OK... My 1st 3DsMax Hut

[mayorgreener 37]

My 1st 3DsMax Hut

http://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/12360312/simcity_screenshots/hut.jpg

 

Thank you for watching.

[Cool_Z 1,547]

Well that's not bad for a first... but some things could be better.

 

 

First, it's cute, that's a good point

 

The textures are not bad, the roof is mirrored but it doesn't show too much. the bricks are a tad big for this scale.

 

The chimney is made from a block, we should be able to see tubes going out or see inside it. The bricks should be layed the same way they are for the house, horizontally.

 

The windows look ok but the big one is too massive, and it should not use the texture as it is, you should use the frame and extend it, not just make the whole thing bigger.

 

The door... is it a door ? Ain't that a picture of a door on a door ?

 

You should add details, sculpt a bit more the model (door, windows). It looks a bit flat. Try to learn how to make relief (there are tons of tutorials about 3D modeling on youtube)

 

 

But well, I come back to what I said first, it looks cute

 

Go on and work on it, you'll learn lots of things and you'll have lots of fun. Cheers :)

[mayorgreener 37]

OK Thank you.

Yes will work on them

[mayorgreener 37]

Update1:

 

Hello Batters,

Are the windows OK now? 

 

http://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/12360312/simcity_screenshots/window_1.jpg

http://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/12360312/simcity_screenshots/window_2.jpg

http://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/12360312/simcity_screenshots/window_3.jpg

 

Thank you.

[Cool_Z 1,547]

Much, much better !!! You're going the right way, go on 

[mayorgreener 37]

OK is this looking nice?

http://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/12360312/simcity_screenshots/hut_2.jpg

 

Thank you

[KonstantinII 1,106]

Maybe add a chimney?