The Arcadian Federation

[ironicepitome 0]

A PREVIEW OF WHATS TO COME:



"The Skyfleet S570, coming to you March 2011..."



"... And in other news, technological giant Norwell-Hucks Inc has moved from San Paso, Arizona to Ravenholm, North Takoma after buying out defence giant Uniden for $1.3 Billion. And thats your news for this Monday, January 9, 2011..."



"... In the wake of recent technological advances, the United Nations has decided to fund the creation of the Amphion Class star cruisers for the newly created United Nations Space Corps..."


 

[N106 10]

I was wondering what Norwell-Hucks was. It's a shame that Norwell-Hucks has moved, but I guess Ravenholm must have better facilities than San Paso.

Anyways, I'm looking forward to this CJ

[John Kirby 1]

Looks good, can't wait to see the city, Comrade.

[ironicepitome 0]

RAVENHOLM- CITY OF DREAMS

MOMMA IM COMIN HOME! I'm back to CJing! And I'm starting with Ravenholm. Keep in mind that I will use refrences from ANY CJ, like you'll see in this 1st update!

1st Repliers

n106: Well its not for some 100 years! And you have much to look forward to!

John Kirby: Thank you comrade Kirby. I patiently await your progress in Soviet States of America

And now... I present you: RAVENHOLM

"... And in the wake of a seemingly unprevoked attack on ALL world nations, the United Nations has rushed the completion of it's 4 Amphion Class star cruisers for the UNSC to combat the Follermeran Fleet above the West Coast of the United States. President Ballentine..."

The middle aged man turned off the TV in his top floor office and looked out onto the skyline. It was raining, appropriate enough. His assistant walked into the office, the man immediatly sat at his desk.

"Sir, its Admiral Webber on the line, secure channel"

The man waved him away and pressed a button on his desk. The holographic image of an older man in uniform immediatly popped up.

"What the HELL is he thinking!?! That crazy S.O.B. over in Follomer thinks he can just attack us!?!"

"I don't know Admiral"

"What I need now are those Amphion classes, thats what the UNSC needs now Irian!"

"The Amphion and the Under Divine Sun are complete, but the Reach Forward is still in drydock and the Spectre was damaged in the initial attack"

"***** crazy son of a... He's a madman, that chancellor. As for my Amphions, I need them in 2 weeks."

His image disappeared. Wesley Irian was the CEO of Norwell-Hucks Industries, and the worlds wealthiest man, he controlled half of the world's military contracts. The Amphion class was to be the the UNSC's first true warship, but til they could all be completed, theyd just have to stick to their orbital defence platforms, also built by NH. He was also part Follormeran...

Well, random picture time!

Construction on the Norwell-Hucks Complex

Incheon Ave. and Birkett Canal, Northside, Ravenholm

St. Kirby's Medical Center, Marina District, Ravenholm

Coco Stadium Mall, Stadium District, Ravenholm

Raven Bay Bridge and Olson Park, Downtown, Ravenholm

Well that's all folks, dont forget to write, bye bye, take care, dont tick off the cops, bye

[jacqulina 162]

interesting start my friend

[John Kirby 1]

A wonderful start to a wonderful CJ.

Hopefully I'll have the next update out soon, I've been quite busy.

Saint Kirby's looks like an excellent hospital!

[(x+x 20]

nice mole up there, where did you get it?

[Hawkeye9 0]

Hey awsome start man!!! We sure do make alot of technological advances in the next couple years: Holograms and space warships? Anyway the city building looks great and i look forward to more!!!

[Kryptowhite 9]

Nice photoshopping, and nice cities. Interesting CJ you've started here. Is the San Paso a reference to n106's CJ?

[Follarch 326]

So my CJ's storyline is affecting this one? lol I better plan this more thoroughly now. But how did one of your ships get damaged from the beam strikes? I specifically targeted missile silos.

And i just love your references to the Halo universe.

[ironicepitome 0]

(how do u like the logo?)

