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The Update may take longer than I expected, but it will be up soon. Watch out for the CJ of Bourbondy

I have a Question for you all, What do you want to see in the future updates? and What can I do better? I really want some constructive criticism. Thanks.

Could you be so kind as to tell me how?

Atleast 5 more Comments be for you get to see the capitol... probably some of my best work so far.

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Newmin: Residential Population: 87,100 High Wealth: Approx. 30,003 Middle Class: Approx. 41,025 Ghetto Dwellers(lol) Approx. 16,072 Commercial Population: 59,340 West Oak Statistics Data based on a 1-5 scale, 1 being a problem and 5 not being a problem. Crime: 5 The Regions Police Headquarters is located here. Healthcare: 3 There is a hospital downtown and a Health Club in the Yates Suburban Community, however parts of the outskirts of town are not cared for, oddly they die nearly 15 years before citizens the same age on the west side do. Traffic : 4 Traffic here has never been a problem due to the heavy train involvement, however with the inclusion of the interstate, part of the rail line has been demolished. That rail line has brought more cars to the roads where the train once was. The Train now only covers the South East Section of Newmin and the Yates Suburb. However Traffic is getting worse with the destruction of the north/west side rail line. Pollution: 5 There is only about 2000 industry jobs available here, outside of town. No one can smell it or see it. Education: 4 This city has always had strong education due to all of the museums and libraries that have been built, although test scores have been dropping as drugs have been increasing. Newmin was the Capitol of West Oak for about 75 years, about 10 years ago it was moved to a nearby city to be seen in the next update! Here is the Old Capitol building, now a courthouse. Around it is the Giant Marshall Park. This Area has a couple other parks though, it had to be beautiful to be a capitol city. Here is a park next to the Greenly Outlet Area. And The small Tibbits Park next to the West Oak Mall. Here is the Malls Entrance. The Mall has attracted nearly 40,000 people to new suburb areas. Here is a Popular Suburb, Yates a recently annexed town. It has a small Business Area. Yates is Connected to the South East Side of Newmin by Train. Here is a shot of the Greenly Area of Newmin, with the Train running right through it. Across from that area is Downtown. And the Newest Skysraper is a beauty. Here is a shot of the Newmin Suburb and Yates Suburb, with the mall inbetween. And Finally a Shot of the Downtown/South East/Greenly Side of Town. Update 6 Will Feature the Capitol...

Simply Amazing.

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Newmin: Residential Population: 87,100 High Wealth: Approx. 30,003 Middle Class: Approx. 41,025 Ghetto Dwellers(lol) Approx. 16,072 Commercial Population: 59,340 West Oak Statistics Data based on a 1-5 scale, 1 being a problem and 5 not being a problem. Crime: 5 The Regions Police Headquarters is located here. Healthcare: 3 There is a hospital downtown and a Health Club in the Yates Suburban Community, however parts of the outskirts of town are not cared for, oddly they die nearly 15 years before citizens the same age on the west side do. Traffic : 4 Traffic here has never been a problem due to the heavy train involvement, however with the inclusion of the interstate, part of the rail line has been demolished. That rail line has brought more cars to the roads where the train once was. The Train now only covers the South East Section of Newmin and the Yates Suburb. However Traffic is getting worse with the destruction of the north/west side rail line. Pollution: 5 There is only about 2000 industry jobs available here, outside of town. No one can smell it or see it. Education: 4 This city has always had strong education due to all of the museums and libraries that have been built, although test scores have been dropping as drugs have been increasing. Newmin was the Capitol of West Oak for about 75 years, about 10 years ago it was moved to a nearby city to be seen in the next update! Here is the Old Capitol building, now a courthouse. Around it is the Giant Marshall Park. This Area has a couple other parks though, it had to be beautiful to be a capitol city. Here is a park next to the Greenly Outlet Area. And The small Tibbits Park next to the West Oak Mall. Here is the Malls Entrance. The Mall has attracted nearly 40,000 people to new suburb areas. Here is a Popular Suburb, Yates a recently annexed town. It has a small Business Area. Yates is Connected to the South East Side of Newmin by Train. Here is a shot of the Greenly Area of Newmin, with the Train running right through it. Across from that area is Downtown. And the Newest Skysraper is a beauty. Here is a shot of the Newmin Suburb and Yates Suburb, with the mall inbetween. And Finally a Shot of the Downtown/South East/Greenly Side of Town. Update 6 Will Feature the Capitol...

Does anyone play these? I wanted to see if anyone I know from that world is here lol. I have some links if anyone is interested in seeing/playing in one.

The Comments seem to come alot faster and in greater quantity when I say that.... hmmm Anyways the update will be up tonight then hopefully

I will be updating with Update 5 when I get 4 more comments here.

I will have update 5 up when I get 5 more comments.

Willhelm: Residential Population: 46,300 High Wealth: Approx. 5,000 Middle Class: Approx. 27,300 Ghetto Dwellers(lol) Approx. 14,000 Commercial Population: 43,400 West Oak Statistics Data based on a 1-5 scale, 1 being a problem and 5 not being a problem. Crime: 5 This city has a large police force, all though it doesnt matter as this city has small town values and everyone knows right from wrong. Healthcare: 4 This City has a large hospital with an intensive care unit and a Cancer unit that is the best in West Oak, however some areas of the hospital are crowded. Traffic : 3 Traffic here is getting worse as downtown is dense but alot of the city is spread out, this small town is starting to really get that big city feel. Pollution: 3 Pollution from cars is bad, and its starting to kill some of the farms. Education: 2 Mosts kids here have the option for schooling but either can't afford it or drop out. Cows in the road: 1 MOO! Willhelm has been here since it was Settled in 1940, where it grew slowly, the rural way. It was one of the smallest towns in the area of 2000, leeching off of the small city(back then) of Lobbdale, until the railroad company built its first station there in 1978, and extended the rail line up to the mountains. That Encouraged alot of growth, and by 1992 the city was of 30,000 people and 5 Passenger stations, the largest city in the region for almost 6 months till Lobbdale once again took over and grew like crazy. It had Grown 1000% or so in just 15 years. Apartment buildings then became popular in the downtown area, some are 40 years old and haven't changed a bit. The most popular Apartment chain is Fern Lane Apartments. And then in 2001, the cities first and only skyscraper was built, the CEO Lee Huang diddn't like the view of the slums from his office on the 25th floor, so he had a park built there. And in the past five years new businesses have flooded the city, including many chain outlet stores. And That small Plateau north of the city that overviewed the whole area now is occupied by a few hotels. Today the city is nearing 50,000 people. But even though the Downtown is getting Denser and Denser There are still plenty of Rural areas. The only bad thing about those rural areas is they bring in alot of poor people. Still though this is a great area of West Oak. Teaser for Update 5, the old capitol of Newmin. Please Comment I don't want to beg...

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