revenant71 commented on dada222's file in Parks & Plazas
Everybody begins from something simple. Put more effort in it, don't just create fancy shapes and then tag a funny name to it to mask the lack of experience. Mostly, show your efforts on the forum and take some advice, before uploading. Good work!
revenant71 commented on dada222's file in Parks & Plazas
Need to develop the idea. A black box on a blank lot is not enough. Also wrong proportions: the original was 1:4:9.
I am a fan of the film but the 3/10 vote states it perfectly: "more effort needed".
revenant71 commented on SimRabbit's file in Commercial
9/10. Not a 10 just because it's has that tiny bit of a "seen that" feeling attached. Other than this, nothing bad in having own inspirations, and, all in all it looks wonderful and can't wait to see it in my new commercial downtown.
Thanks to the cool explaination this structure looks a lot less awkward than its mere aspect. Will be great besides a modern museum of sort, or as a place in between high 'scrapers. 9/10