in Oceanopolis yes its the Haywood Inn Resortsssrandcasino.png alright next is the best commercial district in the city millions buy things there over the year (the huge building in the top right cornor is a resort and a shopping center mainly resort)downtown.png "Small Island" what most citizens and tourists call it its a small island holding 5 buildings 3 are resorts it has the more cheaper resorts but its still a great spot LAST PICTUREsmallisland.png Thanks please be sure to leave a comment before ya go thnx

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Ceraton
This is a pretty good and very interesting entry with lots of potential, but you seriously need punctuation. Lack of punctuation makes your entries look very... messy, and makes it difficult to read. It wouldn't be the end of the world if you didn't improve the punctuation, but considering CJs are all about the stories, there IS room for improvement, I think. :D

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