Fralinserb

[aeronov91 0]

Ok this is my first City Journal, so go easy on me please First and foremost, someone please tell me how to upload pictures from photobuscket onto the thread After that, i will tell the story

[John94538 0]

Well... There's a sticky in this forum and I think it's the second topic from the top. There you'll find all information on how to post pics and how to make a good CJ. I hope this helps.

[SCkid 0]

You just have to hit reply, then click the picture icon and put the link there. it's not to hard. but for more detial just go to the thread stated above ^ i hope you find out soon, I'll be looking for the start of this city.

[yoshikoroyimara 5]

me too...

[aeronov91 0]

Ok, Here it goes Franiserb is an independent Island Region somewhere in the south Pacific. Its first settlement was by the Chinese in 1451 when they were sailing the seas. Many years later, portugese exlporers came by and attempted to ransack the land a dig for gold, however, the local populatiation left behind by the Chinese was not pleased and they formed a rebellion against their Creul Overlords. in 1938 the Japanese invaded and destroyed most of the native land and enslaved the local population into mining gold (which their island is rich in). Luckily, after the population of the island plummeted from 10 Million to 4 million, Americans in the Pacific took back the island and freed the native inhabitatants. With their Newfound Freedom and a new democratically elected government, the island nation thrived but due to a limited ammount of oil reserves, their were not many cars on the island, to this day, the popular form of transportation is the local subways and GLRs which Snake through the city. In 2001, after the new American Leader was elected, the nation formally cut off its ties from the American Government and began to work closer with its Chinese Inhabitants towards a better relation with China. The Country's inhabitants are varied and interesting, 73% of the nations inhabitants are still of Chinese decent, the others, 9% American Seirbs, 7%French Seirbs, 4%Japanese Seirbs, 2% Korean, and 1% refugees from the surrounding Island Nations. The others are of Mixed Nationality Transportation, the Island Chain has an amazing ammount of non- Vehicular Transportation, Trains, busses, boats, and a local airline which works like a speedy train (AirFralinserb). The Local government is a mix of several diffrent governments, at the head is the Chairmen of the Congress, who are a group of democratically elected members from each isle, based much in the communist system. Then there is the parliment of many who have a lot of power over the nation, the parliment serves as a voice of the poeple because anyone can run for a senator in the nation. Then there is the hall of the constituton, which the eqivelent of a supreme court. The system is quick and secure and has not had a glitch in it since. The last time that war was declared was during Vietnam, and to do this at least 5 members of the Chairmen of the Congress, a 70% Majority vote by the parliment, and 6 out of the 8 judges had to vote for it. The Chains national benefits are astounding, The entire system is based on your standing in society and is in the constitution, "no man, woman, or child of any race shall pay the nation more than 40% of their earnings, and if the indiviual is unable to pay the nation will support his debt" People at the top average a taxation of 50% of their earnings unless they opt for an apartment or condo (in which case they get a benifit of 5%) the middle class average a pay of about 40% (with a benefit of 3-4% for an apartment or condo) and the poor average a taxation of 30%, (with a large drop if the family is forced to live on government dollars). This way if you start at the bottom, you can get to the top ok, now for the fun park, PICTURES The city in its entirity, expanding rapidly to (note the airport, this will be very important in this Journal. A Closer view of the Inner City The Downtown Core, home see mung Fun park.

[penguin007 27]

Sounds interesting but to make it reader friendly how about put it in paragraphs

Will

[jacqulina 162]

sounds very interesting my friend cant wait to see some of your work

[SCkid 0]

I like it, But you try to keep your LONG stories in paragraphs or with pictures inbetween people will more likely want to read it. And i would take car of those no road zots. it makes it look a little less good. but other than that it looks great. i like your history! good job

[aeronov91 0]

I want to apologise to everyone for the long paragraph, there was a loading problem and the sentences were conbined for some reason

Secondly, im working on the new airport right now, so stay tuned

[aeronov91 0]

UPDATE Guess what, the airport is under construction, here is a sneak peak of the future of Fralinserb Its a work in major progress To all, thanks for your comments

[The_Hutt 11]

You probably should have flattened all that land before you started, as you probably don't want people bouncing up and down when they land. You should also space those runways out a little more as well, otherwise you get a London-Gatwick thing where you can't use both runways at the same time.

[yoshikoroyimara 5]

can't see it...sorry...

[Skram 4]

i can't see the pics but it sounds great!

[edmonton_stinks 5]

Nice city, except for all the blackened buildings. Either way, the concept and storyline are interesting. Keep it up.

[aeronov91 0]

Replies

Penguin007: there was some problem with the loading which destoyed the paragraph formatting

jacquilinaz;; thanks, it certanly took mee a while

SCkid; thanks as i said before therewas aa problem withthe loading

The_Hutt, you'll se with this update, i was rtrying to make it like london gatwik and grantley adams international in barbadoes

yoshikoroimara; Thats too bad, see if you can see this one

skram, I dont know what the problem is sorry, and thakas

edmonton_stinks; thank you, and are you from Vancouver or Toronto

[aeronov91 0]

UPDATE

The Airport has Finally been completed after two days of painstaking building and leveling

Story; After JAL flight 352's crash in the central core of the city the airport was voted to be moved to a more healthy location where aircraft could fly an ILS without interference. After much locatation fighting the airport was decided to be moved onto Jia Yin island,a local bird sancutary local environmentalists were outraged and a deal was finally worked out which gave the group total control over the airport and its manegment, in return the group would keep the airport open and all finding would come from the national capitol in las Palos (the old portugese capitol). Construction was finally completed on May 23rd 2008.

OK Now for the pictures

The airport overview (sorry for the window, I was spacing out)

The international arrivals hall for non JAL aircraft

Cathay Pacific operates its partial hub here and is quickly expanding its services, it currently shares the concource with the Star Alliance.

When JAL heard of the expansion, it quickly became one of the main financers for the airport to establish its center for East indies operation. Concource C is JAL's Oceania operations and its long haul hub for all south Pacific operations

Random Pictures of the airport

This was my first airport so im very proud of it.

The Airport was based on grantley Adams International Airport in Barbadoes, London Gatwik, and the concouces based on Terminal 4 at JFK.

Cheers

-Peter

[aeronov91 0]

Goodbye city jounal

[jacqulina 162]

i still cant see the pics my friend have you rezised and converted to jpg

[edmonton_stinks 5]

No, I'm from Calgary. Do Vancouver and Toronto hate Edmonton as well? I didn't realize.

The airport looks fantastic, however some of your later pictures aren't spaced out and they kind of run together.

And finally, what do you mean "goodbye city journal?" Is this CJ over already? I sure hope it's not.

[aeronov91 0]

Sad news,

Im Afraid im going to shut this journal down, It has a lack of interest and i was never really happy with it. But dont fear, im starting a new one where everyone will be able to enjoy, (i forgot to converth the images to jpg's, wont happen again)

Thanks all for your comments and decriptions, look for my new one coming soon!!!

ADMINS, FEEL FREE TO DELETE THIS JOURNAL AFTER 3 DAYS

[Skram 4]

do you have a new one up yet??

[Naryanna 0]

To bad u didnt just continue this one, the start was preaty good for a first one and it would be definetly interesting to observe how u prosgress true it. Nice historic background there also.

[aeronov91 0]

Come visit my new city journal,

FungBei

I have decided to continue on FungBei

[bbfan02 23]

Are you gonna close this one?

[politicman 1]

It's maybe good... but no pics !! i can't comment more !