How is this hut looking?

[mayorgreener 37]

Hello 

OK, finally made something.. though its far from perfect.

 

The width of the building is too much as compared to default Maxis 1*1 houses. Right now I think it looks like a fat frog with its belly squeezed.

I used 12m*12m dimensions in 3dsMax.

 

The roof texture also got messy but I don't know why!

 

Here are some screenshots from the Game.

 

http://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/12360312/simcity_screenshots/demo1.JPG

http://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/12360312/simcity_screenshots/demo2.JPG

http://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/12360312/simcity_screenshots/demo3.JPG

 

Actual 3dsMax render

http://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/12360312/simcity_screenshots/hut_3.jpg

 

Please let me know about what mistakes I did and how I can rectify them.

Thank you Simtropolis.

 

Edit:

One thing, I intentionally made the textures brighter. I infact selected bright looking textures and further Photoshopped them. I like bright things   and I am happy about their saturation level. I want it like that. But still your suggestions are welcome.

 

Edit:

And the little sims in this house commute by bus 

http://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/12360312/simcity_screenshots/demo4.JPG

[michaeldcannaday 42]

I like it, it stands out in the neighborhood!   Always nice to see new and different things

[A Nonny Moose 8,261]

Looks like it needs a roofing job.

[mayorgreener 37]

Thank you Michael and Moose.

Yes, idk why the roof texture got distorted.. Anyway in the new version I am reducing its dimensions to 8*8 meters.

[michaeldcannaday 42]

no problem, Nonny Moose and I always like to give feedback  

[A Nonny Moose 8,261]

Speak for yourself, Michael.