Howdy yall. Im REALLY happy about all the positive response to this here CJ, and for that reason, i will now reply to all of my adoring fans.

jacqulina: some say im an interesting person, like the guy from those dos equis commercials

John Kirby: yes, St. Kirby's is excellent hospital, after they fired 36 and a half doctors

(x+x²)²/x: mole... mole... mole mole mole! lol, i found it on the STEX. and ur name hurts my head

Hawkeye9: so, my cj, my rules

Kryptowhite: thanks, and yes it is. Norwell Hucks used to be headquartered down there

Archean: Who says the guys in the lasers are strait shooters? anyway, id b happy to meet with u to discuss further progression!

Well, im planning an update for Sunday (Saturday's homecoming so stay tuned folks and remember, kill it THEN eat it

[N106 10]

I'm looking forward to Update 2. Plus, you own the most businesses in San Paso (as of 1885), so I'm kinda obliged to read due to the way government works in San Paso (whoever is the richest wins the most government favors) This is a good CJ so far!

[Follarch 326]

Perhaps you would be interested in applying for AFDES Observership. From these pictures and the obvious statement of your tech level, you'd be welcomed in quickly.

[thepokemaniac 18]

Your city is quite nice!

[crazychickensc12 84]

Wonderful start here love the story line and your city building skills are top notch!! Keep it up!!

[parrotti 11]

i like this, hope to see more

[ironicepitome 0]

Hey there guys! Well today iv got a small update thing today. Mostly because yesterday was the Homecoming dance and im beat.

Well here are some replies to your comments

ironicepitome: WOW! Thats a cool logo!

n106: Hmmmm... So if i felt like it i could take over San Paso?

Archean: Ill look into it, I will consult with the President

thepokemaniac: Thank you kind sir

crazychickensc12: Thank you, people seem to say that about my cities, and u can thank Archean for the story

parrotti: Oh you will see more

Well here we are! Welcome to update two, enjoy

CASTLE Base, somewhere in the United States

The Humvee drove up the gravel road to the small collection of buildings, not very impressive. but still under armed guard. A man in camo uniform stepped out, it was starting to rain, and he quickly ran into one of the buildings, followed by two armed soldiers.

"General Hawkinson, this way"

The General followed the Corperal into a tunnel leading to an underground labynyth of corridors and rooms.

CASTLE Base, headquarters of the United Nations Space Command, UNSC

General Hawkinson walked into a room full of officers from many countries talking and argueing around a table. They became silent when he walked in.

"General Hawkinson"

"Admiral Webber"

They all sat down

"Gentlemen, let me introduce you to Operation: TREBUCHET", the Admiral turned on a holoprojector in the middle of the table

"Gentlemen, this is the plan for a direct assault by US Marines and UNSC Amphion Classes on Follomer and her space stations. I will lead the space attack aboard the Divine Sun, General Hawkinson will lead the Marines, and Vice Admiral Bregortyev will man our Kinetic Strike Stations."

The men grunted in agreement

"Good, you are debriefed, carry on". The men left for their waiting vehicles. Meanwhile hundreds of miles away, in a tower in a city, a man was watching the meeting on his tv screen.

DUN DUN DAAAAAAA! Well i think its a good time for random advertisements! Tell me which one you like better!

"The BMW iVision, drive one today at a dealership near you"

or

"The 2012 Cadillac CVJ, America's very first hydrogen luxury. Only $39,995"

Well thats all I got for now, so take care! Adios!

[Follarch 326]

So the first opponents wish to go against the peace bringers? lol I'll be following along all the way.

And I like the simple layout of the compound. Obviously the majority of it goes underground.

[ironicepitome 0]

u better follow this all the way

and remember, its you vs the rest of the world. Even china's 5000000000 people

[crazychickensc12 84]

Awesome update again and the story line is enjoyable to read. Only tip I would say just turn grid off (By pressing g) for your shots and it will look very nice! Would so drive that BMW any day front reminds me of the new Camaro's. Deviated from the traditional Circle headlights that BMW is farmous for but I like it hehe.

