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Ouch I'd hate to be on the Blikora when the super weapon exploded.

Welcome to my first CJ. I hope you enjoy this story just as much as I’ve enjoyed making it. Here is some background on the United Federation of Eden. The United Federation of Eden (UFE) was founded roughly 5300 years ago when a group of 5 neighboring countries decided that they no longer wanted to be identified by their demographics. It started out very rough, as these 5 countries were comprised of all 6 cognizant species. Humas were the most prevalent followed by the Felidaes, the Lacerts, the Albus, the Deinos and the Garbhas. But after about 200 years all six species were getting together and the UFE started settling disputes between other countries. And after 3420 some years the UFE had expanded to encompass the entire planet when the country of Ceylon pledged to become a part of the UFE. That year was set in stone as 0 Plant Unification (PU) when the UFE became the only country on Eden. Leading us up to the election of 1935, which was the most contested election to date. We now enter into the council chambers right before they announce the winner of the election. Council Speaker: Ladies and gentlemen the Eden Supreme Council of 1934 PU has decided that Lady Eva Lipton shall be the next Ruler over the United Federation of Eden. Lady Lipton: Thank you all who have supported me and came out to vote even those who choose not to vote for me. I promise that the next 5 years that we will colonize your moon of Teimr and establish our first space station. And we shall rid ourselves of the trappings of this world and bring our peace into the stars. And it is all because you choose me to lead you into a new era of space travel. [Lady Lipton continues on how her term in office will bring many great things to the planet of Eden]. Applause erupts from the council room as the newly elected Lady Lipton steps down from the podium. She continues on down to the door and steps out. She continues out to a smaller office where a group of people waited. Lipton: We did it people. Now comes the hard part, making things happen when they are supposed to happen. Right now Lorvadal is the seat of the new regional capital, but Ferta is going to be the new capital city of the planet. Almora has some of the best spots for a spaceport but how close do we build it to Ferta? Rick: Well honestly the spaceport should be located here in the proposed city of Agova. Which is located one city over and Cypretona which lies just north of Agova should also benefit from the commerce that Agova will bring into the region. Your first priority should be getting New Haven to be roughly 15,000 people, then work with the mayor of Ferta on the districts there. Then the Spaceport. Henry: I agree with Rick on getting New Haven up and running along with Ferta but Sworcova could increase the regions outlook a lot more then Agova would. The mayor there is a little iffy but he can be coached on how to handle the city and help it grow. General Cobalt: I know that I really don’t belong here but from my standpoint all cities should have some sort of airport or spaceport. That should ease some transportation and should appeal to the businesses and therefore attract people and in case anything happens we aren’t relying on one<

New Grounds Cypretona, Almora Rick: Good to see you Lady Lipton. Thank you for sending Karen over as fast as you could. Eva: Your Welcome Rick. Any idea on what that object is? Rick: Why don’t you come over to my office. Eva: Ok. Rick: Thanks nobody here knows what is going on but Karen believes that it is an engine to an advanced starship. From where or when are unknown and if you want more details you would have to ask her. But enough of that did you enjoy your tour of the complex? Eva: I’m very pleased that the complex is fully complete. And I can’t wait in the next few weeks as we launch the first components into space for the Eden Skydock. It’s just too bad I’m going to miss out on the first components launch. Rick laughs Eva: What is so funny Rick. Rick: Well today is the launch of the first component per say. We wanted to test out the new communication relays so we are launching a beacon that is going to be a marker for the Eden Skydock. Eva: That’s great news, how far is launch. I would love to stay and see it. Rick: Well the launch is in 36 minutes and in fact I need to get back on to the mission floor. Eva: Good, can you send in Calette. I need to rearrange my schedule a bit. Calette: Did you need me Madam? Eva: Yes Calette. Would you mind calling Mayor Finyard and letting him know that we will have to push the press conference back by 15 minutes? Calette: Is this the press conference regarding the new space academy? Eva: Yes Calette that one. Eva walks back out of the office and watches the personal scramble getting everything ready for the launch. Rick: Launch is in less then a minute you excited Eva. Eva: Yes Rick. I can’t wait. Man: T minus 10…9…8…7…6…5…start main engines…2…1…0…We have launch of the Vera 6 rocket carrying the beacon for the Eden skydock. Eva: Wow. It looks like everything went fine.

