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rileyskioo

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for my next city what should i do   

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Aroura is a city in westevelis holding lots of demand

NAM network asset map

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as we start off

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this is a very GREEN city

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a glimse into the suburbs

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we look at downtown

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the city is three quarters done

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now the part youve all been waiting for.......................................... the finished product

sorry for some of the zoning

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This has the feeling of being a bit rushed. There is a lot of repetition (which I totally understand not being able to completely avoid) and a lot of open space. How about some trees? Some detailing? To finish on a positive note, the transit system is interesting to look at, and it's nice to see the progression from nothing to something. Just take your time and it's obvious you can build something really great to look at!

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Things to do:
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- Download your dependecies, I see some blank and void textures
- Cut down your repetition
- Move your landfill and power plants FAR AWAY from your city. At least add it in your industrial area.
- Do some mayor mode detailing, use trees or hills. Anything with geological features looks much better than a plain, flat tile.
- Remove the UDI, and zots
- Dilapidated buildings (Really on both sides, depends how you use them. This case, not really.)

Positives
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+ A gradual development
+ Transportation system
+ Not a skyscraper jungle

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You definitely have potential, you will become a better city builder in time. Take a look around the site, tutorials or other CJs you can take inspiration from. You never stop learning. ;)

-Best of luck

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