Crimson Fall

[Naryanna 0]

So here we are... brand new cj... Bots to many to count and special thanks goes to all hard working bat and lot developers and so on. Luv ya all!

So without futher addo... here it is:

PROLOGUE

The cold wind was singing sad song in the memory of all those who went into the realm of death. Crimson sky was clauded by the sorrownes of what have happend. Air was fresh and sweet, almost annoyingly nice to breath considering all the destruction that happend in just a few days when land was shaking violently, devouring cities, spiting hot lava and acid ashes towards the sky...

She was making her way up the hill in the need of seeing what was left. Her heart was pounding laudly expecting the worse. Palle-faced with tired eyes she removed the curl that sliped from under her hood and breeth deeply before she dared to look around...

A single tear sliped over her cheek while she was observing the waste blue around the litle green spot of earth...

"It is all gone... " she whispered with trembling voice.

There were no more villages and cities... Water was covering everything that her eyes could see.

"So this island is all that remaind... and few people on it..." thought sliped over her cherry-red lips.

Once again she looked at all sides of the sky before she turned around to gather her people  and tell them bad news.

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A tired little group of people sat around the crude wooden table. Some silently stared into her face hardly listening to what she had to say, others cryed... It was a sad news she had to bring but it had to be said.

"It is nothing left,... I am sorry..." she whispered and looked into eyes of each single person.

"But... this is not the time to dwell in despair. It may seem cold to say but we must shake the sadness of and start rebuilding the civilization..." her determined voice cut true the evening air like a knife. Everybody startled and wanted to argue but they couldnt find the strenght and they knew she was right.

"We shall mourn the losses after we are done..." she added softly after seeing aproval in the eyes of her people.

                                                            TO BE CONTINUED...

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[football_fever 6]

Karin, you have a mastery of terraforming rivaling the best in existance, and a mastery of the English language better than most native English speakers.

Seriously though, the waterfalls look exactly like outstretched arms, which is the look you must be going for. I'm glad you're back. You bring a level of excellence to the CJ section that us others must strive to match.

[penguin007 27]

OH MY GOD WOW!!!! Everything looks amazing this really is some of the most spectacular scenery I have ever seen

Will

[Teeparex 6]

Talk about perfect terraforming. Can I go there please?

[fern244 1]

whoa, that is beautifal. Im just lost for words....

[Schulmanator 5,812]

I am glad I am seated, lest I faint with stunning pleasure.

You are BACK & IN POWER! I am so glad to see your new CJ. Just amazing!! You and Jacky will have to arm wrestle for who is the greatest terraformer!

[KingTitan 6]

Wonderful terraforming.... I love the look of the falls that look like arms stretched out and up...like embracing the mountain......"Looks like skeleton arms and hands..." Should call it "Skull Hill. LOL Love it friend.......

[politicman 1]

Nice pics !

[jacqulina 162]

hiya sis another masterpiece,love those falls very nicely done they sure do look like arms and hands,excellent terraforming as allways.beautifull work and pics

[Naryanna 0]

football_fever : Hi my friend! How are you? Thank you very much on a wonderful comment you left me. *blush* I am gald to see you and I hope you shall visit again.

penguin007: Hi Will! Thank you very much on visting my CJ and for such nice comment. Hopefully you shall drop by again.

Teeparex: Greetings! Thank you very much on your kind comment! And yes, of course you may. The vacation houses and actual houses shall be probably auctioned soon. Hopefuly we shall meet again.

Schulmanator: Greetings my dear friend. In deed my eyes are brightened by the pleasure of seeing you yet again. Yes, I am back but of pover I am not so sure. My belief would be that the title of best terraformer should belong to our dearest Jacky. Thank you for stoping by and leaving a wonderful comment and hopefuly you will wisit us again.

King Titan: Hi my friend! I am glad to see you back on teh site. You were greatly missed and never forgotten. And I believe that the hill shall be named by ur recomendation, so Skull Hill it is. Thank you for stoping by and leaving lovely coment and I hope to see you again.

politicman: Hello! Thank you for stoping by and leaving a comment. I hope to see you here again.

jacqulina:

Hey sis! Thank you for sweet comment you left and for stoping by. I apreciate it much and I sincerly hope to see you here again.