My next update was meant to be posted today but I've been helping clean up crews in my area. We got hit by a few tornadoes on monday and haven't had much time to post an update but stick with me I've done my part so the next update will come shortly as soon as I get some sleep and recoup.

thanks I can't wait to use it.

I love the riverside park and the walking trails. I bet some of those workers in the downtown go down there for lunch on nice sunny days.

The story looks great as well as the pictures. Keep up the good work.

I love the new Park. And the hospital park looks great as well, although I don't remember that pond from anywhere. Where did you get it if you don't mind me asking?

Have a safe trip. Thanks for the building I have just the spot for it. And as for the lighting issue I found the problem I didn't have the Patch installed *bangs head on desk again. and I have quite a few cities with custom content in the heart of the city so some of the buildings would light up while others would not. *I'll go bang my head for stupidity now.

Oh wow. How long did it take you to complete the golf coarse. I love the fact that you let the terrain guide you to the layout of the city.

Syne What? Varnasse, Valnor Rick: Thank You for Coming as fast as you could Karen. Karen: What seems to be the problem? Eva was very brief in her communication that I was required down here. Rick: Well we can’t understand the sensor readings. We are positive that the object that is not of this world and believe it might have something to do with space travel. You are the most highly regarded astrophysicist on the planet. We recently picked up on large energy sources all around us. Some near some pretty far out. We are not sure if they are hostile or friendly but none the less we want to ensure the safety of your people. Karen: What type of energy sources? And why are you telling me this? Rick: Because we are getting energy readings from this object that are very close to the ones around us. Karen: Ok. I’ll take a look but no promises. First off lets narrow the scanning aperture by 5% it will increase the by-lateral readings. Rick: That better? Karen: Somewhat. Any idea what the biological matter is in the scans? Can you increase the Gamma Correction by 6 degrees Rick: No. I got a xenobiologist on the way in to look at them. OK, Gamma is at 6 degrees any better. Karen: Thats much better lets see wants going on here now. umm. Interesting. Rick: What is it? Karen: No need on the xenobiologist I got it now. It’s an Algae or Bacterial mass purpose built to create and store large amounts of Electricity. It’s interesting because we’ve looked into doing the same with the Synechocystis bacteria. Rick: Syne what? Karen: It’s a type of bacteria that produces electrical nano-wires and then converts heavy metals in to oxygen and electricity. Like a battery only this is just on a much smaller scale and no need to recharge. But by the looks of this, it’s a propulsion unit of some sort. To what, I’ve got no clue. Rick: Whatever. Just as long as you think it’s safe to pull it out of the water? Karen: Yes but I would take it directly to Tumba Olin and I would gather a team of the brightest engineers. I’m going to reverse engineer this sucker. Rick: OK I'll get it shipped out through this Airstrip on the other side of town and ship it out by tomorrow.

I was planning on updating today but due to RL events I've got to postpone the update until Friday at the earliest. But some teaser shots for you before you leave. Replies will be posted with the update. You'll be seeing these two pictures again.

Nice small city. I Like the new streets the city looks much better after that. As for the park go with the first one It will provide an appealing addition to the city.

the town looks peaceful. enjoy your trip

The city looks neat. I really love the train station.

