Astro City, the city of Hope - A Nealos101 CJ

[Kwakelaar 92]

Hail to all the carnivores.
Interesting reading and development in this CJ.

[Traffic_Jam 0]

Looking very good!

 

WELCOME TO PAGE 2

[Codythemonkey 0]

Ya looking good on the city i like it

[nealos101 20]

mentarman: Thanks

Kwakelaar: Thanks

Traffic_Jam: Thanks again.

 

Codythemonkey: Thanks as well.

 

Yey! Page 2! And still lots of comments!

 

*** CJ Update 4 ***

 

 

Fort Cjah works hard for it's citizens now, and there are a few tourists running about from Saviour 3 - a ship that landed on Alpha Proxima. But there are still no signs from Saviour 7. The president still doesn't worry, however, he is concerned that the ship could have been completely destroyed. Meanwhile...

 

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With the newest addition to residents and a few tourists, the president has decided to open up Fort Cjah's central area to old business built in Miami, and as a result, these hotels were built. These hotels boost commerce and materials coming into the future, and Fort Cjah will be supporting Astro City all the way to the top...

 

The traffic rates are boosting with the toursists, and the noise is successfully phased out by the trees and sunken viaducts of the A1 and Superhighway 1. The only thing I dislike about living here is that the farmers are becoming more dependant on door-to-door sales when actually they should be selling at the major stores. With a tourist population of 2,500 and a resident population of 15,000 - who said they can't afford to spend some money on advertising?

 

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In the wake of traffic, Fort Cjah have produced this Y-Stack interchange to draw the cars from the town centre and/or take it to future developments. Of course, it eventually takes you to Astro City centre, but not as quickly as superhighway 1. My grandchildren will enjoy this road when my son has them.

 

The presindent enjoys the praise, and as Fort Cjah grows, so does the number of business...

 

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With the growing amount of children, it becomes hard to occupy them all. This is why the president has allowed the company Toys R Us to restart their business in Fort Cjah. We love it, and my wife goes there every month if our son is good.

 

In the struggle to find truth in the fate of Saviour 7, many people have set up search runs with free hired shuttles; this as a result has also boosted business in favour of the transport industry. And, with the industry improving, we see more higher-wealth citizens moving in...

 

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English tudor houses were brought in favour in Fort Cjah becuase they fitted in well with the charecter of the outskirts of Astro City.  But, not only that, it didn't cost much to make either!

 

The residents agree the township community is ready to hold their first serious meeting into moving on with some of their offspring - overcrowding is become a concern and we're just about ready to build the second colony... or the third. The serious question is... Can we come to trust them if they reach town-size stages?

 

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They'll definetly build along the A1 or close to it - they want to have good connections, not lousy ones which take forever. This is the main reason we're planning ahead with concerns to major roads and routes.

 

Im trying to decide if I'll take my son along - show him the ropes to meeting some one, settling down, building his house and going up the ladder like I did. But we'll see...

 

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Well, with the town centre set up, we'll have that meeting soon. Economically concerned we'll be planting some forests to make things look good and have the environment's issues taken into account.

 

 

The town is big enough for a map to created...

 

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Unfortunatly, our satellites were unable to take pictures due to power failure in the uplink controls, and we're forced to explore on foot or via shuttle.

 

Let's hope we can get them running soon so that we can find that crash site... If any...

 

Thanks for your comments everyone!

 

Nealos101.

 

[Jerebannus XVI 7]

Wow, great updates, i really like thos art deco buildings, i see you named part of your city after cjah.

[nealos101 20]

Jerebannus XVI: Thanks and good observation there! I love his Cj Bostalk, it has been a great insparation to me, so I dedicated this colony to him.

Nealos101.

[Cjah 15]

Excellent work with the pictures!

I love the new buildings and all the custom BATs.Also the avenue really looks...real....This colony is really looking good.I hope we hear from the other colonies too....

Keep up all the great work!

[kingnoel 0]

love that first colony pics..especially the house with the farm around it...very realistic.great job on your story line also, interesting reading. i felt like i was really IN a farm country.

[nealos101 20]

Cjah: Thanks very much! Another few colonies are on the way!

 

kingnoel: Thanks alot as well - that was my aim to start off with.

 

*** CJ Update 5 ***

Today is the day, my son is 14 and ready to develop another colony. The meeting was a success - at least 200 children were ready to move on with a team of elders. Their mission - to go along the A1 towards the mountain ridges.  Our utilities panel is up and running, and the results we expected were in, except for the problematic weather occuring in the west...

 

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As you can see, Planet Astro is a harsh area for development, but the flat areas show perfect prospects. Many of us may see this legacy come true in our lifetime, but some are still doubtful.

 

My son and his team of gallantries, set out for the west. In their travels, they'll set up camp, and establish a forward base like we did. However, we have serious problems. We contact the crawler vehicles...

 

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We found the crash site. Everyone beleives this is Saviour 7 - becuase Saviour ships at these magnitudes produce huge afromations like small comets. The only problem is, Saviour 7 was twice the size of any conventional ship, but our research teams proove otherwise...

 

Materials and metals found in the crater state that this object that hit the planet was going slowly, but had lost control of itself. Basically, what they're saying is that this is Saviour 7, and furthermore, the wrekadge was found underwater, smashed to peices but it looked like there were survivors...

 

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My son and his team set up temporary camp with the scientists to help them moniter the current situation, and it is beleived, by what my son has told me on the phone, that the survivors walked through the crater in the torrential rail towards the proposed site of Astro City.

 

So, were they following the legacy? Or were they up to something? The scientists were swift to light the area...

 

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Probably the biggest operation we have followed, this soon became a nightmare. Remains of dead bodies were in sight in the water. Luckily, they had drowned, but the footprints shown a serious struggle - like some sort of biological attack or a flood or something not real in human terms...

 

Saviour 7 was endangered... The survivors - the question now remained was... Are they still alive? And what happened here if it wasn't a flood?

 

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The small trench was then studied, and before my son knew it, his group was moved on without a goodbye. The president knew something, and so did the mayor of Fort Cjah, but they weren't saying anything becuase it could cause a panic.

 

So, what's going on? My son helping a scientist team and then suddenly forced to move on? They find something the public mustn't know? I'll have to sleep on it...

 

Thanks everyone!

 

Nealos101.

[Glenni 1,447]

heh i love that Big ,big  crater crash site!!!

[Codythemonkey 0]

I liek the avenue interchange i love the city too keep going with the updates

[Kwakelaar 92]

Still very interesting to follow this CJ, crater pictures with lights, nice touch!

[GMT 389]

hey!

nice cj so far.
tho i dont like this space-idea its quite a good cj. i hope it develops as good as it starts

good luck

[nealos101 20]

GLENNI: Thanks

Codythemonkey: Will do, thanks again.

 

Kwakelaar: Thanks again too

 

GMT: It doesn't really favour space, it's just a developing city on a devloping world - I hope it comes out good. Thanks.

 

Thanks for the comments everyone.

 

Nealos101.

[Lyhoko Leaci 770]

Looks good so far, I like the pictures of the crash site.