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(Preview) Unpublished • A Thousand Words

Tonraq

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Are pictures really worth a thousand words?

And so again... ten syllables per line

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So I'm trying even harder for this,

An old town forgotten on the river,

Memories burned in hell like a sinned lamb,

But this past has passed and move on today,

We're going to the airport's inner rein...

(962 words more to go)

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@Alejandro24

--..."It is strange until some point"...

Thank you very much! I know it was strange if you put a little bit of literature, but I think it turned out good 9.gif

@gogosago

--I would like some sago (The jelly spheres you see on bubble tea)!

Thank you very much!

@NMUSpidey

--日本語が話せますか?

It is supposed to say Troix Newspaper but I just used the words 3 (三) and Shimbun.

@Benedict

--Loving the Iambic Parameter...

2 Days before I made the CJ, My teacher taught us Shakespeare's way of narration... 9.gif

@NMUSpidey

--Hehe, technically, it's "Three Newspaper".

日本語を少し話します。