Character Bios Following the suggestion of Zel I decide to do a character bio update so everybody knows who is who and what he or she does. School finals are this week so I don't have as much time to get pictures out for this update but as of the 25th I'm all done with school. I’m planning on another update to go into details on the races. I’m planning on incorporating that in to a discussion along the story line. The wording is a bit awkward at this time but I hope to work it out with the next couple of weeks. But until then here are the basics of each race First off the different races Humas: Most closely related to humans: height is about 1.7 meters or 5 feet 8 inches, weight is 70 Kilos or 154 pounds Felidaes: This race is derived from felines: height is about 1.3 meters or 4 feet 6 inches, weight is 40 Kilos or 88 pounds Lacerts: This race is Reptilian in nature: Height is 2.4 meters or 7 feet 10 inches, weight is 120 kilos or 264 pounds Albus: An offshoot of the Humas race: height is 1.6 meters or 5 feet 3 inches, weight is 70 kilos or 154 pounds. Deinos: Very similar to the Lacerts: height 2.1 meters or 6 feet 10 inches, Weight 85 kilos or 187 pounds. Garbhas: a midget race: height .9 meters or 3 feet, weight 45 kilos or 99 pounds The character list is in order of appearance excluding minor characters Eva Lipton: Age: 36 Race: Half Humas half Albus Job: Recently Elected Lady of Eve Siblings: None Marital Status: Widowed Children: 3 Emily, Steve, and Tammy Bio: Eva’s Husband was assassinated While she was Pregnant with Tammy. As a mother she is a bit overly protective over her brood. As a politician she is very decided in her actions and some times a bit demanding. Reference: Eva’s creation came about from my mother’s personality with all the character flaws and good nature at heart. Rick Lamianet Age: 43 Race: Humas Job: Director of Eden Space Agency Siblings: 1 sister Marital Status: Married Children: 1 Jacob Bio: Rick is pretty much the standard husband and father. He enjoys a good wine ever so often. His marriage has not been the best in the world but his wife and him are going on 20 years so far. He has known Eva for a good 10 years. The death of Eva’s husband is what saved his marriage and he has became the father for her kids. Reference: Rick is the embodiment of my dad cool headed, not letting things get to him but firm never the less. Growing up I said I never be like him but after having a kid of my own I realize why he was the way he is and hope I can be just like him. Henry Williams Age: 29 Race: Humas Job: Director of Eden Interior Agency Siblings: none Marital Status: Divorced Children: none Bio: Henry is hot headed to say the least. Doesn’t want kids at all. More concerned about Power then anything else. Reference: Henry is an offshoot of myself before I became a father only to the extreme a bit more. He’s going to be interesting to write because we do share a good deal of traits. General Cobalt Age: 42 Race: Albus Job: General of Eden Military Siblin

Where did you get that building in the 2nd picture on the right.

the downtown looks great. Love the night shot of it I wish all my buildings downtown would light up all the time

You know I thought of that but threw it out at first, But seeing as I've never clearly discussed the characters or the different races I just might have to. Thanks for the idea

Wow I guess I missed on quite a few updates. That was not meant to happen. Must remind myself to check daily on you by the looks of it. The city looks great sorry i missed on the vote but I goofed up. But I love what you are doing with the city so far.

It's good to see you finally came up with a name for the lake. and the development on the hill looks great.

Those are some neat farms. And with all thats going on I think Lil needs to stay home no need to risk the little one on the way.

Bedtime Stories and Legends Eva Lipton has finally got settled in to the new Presidential Palace in Ferta. We join her as she tucks in her youngest child Tammy. Eva: Time to go to bed my little darling. Tammy: Do I have to? I want to stay up with you. Eva: Now now darling It’s your bedtime and all little boys and girls go to sleep at this time. Tammy: Can you tell me a story mommy? Eva: Ok. Umm. I got just the one. Have I ever told you about the 6 races and the man with the ship? Tammy: umm no. Eva: Well it starts off a long time ago well before you were born even before me. Tammy: That’s old. Eva: Yes it is but listen. This guy flew his ship from planet to planet exploring all of them. When one day he found Eden and you found the 6 living peacefully. Well he didn’t like this at all. So he told stories about each other. The 6 started to fight against each other. Now he was ready to leave when a group decided that he was the bad guy, not them. So one night they sneaked up to his ship and took it. He was mad at what the group did so for punishment he cursed Eden with a long winter and he disappeared. Now the 6 were still fighting until the group told them the only way to survive was to work together. They did and the winter ended and they were able to live together. But the 6 would always be cursed by the man of the ship. Because from time to time fights broke out. So just because someone hurts you and your friends you must not do anything to them. Tammy: zzzzzz……. Eva gives her little one a kiss and steps out of the bedroom where her older daughter Emily was standing. Emily: Where did that story come from mom? Eva: Well some people believe that Eden used to be this major space hub for a bunch of civilizations but one day a war broke out. Eden fell into chaos and wiped pretty much everything out. It took us a long time to recover. Emily: So what do you believe happened? Eva: I see nothing to say other wise but nothing to prove it. I really think it sounds too much like a fairy tale for kids and nothing else. Emily: What happened to dad, mom? Eva stops in her tracks. It’s been some 5 years since the death of her husband and none of the kids know what truly happened. Eva: I guess you could know the truth now. He was killed by a group of people that thought that there<

Here's a region view of the region. I've been working on Ferta more then anything else, the city directly over the regional name bar. I was planning on releasing an update on Monday but I've decided to fill in some "holes" I've been meaning to get to some I'm delaying the update until Wednesday where I'll also take you around the city of Ferta.

The city is sure coming along now. What building is that in the high tech park bottom center?