[parrotti 11]

and again great update i will keep watching this

and i can not chose wiche car, i like them both

the Cadillac looks nice for his price

[Twenty20 28]

Great start, and very nice pictures.

[Hawkeye9 0]

Great update dude!!! I really like the way you utilized those terminals, very original and excently excecuted!!! I also like the story and General Hawkinson's name!!! Lookin forward to more!!! (great ads too, seriously awsome!!!!)

[Quatropette 2]

Nice Story Line! Good Pictures!

[PhatHead 248]

Very cool cj nice pics good story, hope to see more and keep it up

[ironicepitome 0]

Well, here we are, 12 days into my cj, and im not bored with it! NEW RECORD!

anyway, here are your replies!

archean: U mess with america, ESPECIALLY Texas, we'll open up a can of whoop-glutius maximus on Follomer

ironicepitome: Hmmm... i wouldnt mess with those odds

crazychickensc12: Well im glad u picked the BMW, cuz i like it. and it is a very interesting storyline

parotti: Thanks dude

Twenty20: Gracias amigo

Hawkeye9: Whatever floats your boat, and i got the idea of the terminals from Archean

Quatropette: hahaha! i like ur avatar!

PhatHead: oh you will see more

Well, since i dont have an update for ya, ill give you a preview of Operation: TREBUCHET

"... HQ RESPOND, HQ RESPOND! Quicksand to HQ..."

"... Quicksand this is Ignious Stations, in orbit over St Krist, we have your position..."

"... We need you to open up a can of whoop ass on the following coordinance... 575, 985, 1123A..."

"... Roger, we got your coordinance standby, hold tight boys..."

[Follarch 326]

Is that a kinetic missile satellite?? However military intelligence missed that is beyond me, but I know of the power of one of those, which could flatten a pretty good portion of the city, which i wouldn't want cause i just made it pretty! lol I'd love to see those boys try to go up against a Behemoth battle tank on the streets though.

[ironicepitome 0]

Enter the Tomahawk

[jacqulina 162]

excellent work and pics my friend

[ironicepitome 0]

FINALLY! I brokeded my internet thingey and havn't been able to update. So here you are. Update 3

Right after these replies from our sponsers

Archean: Well, look at the bright side, you can start over!

jacqulina: thx!

Update 3: Firing the Trebuchet

New Norwell-Hucks HQ, Ravenholm

Irian was sitting at his new desk in his new office in the new tower dominating downtown. A small LED light flashed on his desk, he pressed it and the image of the Vice-Chancellor of Follomer appeared in front of him.

"Ah! Ms. Tessa! A pleasure to see you!"

Odd considering the circuimstances at the moment.

"Yes Wesley, pleasure"

Wesley pressed a few buttons on his computer

"Development of the Shiva missles for your Agonite bombs is proceeding smoothly at our research facility."

"Good good, proceed"

"Oh! It seems that iv accidentally sent you the plans for Operation: TREBUCHET. My bad."

He smirked as he pressed another button on his keyboard

"Yes, it seems you have! Farewell Wesley"

She smiled slightly and disappeared

He didnt care, what happened to the world, as long he got control of it afterwards

MEANWHILE OFF THE COAST OF FOLLOMER

"...This is AWACS Rhapsody, now taking control of battlespace, assessing situation... Roger all units check it..."

"...Copy, Yellowstone Lead here, JDAMS check OK..."

"... Bigtop here, got a bunch of pissed off troopers in the back, out..."

".... Charlie Company, hitting the beach.... Alright, get ready to kick some ass Marines!..."

A Marine jumped off of the boat and onto the blood soaked sand, off in the distance he saw the wreckage of something, something big. Smoke was rising from downtown as American F-15s, British Tornadoes, and Russian MiGs pounded the city, over and over and over. This was going to be a bad day.