The Average City in Dire Flats

[Rean2 10]

Lake Gorget

is the city name and Dire Flats is the region name. It is an average city so it's not that fancy

 

This is the region i an planning to build on: note it is a link so click for bigger picture all my pictures will be this way

http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?/lakegorgetjul150011213574979mf.png

 

The First Area for Development is #1 Gorge Shore

http://img101.imageshack.us/my.php?/lakegorgetoct130011213763130ju.png

 

The Power Plant near Gorge Middle Tight Suspenion bridge:

Sorry could not make thumbnail

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1258/lakegorgetoct310011213776682pi.png

 

 

P.S: don't excpect alot from me...

 

Continue:

The Lay out of gorge shore:

http://img321.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lakegorgetoct310011213768873ty.png

The Area zoned:

http://img321.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lakegorgetoct310011213771052ek.png

The Development begins:

http://img321.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lakegorgetfeb80111213778423od.png

I added light for safety issues:

http://img321.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lakegorgetoct310011213772275yt.png

 

End of my first update

comments are always welcome

 

sneek peek: Will KFC's Menu being better then Wendy's cause a riot?

http://img321.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lakegorgetjun90111213784232up.png

http://img321.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lakegorgetjun90111213784915yw.png

hope this is legal

[mentarman 14]

Hey, welcome to Simtropolis and the CJ forum.

Let me offer some advice. Unless there is some particular reason you don't want to use the full-sized pictures here, I would recommend doing it. A lot of people don't want to go to the extra trouble of clicking on each link. It is much easier to just open a thread and skim through the pictures. I think your CJ will get more visitors and more responses if you do this.

 

This is really easy to do in Imageshack. After you've loaded your pics, click on my images. You'll see all your photos. Over to the right there will be boxes where you can copy link info. Find one that says for forums or something like that, it should be the top one in each set. Copy that, then past it into the message window here in Simtropolis. No need to code or do anything else, just paste that in and it will show up here full-sized.

 

Right now, I don't know what you did, but the links look messed up. I think you should just put the full pics in.

 

As for your city, it's a nice start. I would suggest perhaps segregating your zones a little bit more. They are a bit jumbled right now and the pollution from the industry will start to negatively impact the other areas.

 

[sirgeoj2 1]

Looking good!  I look forward to seeing them in larger pics like mentarman suggested.  Look forward to seeing more!

[Rean2 10]

i should but i just lost the will to continue it, However i will post some pics of my finished cities if it's ok...

cities i'm currently working are lake gorget and um.. Flat Top.

 

my pics will come soon...

[Rean2 10]

heres is my favorite pic:

 

like? it's called Monumento  de overmle canele wich means monument over canel.

[Rean2 10]

since this topic is dull i will ask you all a favor... WILL ANY ONE POST?!? Thank you for listening! i know the rules says to be patient but seriuosly this is not a time to relax and wait for all eternity. so PLEASE! for gods sakes and your dog post!

 

wow 107 people saw this and 2 people were actually posting!

 

 

-rean2

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[mentarman 14]

You've got to be patient, man. I know it is hard to do when you make something and then put it out there, but you've just got to wait. Begging doesn't usually help and double posting tends to annoy people.

That said, I like your canals in the latest pic. I'd like to see some more pictures of your zones, like your everyday city areas and not just this new monument.

[Rean2 10]

fine i will so just want development? So just zones? ok i'll post them tommorrow

i'm so happy...

 

btw that pic of the monument is in flat top my newest city my next one will be

oceana

 

-rean2 

[sirgeoj2 1]

Hey man you are doing good.....keep on posting the bigger pics, and post your city journal for you first and foremost....you should not be thinking about how many people are going to visit it.  People will come if you just keep updating it and adding more pictures...Have FUN with it!  

It is looking promising so far! 

[choco1 4]

nice use of the arch and canals. This cj is looking good.

[utora 0]

The last pic looks promising! And.. I agree with all that's said above by Mentarman. Just take it easy; usually the nr of views is much higher than the actual nr of posts. Just keep in mind that there are a lot of people out there who DO follow your cj, without posting comments. If I could add some advice to this, I'd say: visit a lot of other cj's and post comments there if you like what you see. This will make more people aware that you are out there, and maybe they'll get curious about your own cj. Second, I'd advice you to make a nice signature with a link to your cj. Instructions on how to do this can be found on top of this forum (or on top of the Simcity forums thread, I'm not sure)

Good luck!

[Rean2 10]

The region view so far:

 

Oceania is at the bottom and flat top is at the right 

 

 

Oceana's out casted 1899 city:

a small town at the top of oceana

 

the suburbia of oceana:

Industrial waters

 

i came up with a glitch:

 

mega train station:

 

The outcasted city: will become...

 

 

 

 

Downtown!

Pics:

 

version 2.1 finished

 

hope you like

[Rean2 10]

Next update: ever wondered what happened to lake gorget?

well right now it's great!

