Thanks for all the positive comments, again! This is what motivates me to keep on updating.
@Mondayrain: Thanks, I use the 'glow' and 'grain' effects to add the "TDC atmosphere". About the time: I'll do so when the story 'calms down' again, when I get to the farms.
Again, thanks for the ideas and your interest.
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Update 15: The Bankobbery

"What you doin'in here? This is OUR place!
What's your name?"
"Bing, my name is Bing, I... I want to be in your gang."
"Hahah, not so fast, can we trust you?"
"Ofcourse, I will be loyal."
"Then go with us and rob Hadson Bank. See how far you'll go."
They went. The four of them, packed with a machine gun, to Hadson Bank, near Hotel 'The Corner'.
"Go in. Quick!"
Everyone ofcourse started screaming, but they got quiet when the leader of the gang shot in the air.
Some people outside heard the shots, and called the police. David was one of them.
They would be here "...as soon as possible..."
"The car is in the back, get in with the money!"
"The police, POLICE! Get the frig outta here!"
"Damn, they've seen us!"
See you next time,
DM.
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