This is NOT an update. It is just a little teaser of what it is to come and work in progress.

ZONING PROGRES:

CRIMSON FALL REGION AT PRESENT TIME:

A TEASER PICTURE OF SKULL HILL TOWN:

A BONUS PICTURE:

Thank you all for visiting. Update shall be done in next two days.

[edmonton_stinks 5]

Scary. Apocalypse story meets fantastic terraforming. That island kind of looks like someone with his head buried in his hands. Like, the skeleton hand rivers are over the face, or something.

[Dsrwhat316 12]

wow, you're working on two CJ's at once? you must be a juggler (LOL)! anyway, these pics are of exceptional quality as well. best of luck on your endeavors!

[dralin321 0]

Your work is very pleasing to the eye! Great graphics!

[2nerdy4u 1]

Oh wow... that is fantastic! Your story-telling is phenomenal! Keep it up!

[penguin007 27]

Beautiful island there this cj is amazingly scenic

Will

[jacqulina 162]

hey sis excellent teasers,some great zoning there,allways wonderfull pics

[Alkaola 18]

this looks just amazing , what a piece of art !

[Deathtoall 28]

nice terraforming and streams, i like the story too, nice intro. I hope we see more soon.

Good luck!

[KingTitan 6]

Really Naryanna? I am very much honored . and thanks friend for your lovely reply.

[suplado! 23]

omg...very cool...great terraforming skill!! really amazing....

[Naryanna 0]

And it is time for first update... I hope you shall enjoy it.

The sun lazily extended its rays over the land and woke up people sleeping in cold grass under the trees. Fire burned out long time ago for its keeper has fallen asleep near-by. It was cold, yer clear morning.

"It is time..." she said still with sleepy eyes : "We need to start."

They nodded in agreement and as they planned before they fall asleep people devided into groups and went in search of materials and good grounds to start building up their homes. It was hard for they were left with little resuources and were not quite used of using what they had, but still, by the evening few crude huts already stood amist the trees and they were pleased for they achieved much.

 

"It was good day, we did as best we could," she said with obvious pleasure in her eyes. "Tomorrow we shall build more.. but now, lets eat and sleep, my good people," she whispered softly with obvious admiration for people she had around her in these hard days.

Dreams didnt come with ease and when they did, they were not pleasant ones. It was the sleep of tired souls that survived the end of everything they knew. Another day of building huts and hunting wild animals for food has passed, and another and yet another. After a week, every single family had place to call its home and they were pleased. In the center of village they called Crimson Fall they build a well and with that life become yet a bit easier.

"We should try to work on the land..." she said to villagers and they agreed. Few people decided to become a farmers and provide for others. They found fertile land and one even had some seeds that he managed to grab before he had to run for his life.

When fall embranced Crimson Fall and change its green in yellow, ornage and red they had corn and wheat. One of the womans knew how to bake bread and she became a respected village baker and filled their mouths with long forgoten taste of home made bread.

"We should build roads..." one of the villagers suggested and all agreed. Some strong men volunteared for this hard work and in the same day plans were done and work begun.

"We worked hard," she said : "and we should celebrate!"

They were glad to hear those words for they worked hard for months without a rest. They gathered infront of village hall and laugh, and sing and feast. It was a day of fun and rest and when the night creeped over the Skull Hill they falled alseep with smile upon their face.

[Teeparex 6]

Fantastic update! lots of interesting pictures and great storytelling.

[dralin321 0]

You have done great on your zoning! But it's your farming areas I can't take my eyes off!!!

[Schulmanator 5,812]

This is so awesome! I am so glad you are back with us!

[2nerdy4u 1]

Oh wow. That was fantastic. Your story is amazing and the way you tell it is great. And I love those pics. Impressive.

[edmonton_stinks 5]

Wow, great story and I love how this is taking shape. The memorial trail is really nice.

[Dsrwhat316 12]

just amazing... the photo effects, the city-building, the storyline, i love it all! i'm glad i could witness this from the start. and thanks for wishing me luck!

[Skram 4]

it looks very beautiful!great work

[Deathtoall 28]

Nice blend of ingame and old photos. The story is intersting as litlle is know. I hope we find out more so i'm staying tuned.

[suplado! 23]

great start, beautiful pics, really nice to see the development of the town..