 

region view so far:

 

let's go down to lake gorget shall we?    *you*

 

alright let's goooo

 

lake gorget is becoming more suburban:

the down town area:

 

 

The Wierd Ghost boat yard?:

 

 

 

 

i know why this happened:

 

next update tommorrow

 

[Rean2 10]

the city of gorget made a political poll on what to do with the ship yard:

1) Destroy it and make a new beach

2) keep it but make a museum of boats and other water things near it

3) Destroy it and make a navy boat yard

4) destroy it and build a Casino named: a) bridge view b) Royal lake

5) keep it as a monument

 

remember what you choose to do will effect how the next part of my update to be so choose wisly

 

* throws bunny to who ever chooses *

 

 

 

[Simworld 056132 1]

Keep it as a monument. I rwally like the transportation. Great Job. Ps can you make it less griddy

 

[Rean2 10]

just to let every one know the poll will close next week

 

*throws bunnies to sim world 053 somethin *

[utora 0]

I choose option 1

[Rean2 10]

In the year 550 Bc. a strange land had been echoing signs of life... literally

 

this strang place was called craopened wich now called croppedville:

 

 

it's development now:

 

 

This place had many disasters like:

 

tornado fuses:

 

 

 

Wild fires:

 

i wonder why it so hot?

 

 

i know why LOOK:

 

 

it was a meteorite's heat!

 

ouch that's going to leave a mark:

 

 

 

now let's go back to oceana:

 

look at the news:

 

Hi i'm reporting live from scnn Copter. I'm Fanny hillsake.

 

if you look down you can see Johny t. hick's act of making the first fire ball his attempt to secretly put matches and lighting them was a bad mistake.

 

 

after:

 

 

a breaking news story! let's go to the scene:

 

 

a drunken idiot had beer garlics and oil covered and *BOOOM* *piece of rubbish flings at the camera man and knocks him self cold* Oh my god! *takes camera* It seems he took a match from what it appears to be a white ball with some lines on it wich appears to be a base ball? It looks like he lit the match up.

 

this is all for SCNN copter news i'm Fanny Hillsake, back to you Jim

 

[:0][:0][:0]

 

ok now let's see what i did:

 

 

i made a bridge

 

that's it for my update

 

oh and the region view now:

 

 

 

 

 

[Rean2 10]

oh and a teaser

 

[Rean2 10]

now that i made the bridges from downtown oceana the residential area is high as they can be:

 

 

and the whole picture: looks nice?

 

 

 

A new colony of south amercans had developed a small town called Water springs as you can see there is one big water hole. the area is more humid so humid that in the winter time it is 45 degrees but it feels like 85 degrees. The people there says it doesn't bother them at all. Since they are near Flat Top and Oceana, the humidness is spreading to them. Flat Top is so annoyed because the heatness limits building to one of the bridge ends.

Flat Top may be half a mile away but the heatness will raise 20 degrees higher! Will Oceana And Flat Top team up and relocate Water Springs? Found out soon...

 

 

Landscape before settlement:

 

 

Now:

 

 

sneek peek: The Civilization on water springs refuse to be relocated. What should Oceana And Flat Top Do? poll will begin after the old one

 

Ok im's starting to be impatient

[sirgeoj2 1]

looks like you are having alot of fun destroying your city!  Sinking ships, burning buildings!  AHHH!! lol

mabey throw a few meteors and robots in there too, that would be cool to see.

 

  

[Rean2 10]

remember about the poll?  i only have 2 votes! please vote

[simcitic 2]

i dont recon it as average....nor even above-average........its very very good.....all the best in simcitying

[Rean2 10]

The poll to keep the ship yard or not is decided: Keep it as a monument

results:

Keep it as a monument: 2 votes(my vote)

destroy it = beach: 1 vote

 

now the other poll is whether water springs to be relocated before why do anything to extreme does anybody think it is a good idea?

[2s 0]

nice start, the region is ok! maybe try editing your first post here, so it would look a bit better

I vote 1.

[Rean2 10]

This is the stranges glitch ever (will not ever but still strnge):

 

 

is someone invisible *humping* the mayor? (in this case, me?)

[Rean2 10]

 population:

 

 

sorry no big update yet

 

back from my break

[gurrgkud 2]

nice start! is that how the region is gonna be? or are you gonna add more stuff to it like mountains and lakes?

 

otherwise it's good

[Rean2 10]

my bat!  using akwx128's model! i use this for my city to go on vacation! (this bat is being uploaded please be patient

 

continuing the cj:

the region view... wat's this? a city sprawling with proptesters? this city seems to be bloccking the way for flatop and oceana to lure them away. i guess the Manhoutens (city name) did not what them to go away...

 

any way this building is the there secret headquarters for anti wars:

 

yeah umm my 6th update?

[Rean2 10]

danm after a few months of trying to re create my region... it's lost! RIP average cityies