Suburbia

[jacqulina 162]

excellent work and pics my friend

[Benedict 3,119]

hostages under the ferry docks - fantastic stuff!

[briantwigley 0]

Wow I'm hooked, cant wait for the next update

[Goldfish4209 9]

Ooo, this is getting interesting. Looking forward to see how this turns out.

[City2TheMax 3]

Hey guys, I'm sorry that I didn't update this in a while! I kinda got addicted to GTA: SA and VC, so that took up a good amount of time. I'll promise you an update by Sunday though!

[Zarp 0]

still looking forward last sunday's update!

[roboo1 1]

OK we can wait details take time (or is it the GTA) looking forward for the update

[City2TheMax 3]

REPLIES

tigerplayer91:  Everything will be told in time... =)

jacqulina: Thanks!

Benedict: haha, thanks!

Briantwigley: Well I hope this wasn't too long of a wait =/

Goldfish4209: Thanks!

Zarp: haha, sorry

Roboo1: True, details can take time... anyways here it is =)

UPDATE 5

I'm really sorry, some things came up. But I'm back and ready to entertain you =)

This update won't have as many pictures but more storyline... it's not gonna be a big update but more of a set up for bigger updates. Hope you like it!

Hey ese, glad you could stop by. Some stuff's happened and I can't remember a thing. I woke up this morning outside of my home with an empty liquor bottle in one hand, laying on the yard. Yeah, you say that would explain everything, except that I haven't had liquor since I was 19 years old. some fool out there was trying to set me up, but I don't know who. I remember being in the highschool building, but that's it.

I've been away from my barrio for a few days now, but everything's still tight.

I haven't showed you a picture of my home vato, no? Here it is:

As José was walking into his home, he got an anonymous phone call. He picked up his cell phone, and the other line simply said:

"Go to 508 Casianta street, come along. We are watching you."

"Who the hell is this, ese? You set me up?"

*beep*

the caller hung up. José, having nothing better to do, hopped in his car and drove over to 508 Casianta street, which was in the West Side industrial district

He arrived there in about half an hour. It was an old abandoned factory. No cars where there, so he checked the address again. It was correct. He walked up to the doors to find them unlocked. Immdiately after stepping inside he was seized and blindfolded.

He woke up another half hour later, only to be looking into the face of a good friend, John

"What the hell... John Caréz, is that you vato?"

"Yeah, it's me. Look I gotta explain some stuff to -"

"What is all this?"

"You're in an old factory. This is my brother's crack house, which is why we sedated you. We would've been in even bigger trouble if you were a cop or something."

"Even bigger trouble?"

"Look, I am an agent for Mid-Valley. I was behind the nuclear power plant operation, and somehow they found out! When I got home yesterday there were cops looting my home, so I had to escape. I can't get past the borders, and can't communicate with Mid-Valley. I need you to get out there and get some help, otherwise we're both screwed."

"Why me, ese? I need to get home man, I got people depending on me."

"Weren't you wondering about that liquor bottle? The cops set you up to it. They tried to get information from you, and gave you one of those memory pills that made you forget everything. I don't know what information or how much they got, so you gotta get this thing done fast."

"But if they know I got information why would they let me out?"

"'Cause they probably got everything they need. Look man, chill here for now. I'll get back to you."

I sat there on the couch, trying to sort stuff out. Then I remembered a little bit of something that had to do with the cops. It was some kind of apartment in West City.

That was all I remembered. After that I dozed off into another sleep, probably an after effect of the sedatives...

[jacqulina 162]

wonderfull residential there my friend,great looking home you have.

[tigerplayer91 3]

EEEE

lol that is supposed to sound like excited or anxious

or something.

Funny story, in my neighborhood in Chicago if I go down about

like 16 blocks theres crack houses. Well I guess that wasnt really a story

but whatever. By the way, nooooo lol I dont live in the ghetto

16 blocks is actually pretty far lol.

Great update mucho interesante. (Though some Spanish

would be quite appropriate for the setting and the character lol)

Nickk

[anik 14]

Hmm.. interesting update.. I like how your CJ has some action!

Que va a occurrir a Jose? (Yes, I suck at Spanish lol)

[roboo1 1]

This I a really good update! The story is originall and makes me interested in what will happen next

-roboo1

[roboo1 1]

This I a really good update! The story is originall and makes me interested in what will happen next

-roboo1

[Zarp 0]

nice update, keep it coming