Critieron City

[Cjah 15]

hmm interesting....one time i kept count of the posts...its fun.....

Can't wait for more!

[homeandaway 1]

weeeeee!!!! - im in the hall of fame - thanks man!, i look forwards to seeing mor eof this CJ, take care ~alex~

[Cleaner475 150]

very intresting CJ so far - keep up the good work

[archesrule29 0]

Thanks everyone for your comments!

Here's an update on what's going on for Bob Newby.

Bob chose himself. He would need all the strength he had. Good thing he did, as the person crying out help was really the rare Wigglehizmer bird calling out. Bob lay on the raft for a long time. It was currently dusk so he wasn't expected home in a long time. He thought today would be a pure nightmare, but he was actually in for a day of wonder and discovery which would change the way Critieron City Citizens would think. Bob paddle about with his arm shouting out if there were any survivors. It was all in vain. Nobody left off the shore as far as Bob did. But it was good he had left off the shore so far, as really, nobody thought that there was anything after the endless sea but desert. Boy were they wrong.

Bob called out for the last time. "Help!" he cried. No answer. "Help!" This time it was different. Note that the water was foggy thus he hadn't seen a boat 7 metres away. "Who's there?" a voice called out. It was male. "Why are you out so far?" "I'm a survivor from a huge rockslide, volcano and earthquake!" replied Bob. "You're joking. There wasn't anything like that. Take a look for yourself!" Bob paddled out of the last of the fog to see he'd spent all night on the raft as it was morning. But something Bob saw shocked him so much he pinched himself. It was...

...another civilization.

Hope you enjoyed the post!

P.S. The sims thought they were the only ones who had any form of civilization out there. They were wrong big time. The civilization Bob saw wasn't too advanced.

It's really something that is important from Critieron City's past.

[Schulmanator 5,787]

More monkeys? More monkeys?! Bring 'em on!

[beachfrontproperty 0]

nice pics, love the newspaper

[homeandaway 1]

great storyline! - i really like it, be safe and i look forwards to seeing some pics!, take care ~alex~

[archesrule29 0]

Thanks guys! I think it's time to directly answer your

Replies

Schulmanator: Double the monkeys= Double the bananas. Hilarious reply!

Homeandaway: Thanks! Glad you liked it. A teaser will be released soon for what's coming up.

Beachfrontproperty: Glad you like them. Always happy to see newer posters to my CJ.

Cjah: You kept count??? Welcome to the club!

Merry Friday the 18th 2007! I don't even know why I said that but I felt like it!

[homeandaway 1]

cheers man! - i look forwards to seeing that update!, take care my friend, be safe ~alex~

[Mr Ham 0]

nice pics newspaper rocks

[archesrule29 0]

Here's my long overdue update for everyone. Sorry for taking so long. Sometimes you can get dstracted from what's going on.

Hope you enjoyed it! Critieron City is certainly gaining more information of the world around them. 

[Cleaner475 150]

No ads campaign arrrggg! How frustrating! Anyways getting back on to the topic of this CJ... Great work my friend awesome update with the newspaper - wooden cabins! Your kidding me surely they are the scriest things these scientist have ever seen! Anyway great update can't wait to hear more about this new civilazation

[archesrule29 0]

Here's the spoiler I previously mentioned of.

 

What this is about: It's showing that the city Bob found wasn't the only one, in fact, it's from the same civilization!

Next one will give a good amount of info, and by then, you'll understand all of this.

[Cleaner475 150]

COOL! I can't wait for that - it looks set to be good -

[Schulmanator 5,787]

You have me thoroughly intrigued!

[jacqulina 162]

interesting my friend

[archesrule29 0]

Due to the fact that was a mini-post I'll post again, and no, this isn't a mini-post.

P.S, I'm celebrating 75 posts to my CJ! 

Anyway, on with the story!

The sailor that found Bob took him to the shore, to get him fed and to give him a drink from a tap. I've got to tell, you this, where Bob wound up wasn't really a city. In fact, it was really a small fishing port. "Where am I?" asked Bob. The sailor replied,"You're at the Tengulia fishing port! Where else?" Bob took a good look around. It made total sense. He could smell it.

A picture of where Bob was taken

"Do you know where I could find some housing?" Asked Bob. The sailor replied,"Go past the forest, there's a nice big capital city over there." Bob climbed on a rock and saw something odd. Something that looked like a tower.

What is that thing?

[Schulmanator 5,787]

Hmmmmmmmmmmm.....

As Spock would say... "Fascinating"

[sc4portugal 10]

wow great work

[archesrule29 0]

Thanks for your comments everyone! I think it's about time for me to answer your

Replies

Homeandaway- I'm glad the update has been made!
Mr Ham- Glad you like the newspaper.
Cleaner475- I've got some good news for you later in this post...
Schulmanator- Intrigued is good!
Jacqulina- Thanks!
Sc4portugal- Glad to know you like it!

Now, we have somebody who well deserves to join the hall of fame. The person has shown support to my CJ greatly, thus I think that person deserves to get in. I welcome to the hall of fame...

Cleaner475!

HALL OF FAME!

There are four people in the hall of fame. Their names are:

Homeandaway
Schulmanator
Jacqulina
Cleaner475

That concludes my post, unless edited.

[Cjah 15]

Interestin idea...having a Hall of Fame...I wonder what we can expect next!

[jacqulina 162]

im in the hall of fame thanks my friend

[archesrule29 0]

Jacquilina: You're welcome!

Anyways, sorry for the lack of posts recently. I've got some good news. I've brought the news! The Critieron City news wound up running out of business due to lack of Critieron City subscribers, hence a new newspaper emerged from the dark to bring even more features to the news! It the Critieron Torch! Hope you enjoy it!

[Schulmanator 5,787]

Cool!! Torch that city! Torch that city! I mean... nice newspaper!

We want updates! We want updates! [everyone join in the chant!]

PS: Pillar? Wonder what that's about..... intriguing.....

[archesrule29 0]

Are you recommending arson?

[Schulmanator 5,787]

Nah... the newspaper.... that could be their motto!

"enlightening all...

CRITERION TORCH

we torch this city!"

I wanna see the pillar!!!

[archesrule29 0]

For your first point: Good idea!

For your second point: Can't. I'm on a computer without gmax, and even though I could make it in 10 minutes, I can't on this machine.

P.S, keep bringing the posts and I'll keep bringing the rubber duckies!

IMPORTANT UPDATE:

I'm sad to say that Critieron City willl now be a discontinued. Thank you to all supporting readers for helping keep Critieron City alive, but now it will be cast into the growing labrinth of unsuccessful and abandoned City Jounals. Critieron City may be reborn someday, but for now it is to be left alone.