Charlotte,SN

needs description and a bigger picture.Take a look at mine which is the second one

A 2nd pic after the town's growth would be nice.

Some small hints: Remove the interface by clicking that small button in the bottom left corner and do not pause the game while taking a screenshot.

Um, I'm not trying to be mean. I hope I don't offend you, but honestly, I didn't like the entry at all. See, you need a story, and you should also make bigger and more pictures. One tiny picture with no text whatsoever doesn't make a good journal. Also, you haven't even begun development. You only have zoned residential areas and made an enormously large business district. You should probably go to ST and CJ School in the Forums and seek help there. Or ask others on this site. I'm not going to rate this anything, because if I placed a 3/5 or a 4/5, I'd be lying. But you're new and I don't want to hurt your ratings so I'm just not going to rate and hope you make better entries in the future. You just need some assistance.

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Um, I'm not trying to be mean. I hope I don't offend you, but honestly, I didn't like the entry at all. See, you need a story, and you should also make bigger and more pictures. One tiny picture with no text whatsoever doesn't make a good journal. Also, you haven't even begun development. You only have zoned residential areas and made an enormously large business district. You should probably go to ST and CJ School in the Forums and seek help there. Or ask others on this site. I'm not going to rate this anything, because if I placed a 3/5 or a 4/5, I'd be lying. But you're new and I don't want to hurt your ratings so I'm just not going to rate and hope you make better entries in the future. You just need some assistance.
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dodn't be mean just go to some other Cj's and you will get the picture

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[quote name='ggamgus' timestamp='1312837656']Um, I'm not trying to be mean. I hope I don't offend you, but honestly, I didn't like the entry at all. See, you need a story, and you should also make bigger and more pictures. One tiny picture with no text whatsoever doesn't make a good journal. Also, you haven't even begun development. You only have zoned residential areas and made an enormously large business district. You should probably go to ST and CJ School in the Forums and seek help there. Or ask others on this site. I'm not going to rate this anything, because if I placed a 3/5 or a 4/5, I'd be lying. But you're new and I don't want to hurt your ratings so I'm just not going to rate and hope you make better entries in the future. You just need some assistance.[/quote]dodn't be mean just go to some other Cj's and you will get the picture
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No, I'm not being mean. I think this CJ needs assistance, and I think simfarmer89 can do better.

No, I'm not being mean. I think this CJ needs assistance, and I think simfarmer89 can do better.
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well yeah your right.it just needs a desription and some big pics

The nicely balanced downtown skyline, the highways , and the way you've created your suburbs (actually taking time instead of just using the zone tool), prove you have great potential! Let's see it in a full sized picture with some text to complement it! Good luck on your CJ!

I think this one follows the 'pictures are worth a thousand words' You have a lot of potential... You need more than 1 picture, though and you need description...

To use larger images you need to log on photo-sharing sites such as imageshack or photobucket.

043.09 out of 100.00 possible points.